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Posted: 9 years ago
Part6
O my god Rashi slapped gopi
Poor Gopi trapped in another misunderstanding
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow wonderful update loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part7
Haaye what a beautiful update
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Love it really
Finally all are together
But feel bad for Viren
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved this update so Ahem wants to go to meet Gopi, Rashi realized tgat Viren did it for Gopi sake .Loved Ahem being so understanding, that he accepted his mistake and wanted Gopi to be with Viren but he was sad of leaving her.Viren made them understand that Gopi isn't married to him.All were happy. Gopi and Vidya cane back from paint classes. Loved Gopi and Ahem's confrontation Ahem regretted for what he has done and he told her that thier Meeru is alive and she felt sad for Radha. But Ahem told her she is in jail.loved Ahem and Vidya cute scene where Vidya gets her father.sad for Viren, Vanshika wanted her son to be happy but he is happy reuniting Gopi with her love.Awe look at Jigar and Rashi too romantic. Wow finally Tolu and Molu are back. They happy to get their new sibling and Badi ma .loved Gopi and Koki's reunion the full family together.Gopu's emotional bond with Meera and Meera happy to be with her sister, loved Rashi and Meeru bond too .Jigs and Rashi they are way too romantic. So it's Holi coming up bringing the colour of happiness and love.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Ye dooriyaan These distances Part 8

thanks a lot 4 the support gave me 4 my 1st sns ss







Credit for the Holi edits in this chapter goes to the uploaders.


Gopi sings and puts Meera-Vidya to sleep.Seeing them sleeping peacefully Ahem smiles.
Gopi's eyes are full of tears.
Ahem:What happened Gopi?
G:Ahemji...Meera was away from me for years.So I could'nt give her what usually mothers give their children.I could'nt sing lullaby for her like this.
Ahem holds her hand:Gopi...I am also upset that I could'nt do anything for Vidya for years.But now I am happy that she is with me and I can do everything for her.And I am sure that Meera will get a lot from you than she missed last 7 years.
Gopi smiles emotionally.
Ahem:I will get water and come.
Gopi:You sit here.I will bring water.
Ah:No Gopi.I will do it.
Ahem goes out.Rashi enters the room.
Gopi:Rashi ben...
Immediately Rashi bursts into tears and hugs her.
G:Rashi ben..what is this?
R:I am sorry Gopi.
G:Rashi Ben...how many times will you say sorry to me?You have already apologized to me.
Rashi:Even if I say sorry thousand times it won't be enough. I misunderstood you that you forgot Ahem jeeju and moved on with Viren.

G:Rashi ben...it's not your fault.In that circumstance anybody would have thought like you seeing us together.


R:Still how could I doubt you?Instead of trusting my sister i doubted.

Gopi wipes her tears.
G:Enough Rashi ben.Please forget it.Tomorrow is Holi.Now it's not the time to cry,but to make arrangements for Holi.
Rashi smiles:Yes Gopi and this Holi is very special because of your come back with Vidya.So we will make this Holi more colourful.
Gopi smiles:Yes.
They hug each other smiling.


Holi...

Rashi and Gopi dress up for the Holi party..
Ahem and Jigar are lost in their beauty.Jigar goes near Rashi .
Slowly he turns his face closer to Rashi's.He looks at her eyes deeply.

Sathiya yeh tune kya kiya, beliya yeh tune kya kiya Maine kiya teraa intejar, itna karo naa muje pyar

He colours her passionately.
Looking at him she takes a long breath.
Sathiya yeh tune kya kaha, beliya yeh tune kya kaha Yu naa kabhee karma intejar, maine kiya hai tumase pyar


He colours her face more and more with passionate love.
Itanee mohababt saha naa sakunga, sach mani jinda rah naa sakunga Tujhko samloo yeh meraa jimma, mai hu toh kya hai jane tamanna


She closes her eyes melting in his passionate touch.
Abb jina marana meraa janam tere hath hai Maine kaha naa sanam, abb tu mere sath hai


Jigar cups her face in his hands:I told you yesterday that I was waiting to colour you.I fulfilled my own wish.

