Gohem TS||YOU DESERVE THIS||last part pg12 updated - Page 9

Thanks for adding Vidya's POV though ahem became both his mother as well as father too but can't take gopi's place ever n Vidya devoid of her father's love n now her mother's too behari Vidya 😭all because of ur soo called attitude ahem babu 😡1 week pass since that day n ahem feeling guilty now tab kaha gai thi uski guilty 😡n saying wants to die too but stopped passing by Vidya's room n gopi wrote a letter for him what she wrote in letter is absolutely correct this modi family never gave her peace it's true if they have lost their daughter than what about gopi she is a mother who lost her child n know one cared that 😭yes ahem babu u totally deserve it n now u thinking that u loved n cared for her too but never Expressed it now he taking care of Vidya well 😲very emotional OS 😭

Awesome OS, loved it.

gopi's letter is so touching...each n every word was sharp enough to pierce arjun's heart.its d biggest punishment 4 ahem.but i felt gopi punished herself also.loved d sentence that ahe didnt try to take gopi's place in vidya's life but he never made her feel his absence.now he is possessive about vidya as she is d only symbol of gohem relationship.he hadready lost meera n gopi n doesnt want to lose vidya too.good that ahem is careful abt relationships now bcz of what happened .but meera is really dead in this story?sad.i thought in part2 u will show gopi alive.but no.instead u made it a realistic os😛

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wow its Awesomeee 👏 Heartouching 😭 loved it 👏

Nice OS..

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

OMG!! such a heart wrenching ending...beautifully written...but don't know , I feel sad only for the poor fate of daughter...

It's really Gopi is dead...
Hmm this is punishment for Ahem
Ahem is crying it's really sad but he deserves this...
Now Ahem feel insecure so Ahem just think Gopi handled her daughter alone no one with her that's time ...mother is mother so no one can't take that's place...
Oh now Ahem is alive just for his daughter hmm interesting...
Ps:- I just loved that's letters especially some lines like Gopi also lost her daughter not only ahem lost his daughter...it's GoHem's daughter not only Ahem's daughter...
Totally I loved this OS & if possible keep continue this...
Thanks for the pm