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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 6 (This one is going to be long)
Sanyukta's P.O.V.

"Sanyu, change me" he whispered. I couldn't help but smile. I knew this Randhir. I always had. I knew he just shows this idgaf attitude but inside he's broken. And, also, that he's sick of being like this. I hugged him and whispered into his ear,

"There's no need to change my MCP. I'll just show him that every woman is not the same" I felt his cheek lifting against mine. He was smiling. I smiled, too.

"Sanyu beta! Ab aao bhi!" my mom shouted from downstairs.

Shit! We'd forgotten that below a boy was waiting to meet me.

"Randhir tum jao abhi. I have to go down. Papa ki izzat ka sawaal hai. We'll sort this out" he nodded and went towards the windows. His trademark "door" 😛

I came downstairs, my head hung low, smiling, same as papa wanted. But the reason for my smile was someone else.

"Arrey, mechanic , tum kaha chale gye the?" My groom-to-be's father asked Randhir, coming from our main door. I was confused.

"Mechanic?" My dad asked, confused. Thankfully, my brother wasnt there at the moment. Dad had told him to stay away today. He feared his anger could ruin my "rishta"

"Arrey haan, bhaisaab, vo beech raaste me humari gaadi khrb ho gyi thi to isse le k aaye" uncle said. My dad nodded.

"Tumne btaya nhi?" He asked Randhir, again.

"Arrey kuch nhi uncle" *looked at me* "aas paas ki beauty dekhne gya tha" he said and smiled. I glared, signaling him to look away.

"Acha bhaisaab ye sab chhodhiye. Aesa krte h bacho ko kuch time akele spend krne dete hai" my dad said. Uncle smiled. I saw Randhir's hands turning into fists.

"Sanyu beta, inhe apne kamre me le jao" dad said.

"Ji"



As soon as we entered my room, both of us said, together,

"Mujhe kuch kehna hai"

My eyebrows knotted. Isse kya kehna h? His reaction was the same.

"Uh, you, first" I said.

"Uh, okay. Listen, you're beautiful. You can cook and all. And seriously you're perfect. But you're not made for me. I love someone else. I know you'll be sad to hear this but I'm sorry"

I was so happy to hear this! Mae bhi bach gyi and pappa ki izzat bhi!! I hid my smile.

"Uh, okay, mae samajhti hun. Pyaar bohot hi strong emotion hai. And I fully support you. But meri ek advice hai. Please apne mom dad ko bta do varna bohot ladkiyo ka rishta tumhare saath hote hote tut jayega. Socho unki family ki izzat ka kya hoga?"

"Hmm, I guess, you're right. Thanks"

With this, we came back down again. We looked at each other,then towards our parents and said together

"Humari iss rishte k liye na hai" I saw Randhir smiling from the corner of my eye.

"Kyu? Kyu beta? Tumhe humari Sanyu pasand nhi aayi?" My dad asked.

"Nahi uncle, aesi koi baat nhi hai. Vo actually mae kisi aur se pyaar karta hun"

"Kya? To tumne hume kuch btaya kyu nhi?" Uncle asked.

"Mae dar gya tha dad, mujhe lga aap mujhe kbhi nhi smjhoge"

"aesa nhi hai beta" uncle said, then looked towards my dad "mujhe maaf kriye-"

"Aree nhi nhi bhaisaab. Aesa keh k hume apmanit mat kriye. Bacho ki galti ko maaf krna hi to bda ka kaam h" I couldnt believe that my dad said that.

The family got up to leave. When everyone was bidding their goodbyes, Randhir looked at me. I smiled. He winked at me, and mouthed the words that I'd been dying to listen from him.

"I LOVE YOU"
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And infatuated be damned. He was near to being blinded by his attraction to her. He was in love, damn it all. He disliked her, he resented her, he disapproved of almost everything about her, yet he was head over ears in love with her, like a foolish schoolboy.He wondered grimly what he was going to do about it. - Mary Balogh
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I promise 7th part will be the last. Thanks mujhe jhelne k liye 😊
Edited by Ms.P.K.Tunn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
lol dear...u say next part is last one...go one...aur hame ek ek karake naye naye part mil jayenge...

kya ladke ne hi na keh di...wow ...ab to koi baat nahi sandhir ke liye...awesome


lekin kya sanyu ke dad randhir ke saath i mean ek mechanic ke saath sanyu ka rishta kar payenge...

chalo atleast sandhir can go to college back without any distrubance

hope so we can able to see some more sandhir college moment...i m dreaming
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Nice one 3 half out of 5 stars
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome updates
waiting 4 the last part...
Edited by srividhya68 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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JUST FABULOUS!!!
UPDATE NEXT PART REAL SOON
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it was amazing...:-)
hope ll meet in another story...:-)
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Nice update... waiting for the next
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Part 7 (Last! Phew)

Sanyukta's P.O.V
It was night time. Dinner was already done. No one had dared to talk about the stupid "rishta", to my relief.

