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Ammaa is shocked and is standing their while amrit and goldies bro are still fighting amrits sisters in law turns around and looks at amma , amma is pointing at them and amrits sister in law is in shock and she quickly goes to stop the fight and slaps her brother shes says to him im ashamed to call you my brother and starts shouting at him while shouting amma faints everyone comes running towards her amrits brother says to bebo to go and get water for amma and suman starts blaming everyone and then bebo says i think you should take her to her room and get the doctor sister in law goes to her brother and tells him to shut up and she says i told you not to go in front of amma and now god knows whats going to happen amma is tooken to her room and his resting while armit is saying maa wake up maa Amrits brother askes suman did you call the doctor and she says yeah its coming amrit says maa open your eyes maa amrit gets emotional and walks off and suman follows him and says look what you've done amrit today whatevers happening to amma is because of you and its cause of me that shes alright it was ok without you why did you have to come back thats it i dont need your fake cry and he says ok fine til amma gets better i will leave from here forever



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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks w8in egrly for d rest!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sorry thee video aint working for me
for some reason "/ part 1 worked
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very well written thank you

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