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Tanzeela

@ganga16tr

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+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#721

Originally posted by: alja
Ufff Ganga dear u totally knocked me off my chair....
So loooong scene, its must be really interesting....

I have gone half way thru untill Bebo sees Anuragh for the first time in his cabin....

im gonna comment on this first half rite now coz ikatha mushkil ho jaye ga...

As always U impressed us with ur writing capabities...👏

The shock of Amrit' s death and Bebo's gham... aaww it made me sooo sad...

All of it sounded so real ....

And then Amrit coming in Bebo's dream was toooo cute n lovely...😊

Acha to this new guy is amrit's humshakl, yaar CVs yehi idea use kr len drama mein....

Aaaawww r poor cinderalla , she is sooo sad n is missing Amrit...

The notion of Amrit;s name plate n Ambo pics in the cabin was also sweeeettt....

Well Done Ganga !!!! 👏

Will read the other hlf soon...

awwww glad you liked it. read the other half soon. yup anurag is amrit's look alike.... glad you liked it. make sure you read the rest. everyones in for a nasty twist in bebo's life.....

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Tanzeela

@ganga16tr

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#722

looks like no one liked my scene that much... not many comments... :(

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Alja

@Ambofan

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#723

Aaaawww Ganga u have actually made me cry…😭

Mujhe lag raha tha that this anuraag is going to be our dear laadla Amrit…

The second half of the scene was soooo touching especially Ambo's conversation at the accident place and the way they reunited…

It was ultra sweet when bebo says are u not going to tell me how proud are u ? Those dialogues of bebo make me think that u definitely can be a writer… Tunhare dimmagh mein yeh puri story ayi kaisey ?

Its simply amazing… aaawww our Ambo actually reunited…😃

Lovely, wonderful and excellent !!!! 👏

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Alja

@Ambofan

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#724

Originally posted by: ganga16tr
looks like no one liked my scene that much... not many comments... :(

Ganga sweety its not only your scene, you very well know that whether its me, Afee, Riddhu or u not many people read the scenes and then even less comment...

But also know that we always love your scene...😊 So dont worry at all...😊

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s_a_m

@s_a_m

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#725

Wow! I've spent the past few weeks reading all these amazing scenes. I never knew you girls were such talented writers with brilliant ideas. Thank you Dunia, Ganga, Afreen, Winky, Alja and Riddhu for all your hard work 👏 👍🏼 🤗

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Afreen

@-Afeelicious-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#726

Originally posted by: alja
Ganga sweety its not only your scene, you very well know that whether its me, Afee, Riddhu or u not many people read the scenes and then even less comment...
But also know that we always love your scene...😊 So dont worry at all...😊

awww ganga jnu i like when u or anyone get sad
u know there r only few ppl who really follow this thread
nd whoever read the scenes they post the comments too
just like at this time me, alja, & riddhu
and for the current scene i have read more than half will finish it tonight and leave my comment
and dear don't get sad

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Alja

@Ambofan

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#727

Originally posted by: s_a_m
Wow! I've spent the past few weeks reading all these amazing scenes. I never knew you girls were such talented writers with brilliant ideas. Thank you Dunia, Ganga, Afreen, Winky, Alja and Riddhu for all your hard work 👏 👍🏼 🤗

Thanku so much Sam and i hope u will continue to read n comment...

And yes we wud luve if you too give a try to writing a scene...

😊

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Tanzeela

@ganga16tr

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#728

i understand..

thanks for reading the rest of the scene alja. glad you liked it.

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Afreen

@-Afeelicious-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#729

Originally posted by: s_a_m
Wow! I've spent the past few weeks reading all these amazing scenes. I never knew you girls were such talented writers with brilliant ideas. Thank you Dunia, Ganga, Afreen, Winky, Alja and Riddhu for all your hard work 👏 👍🏼 🤗

awww dear thanks for reading all the scenes
glad u liked them
i would love to read from u too

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Afreen

@-Afeelicious-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#730

Ganga janu first of all i am extremely sorry for reading it too late
sorry dear it took me a while to read and reply
back to the scene
OMG main kia likhoon,
i simply have no words for the scene
IT WAS AWESOME scene dear, a rocking one
really LOVED it a lottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
it was just marvelous.
and to tell u the truth, the time bebo & anurag bumped
i knew that it was amrit, no duplicate of amrit, and i was right
awww poor amrit was afraid of bebo's questions.
loved the whole concept, thanks for writing such an AMAZING scene
love u
afreen🤗

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