As soon as I competed my dinner, I came back to my room. I was putting my dress back into my cupboard, smiling, thinking about him.

The way he threathened me to tell everyone about our kiss. The way he held my hand to prevent me from going. The way we fell on each other. The way he said "Sanyu, change me". The way he mouthed "I love you" before leaving.

12 hours hadn't even passed since he left, and I was already missing him. 'I was definately in love!!' I thought and blushed.

"Hum tere bin ab reh nhi sakte
Tere bina kya vajoot mera
Tujhse juda agar ho jayenge to khud se hi ho jayenge juda" I hummed to myself, trying to find my night suit in my messy almirah.

"Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chen bhi
Mera dard bhi
Meri ashiqui ab tum hi ho"

I froze as I heard his voice. Hasnt he gone with the family. I turned. To my pleasure suprise, he was sitting on my window, smiling. He winked at me.

"Tum gye nhi?" I could clearly hear the happiness in my voice.

He came near me and kissed my forehead "Dil hi nhi kiya"
I blushed beetroot red.

"Aur unki gaadi ka kya?" I asked, innocently. He chuckled.
"Unki gaadi bilkul thik thi. Vo toh maene bahana mara tha to meet you. Jaate waqt I told them ki jab tak vo andar the, maene gaadi thik kr di" he winked.

I slapped his arm, playfully "Pagal!"
He smiled "Tumhare pyaar me"
I blushed.
"Ohh.. Someone knows how to blush" he teased me.
"Well someone knows how to make a girl blush" I said punching his chest softly.

"Acha ye btao. Did you miss me?" he asked, playing with a strand of my hair.
"Bilkul bhi nhi"
"Jhuth bhi nhi bolna aata" he smirked.

I pushed him and sat on my bed, opening my engineering books. He came and sit by my side.

He started tracing patterns on my back with his index finger.

I turned and asked "What are you doing?"
"Guess na baba" with this he traced an 'I love you'
"Btao kya tha ye?" He asked.
"Vahi jo tumne ab tak bola nhi" I said, ignoring his eyes which were observing my facial expressions.
"Acha? Kya nhi bola maene?" He asked, trying to act innocent.
"Hai kuch" I said.
"Mae to voh kehne k liye tayyar hun par..." He didnt complete the sentence.
"Par kya?" I asked.
"Par pehle mae vahi cheez tumse sunna chahta hoon" he winked.

An idea came up in my mind. I bit my lip, trying to hide my naughty smile.

"Ok. So I..." I started
"You...?"
"Love..."
"Haan.. Aage?"
"Machines!" I said and giggled. I lifted my hand to cover my mouth as I was laughing too loud.

But before I could do that, he grabbed my wrist and pulled me towards himself. I collided with him. He fell on the bed with me on top.

He tucked my hair behind my head and cupped my face with his right hand. Then, he started getting up, forcing me straighten up too.

I was sitting at the end side of my bed. He was bending towards me, I was bending backwards. My back touched the wall.

My heart was beating louder than a drum ever could.

He smiled and then slowly sank in. I closed my eyes.

He kissed me, softly, patiently, lovingly making the moment pause. Then he turned urgent, passion overcome his emotions. I kissed him back equally. He kissed me like it was the end of the world. Like he had been dying to do so. My reaction was the same.

Then, just to early, he pulled back. He smiled looking into my eyes. His chocolate brown eyes piercing me. Like he could see my soul. And then came the words that I'd been dying to hear.

"I LOVE YOU SANYUKTA AGARWAL. YOU GOT ME, FARZI ENGINEER, YOU GOT ME HEAD OVER HEELS FOR YOU. YOU'RE MY LIFE NOW. I HATE YOU, I HATE YOUR ATTITUDE, I HATE YOUR EGO, I HATE YOUR FEMINISM. BUT I LOVE YOU FOR THE SAME REASONS TOO. AND I'M GLAD THAT I HAVE YOU. I NEED NOTHING AND NO ONE NOW. I CAN FIGHT OFF THE WHOLE WORLD WITH ONE HAND IF YOU'RE HOLDING THE OTHER. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH, MS. AGGARWAL. WOULD YOU LIKE SPENDING THE REST OF YOUR LIFE WITH ME?"

I could just smiled through my tears and nod.
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Just a fraction of your love fills the air
And I fall in love with you, all over again
You're the light that feeds the sun in my world
I'd face a thousand years of pain for my girl
- Justin bieber
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THE END


Thank you so much guys for reading/liking/commenting. I'd never expected this amount of love, support and appreciation on my first post. I love you guys!! That was the best welcome I could ever get.

Do tell me what you think of me as a writer and your views on my story. Cuz I'm very curious. Plus, it'll help me improve.

Adios, people!
I love you! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part yar... so nice...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this story was so beautiful...i love ur writing...keep up ur good works..

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