Gohem TS||YOU DESERVE THIS||last part pg12 updated - Page 10

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

OMG Ana...
yeah kya tha...
r u serious..
gopi is dead...

so this is punishment for Ahem..
for never caring for Gopi & only himself...
Ahem remembering Gopi had written u deserve this...

gopi had written a letter for ahem before dying.. she knew he wil come to Vidya...
she had mentioned how lonely & hurt she was, no one to talk , share her pain...

loved d words in letter...
specially... y only all pampering for u & ur family... y not me...
i too lost my daughter...

very well written Ana👏👏

Ahem now too much alone..
he has to take care of vidya all alone just as gopi had.. but he still has his family too...
Ahem getting insecure of Vidya was nice...

poor Vidya... lost her mother...
btw u dint mention meera here..
i mean is she dead in this story???

continue sooon

thnks 4 d pm...

Originally posted by: --GOLD--

Nice OS 😊

Originally posted by: DevNafangirl

last part very touching. veryyy nice

Originally posted by: Heatsha8176

Sad ending
Ahem clinging onto her letter with his life
Full of guilt
His daughter his last reminance of gopi
N he so scared to let her go
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

Originally posted by: varala

Emotional ending 😭

His daughter is his only life line

Thanks for pm 😊

Originally posted by: Vampire2468

Thanks for adding Vidya's POV though ahem became both his mother as well as father too but can't take gopi's place ever n Vidya devoid of her father's love n now her mother's too behari Vidya 😭all because of ur soo called attitude ahem babu 😡1 week pass since that day n ahem feeling guilty now tab kaha gai thi uski guilty 😡n saying wants to die too but stopped passing by Vidya's room n gopi wrote a letter for him what she wrote in letter is absolutely correct this modi family never gave her peace it's true if they have lost their daughter than what about gopi she is a mother who lost her child n know one cared that 😭yes ahem babu u totally deserve it n now u thinking that u loved n cared for her too but never Expressed it now he taking care of Vidya well 😲very emotional OS 😭

Originally posted by: --HANISA--

lovely thx for tis Os

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

unres on pg 12

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

gopi's letter is so touching...each n every word was sharp enough to pierce arjun's heart.its d biggest punishment 4 ahem.but i felt gopi punished herself also.loved d sentence that ahe didnt try to take gopi's place in vidya's life but he never made her feel his absence.now he is possessive about vidya as she is d only symbol of gohem relationship.he hadready lost meera n gopi n doesnt want to lose vidya too.good that ahem is careful abt relationships now bcz of what happened .but meera is really dead in this story?sad.i thought in part2 u will show gopi alive.but no.instead u made it a realistic os😛

Originally posted by: DevNa_fan

wow its Awesomeee 👏 Heartouching 😭 loved it 👏