Gohem TS||YOU DESERVE THIS||last part pg12 updated

Superb start yaar...
but m sad too...

Gopi died??? 😲😲

no this cant happen...


not jumping to end..
starting from start...

Ahem closing himself in d room..
so himself...
pehle gussa karke dusro ko rulao..
phir akeleme khud afsos karo..
mast express kia Ana...
perfectly written...
Ahem remembering his moments with Gopi, Meera's birth, then her accident..
but he never remembers how ruthlessly he behaved with Gopi initially...(may be others dint felt it but i felt it ruthless)

Gopi remembering her days.. but she reminisces her decision of divorce for Vidya.. she thinks Vidya's heart wil break wen She wil be seperated from Vidya..
but dear Gopi if u wil be seperated from her hv u thought wat wil she go through...

Gopi decides something...
as she is going out... She sees Ahem standing...
Ahem tells abt his mistake & he regrets...
but Gopi not interested in his talks doesnt pay heed...

Gopi tells her decision...
she tells she is going...
Ahem tells he wil wait for her..
as usual...
he just doesnt do anything then waiting...
Koki dint teach Ahem all wait & no action makes Ahem worthless

Gopi goes
doesnt return back til morning...
subah ko Ahem ki bati jali
he calls Gopi...
she recvs d call but doesnt speak...
good for her...

Ahem tracks her...
but too late...
as he was nearing her, she jumps off d cliff??? 😲
kahe..
she shud hv pushed Ahem...
& no one would hv known😡😡

Ahem now crying...
Gopi wrote u deserve this..
why???

i got confused.. 😕😕
plz explain...?????

nyways.. r u going to update this..
plz it is worth an update..
specially if u r showing gopi dead then Ahem's life with Vidya 's glance shud be shown...
plz...

a request...

continue soon

thnks 4 d pm

finally aaj hi time mila & unres kar pai..
warna shayad next week hi ho pata 😆

Wow... This is to be my fav topic...

Title toh mast h

I had thought abt many possibilities on this track..

But plz tu kuch achha sa likh

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

But plz tu kuch achha sa likh

& Plz try to make it soon

Aaj hi post krdugi dont worry 😉

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Title toh mast h

But yeah kaun kisko bolega??

Wil gopi say this to ahem?

I'm also confusing about this

One of the best leap that...so I eagerly waiting for your os