SanDhir OS : A night out from FITE

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Anysia

@Anysia

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Posted: 11 years ago

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-Cascade-

@-Cascade-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

yippeee... I'm d 2nd 1 to cmmnt.
Wow di!!!! This OS ws short bt sweet nd lovely.
Oh! So dis is ur prediction abt whts gonna happen nxt. I kinda lyk dis interpretition.

When d goons came I ws really awaiting fr some fight scenes bt u hv sorted it out so easily. Gud fr d goons... D dialogues wr awesome...

Finally d rain scene. Ufff!!!! I jst can't stop imagining it. It ws mesmerizing nd angelic.
Wow! Wht a scene it must be. U hv penned down dis prt beautifully.
I really wish to see dis prt in d show... except d car horn prt.
Arrggghhh!!! Why did out of nowhere Vardhan sir hd to pop in between. He completely ruined d romantic atmosphere.
Di why did u hv to bring him in between?

Dis OS ws simply flawless nd divine. U hv done a splendid job. Hats off!!

Di plz do write more. Nxt tym I wnt a long update. I'll be eagerly waiting fr d nxt story.

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Ayesha

@Ayesha_Kreya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

dis was Gr8! 👏⭐️

randhur saves her frm dat goons!

dey all alone...n rain😳...omg...🤪..dey were so close..☺️.but car horn..😡..Huh!

ausum yr! 👏

loved it 👍🏼

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Ayesha

@Ayesha_Kreya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anysia

Hello shello Guys!!!
Whatssup ???

I know ceiling, ryt? 🤣
But its not ceiling for me 😒

Its Sky 😛 ... as am sitting in my garden with my *sorry* not mine, my Pappa 's laptop
🤣

Okay okay i know horrible PJ
am so bad at humor 😛 Never mind 🤣

Am here with an OS 😃

Ya i remember last time i had promised myself not to write anymore
But what to do? 😒 This idea popped into my mind and i couldn't stop myself from penning it down . . .

And after all, self promises are made to be broken ... isn't it ?

Tomatoes and chapels are NOT welcome 🤣 (eggs too) 🤣

Credit Ayesha < Ayesha_Kreya > my Sony . . . She is the one behind the Writer in me ...

This time also credit all my friends who read, liked and commented on my first ever writing " SanDhir OS : Dream or Reality ?!? "

Thank you so much 🤗

Hope you enjoy reading this OS too
No more talks
Happy Reading 😊 Enjoy!

Stay Blessed 😊

aww...dear 🤗 its all ur efforts!

i didnt do anything!

u r an ausum writer! 😳😳

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priyanka

@priyu03

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Sweet and lovely OS 👏

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

hi
the os really wonderful
suyu and randhir wow but u bad girl cant u let the kiss happen
but no they wont look nice bcoz mr interesting very interesting man came there naa hahaha

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Aneendita Dutta

@..Aney..

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

its fantastic!!!☺️...u'r such an awesome writer yaar🤗👏

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myriad_hues

@myriad_hues

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

soo sweet..perfect mix of drama and romance..pehli baar vardhaan par gussa aa raha tha..timing bohot kharab hai iski.. ;)

i liked the goons part..very realistic...and tree part was the best..and u are right..sandhir will only think about each other now...

write more...i'm waiting...and loved this one too.. :)

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#10

This is just so so so sweet and awesome one piece. 🤗!
I wish something like this happens in the show too.
Nice shot Anysia. Loved their stubbornness and atlast finally vardhaan! Solution of all problem.

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