SanDhir : If You Are Not The One (Completed) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..
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i just loved it..:-)
waiting for the next update...:-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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update last part na it's awesome...😎
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 5
Randhir's P.O.V.

"Why don't you accept that you love me?" Those words. I knew they were true. But I have been running away from them. Love and emotions only hurt, that's what I'd taught myself, my whole life. But now, suddenly, my heart wasn't ready to accept it. It had no other work than performing somersaults for Sanyukta! Ugh!!

"I dont get you" I smirked and said.

"You do get me" she replied, sternly.

"Kahi esa to nhi ki ye pyar vyar ka natak kar k tum chahti ho ki mae yha se tumhe bhga le chalu. Come out of your dreams, ms. engineer. Esa nhi hone waala" I winked at her.

"I want nothing from you. All I'm asking to you is. Why did you fight the goons? Why do you save me every time? Why did you kiss me? Why are you here right now? Ye pyar nhi to kya h Randhir"

"I dont know kya hai! Par pyaar nhi hai! Mujhe pyaar se allergy hai ms agarwal" I replied. To my suprise, she smiled.

"Nahi tumhe trust and emote krne se allergy hai. But I wont blame you. Anyone with a past like you would be like that" she said and shrugged. We stared at each other for a few minutes. We both had nothing to say. She spoke up finally.

"Hmm.. Chlo I've to go and meet my husband to be. You can go if you wish"

"What?!" I said, a little too loud. But she ignored me and turned towards the door. I grabbed the wrist of her left hand.

"No!" I whispered, firmly.

"Kya no baba?" She looked back and said.

"Dont leave me" I'd meant it to be a command. But it came out as a plead. I felt a lump forming in my troath.

"Rukne ki koi vajah bhi to ho na, Randhir. Tumhe to pyaar se allergy hai na. Tumhare chakkar me to mae kuwari hi reh jaungi. Koi logic nhi bnta baba. Ab leave my hand, lemme go"

"Why are you doing this to me?" I could hear the defeat in my words. "Why are you doing this to me when you already know that I love you?"

"Because I want to listen it from you" she said and smiled.

I looked into her eyes. They were filled with care, love and affection. Everything that I had always wanted in my life. Something inside me told me, that she would never hurt me. NEVER.

"Sanyu" I whispered. She nodded. All that left my mouth was

"Change me"
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Maybe you could be the light That opens up my eyes Make all my wrongs right Change me - Justin bieber
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What if I say that this isnt the last part? 😉 Maybe part 6 will be the last 😊 Thanks for reading! Love you [<3]
Edited by Ms.P.K.Tunn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A very nice update keep it up 3 half out of 5 stars
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
😃 wow one more part awesome


Bechara randhir sanyu ke jal mein phas gaya...apne aap ko bahot over smart samajta hai ...lol


Love it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
superb dear. Love the update.. Thanks for pm.. Continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Nice updates! Hope you do give a 6th part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update hope this was nt last...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all, thnku so very much for d pm...nw back to the update, it ws d perfect confession...n the best part ws, though he still dint declare his love by saying those three magical words, somehow, the words he spoke, "change me", held more impact than any other words...so, loved it gal!!😃
Edited by soumeesg - 11 years ago

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