She looks at his eyes.
Toh phir samhal, le me chala Jana kaha, aa dil me aa


RASHI:You fulfilled my wish to be first coloured by you Jigarji.
He smiles.

Sathiya yeh tune kya kiya, beliya yeh tune kya kiya


She rubs her face on his face and his face becomes colourful like hers.They smile.

Maine kiya teraa intejar, itna karo naa muje pyar


They share a romantic eye lock.

itna karo naa muje pyar(Love)



Meera Vidya wished Ahem Gopi:Happy Holi Mumma papa.


Ahem Gopi smile.
Meera:Are you both not coming with us to celebrate Holi?

Ahem:Yes sure beta.
Ahem Gopi smear colour on Vidya's and Meera's cheeks and wish themi:Happy Holi Meera Vidya.
Meera and Vidya:Happy Holi mumma papa.


Ahem gives a sweet packet to Vidya.
Ahem:Holi sweets.


Meera and Vidya:Wow!Thank you papa.



Gopi goes near Ahem and he shows his face to her.

She smiles putting colour on his face.
He smiles.

Suna suna lamha lamha meree raahe tanha tanha
Aakar mujhe tum tham lo, manjil teree dekhe rasta

They go to the compound.
All are playing with colours.

But Ahem can't take his eyes off Gopi.They share a beautiful eye lock.


Mud ke jara abb dekh lo, aisa milan phir ho na ho Sab kuchh meraa tum hee toh ho


Slowly he puts colour on her face with burning passion.

Bapanah pyar hai aaja, teraa intejar hai aaja O bapanah pyar hai aaja, teraa intejar hai aaja

She blushes.


He carries her in his arms.


Ahem-Gopi look at each other romantically.

Suna suna lamha lamha, meree raahe tanha tanha(Krishna Cottage).

Suddenly they break the eye lock hearing a voice.They look at that person.
It is Radha.They all are shocked.
Ahem makes Gopi stand down.
Kokila:How dare you come here?
Ahem:Are you not tired of troubling us?
Gopi:You snatched my happiness from me.Now what do you want Radha?
Radha cries:I am not here to trouble you all.I am here to apologize.
Kokila"Stop your drama Radha and get out.
Rashi:You can never stop this drama Radha?
Rashi's mother Urmila:I have never seen a fraud like you.
Radha cries:Please believe me.I am saying the truth.I went to Tripti's house when I was released from the jail.Tripti was staying there hiding herself from the police.But she did'nt show me any mercy.Then only she spilled out the reason for her anger towards me.She revealed that she is not Umang's bhabhi actually,but his real wife.She had considered me only as her co-wife.Till now she was faking love to me to use me against Modis.I felt betrayed.I felt guilty for spoiling Gopi ben's life listening to Tripti.I realized that actually Gopi bhabhi was trying to save me from the frauds like Umang and Tripti.But I did'nt believe her.Thus I spoiled everybody's lives including mine.
Radha cries.
Kokila:How can we believe you?
Radha:Tripti was planning to harm Gopi bhabhi coming to know that she returned to Modi Bhavan.So I informed Police about her whereabouts and Tripti got arrested.


As I wished I could my Gopi Ben's life at least once as a penalty for spoiling her life.Gopi ben..please forgive me.I promise that I will never give you any pain in future.
Gopi wept and hugged Radha.They both cried.
Gopi's parents became emotional seeing the union of their daughters without any hatred.


The music was played.

Do Me A Favor Lets Play Holi ...(Waqt).


All are dancing.Ahem-Gopi look at them.

Ahem:Shall we dance?
Gopi:Yes Ahemji..


Jigar-Rashi,Ahem-Gopi,Ahem's sister Kinjal and husband Dhawal,Chirag Hetal,Parag Kokila,Vidya-Meera-Tolu Molu and Kinjal-Dhawal's son Pappu dance together.

The End
Edited by jasminerahul - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Gohem and Raji scenes are very romantic.
They could spend time with their lost children.
Radha got to know Tripti's true colors and she realized her mistakes unlike the show. Wow.
Happy ending.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome ending sis 😃
She apologized from her sister

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm n amazing update! fab end! superbly written
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...loved it. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing end
the whole family celebrated holi

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