Ye dooriyaan These distances SS Last part-pg23

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Ye dooriyaan These distances Part 1


Though I have written one shots on Gohem and RaJi before this is my first SS on them.SNS ffs which I read recently on IF and TU inspired me to pen down this SS.Please support me.


Modis went for picnic.Gopi was advised by her mother in law Kokila not to go to the dangerous area at the picnic spot with Meera.But Gopi's sister Radha who was jealous of Gopi wanted to take revenge on her thinking that she is the one who killed her husband Umang purposefully placed Meera on the dangerous area.Gopi went there to take Meera back.Gopi took Meera in her hands.Radha followed Gopi.
She said in her mind:I won't let you have your beloved daughter Meera.

Radha put stones on her way and made Gopi fell down.While Gopi was slipping down Meera fell into the river near by.Gopi burst into tears while Ahem,Jigar and other men jumped into the river to search for Meera.
Rashi tried to console Gopi:Gopi...don't lose hope.We will get our Meeru.
Gopi:Rashi ben...

Gopi cried hugging Rashi.Rashi was in tears.
They could'nt get Meera and so everybody assumed that Meera is dead.Kokila and Ahem put the blame on Gopi.
Kokila:I had told you not to let Meera go to the dangerous area.But still you were so careless that you did'nt notice that Meera went there.
Gopi wept.
Kokila:Because of you we lost Meera.
Ahem:Because of you,I lost my Meera forever.I hate you Gopi.I don't want to see your face again.
Gopi was shattered:Ahemji...Maaji...
Ahem:Get lost Gopi.Don't come again.
G:Maaji...
Koki:I agree with Ahem.
Gopi was broken down completely.

Rashi who was Gopi's cousin as well as Ahem's cousin Jigar's wife said:No Gopi can't go.
Jigar:Bhai..don't take any hasty decision.
Ahem:Don't interfere.Gopi has lost her place in my life and heart.
Rashi:Kakiji..can you let your dearest Gopi Bahu go?
Koki:Gopi is not my dearest bahu anymore.So she can go anyewhere.
Rashi became upset.
Gopi:I am responsible for losing Meera.I deserve this.
Rashi:No Gopi.It's nothing like that.It was just an accident.

Gopi:Yes Rashi ben...Maaji and Ahemji are right.
Gopi ran out crying without being able to bear anything.

After a week...

Radha talked to Tripti whom she thinks as Umang's sister in law:Bhabhi...good that you ran out of the jail.Modis accused you of killing my Umangji and put you in jail.Now I took my revenge.I planned Meera's accident and Gopi Ben is misunderstood by everyone.She is kicked out of Modi house.

Tripti smirked:Well done Radha.
Rashi who passed by was shocked to hear it and took it's video.
She went to the drawing room weeping.
Rashi:Kakiji...Ahemji..Jigarji..Mummiji...Baa...everyone..listen.You all kicked out the innocent Gopi.Right?But the real culprit is living here happily.
Koki:Rashi..what are you trying to say?
Rashi:Kaakiji..you always stood for right things.But now you did the biggest sin and you will not be able to bear this pain.
Koki:Rashi!
Rashi:By screaming..things won't change Kakiji.Believe me.Gopi is innocent.The real culprit is someone else.I have proof.

Koki:Ok..then show us the proof.

She showed the video.All were shocked.Radha came there sweating.Kokila cried slapping Radha:Because of you I tore my Gopi bahu's heart for which Lord Krishna will never forgive me.
Ahem:Radha...because of you I lost my Gopi and Meera.You will rot in jail.
Radha was scared:Please don't call the police.Meera is alive.I will give you back.
All were shocked.
Radha:Some people had saved Meera and I had got information regarding that.So I took her and put her in the orphanage.
Ahem:Instead of informing us you put Meera in an orphanage?So cruel you are!Jail is the right place for you for torturing our Meera.

Rashi slapped her:While our Princess Meeru is living like an orphan you are leading a lavish life here.

They called Police and brought back Meera from the orphanage.They got emotional seeing Meera and kissed her a lot.
Ahem said in his mind crying:I am sorry Gopi.I did'nt understand your value.I will bring you back and apologize to you in every way.
Koki:If Gopi bahu was here she would have been so happy.But I kicked her out.
Ahem became upset:I will bring your Gopi Bahu back mom.

Everyone smiled tearfully.
Rashi:Gopi will come back.I will give her a warm welcome.
Jigar:Yes Rashi.

Ahem and Jigar searched for Gopi.But they never got her back.All were upset.



Ahem:I have decided to leave this place for abroad with Meera.
They are shocked.
Kokila:What are you saying?
Ahem:If I stay here I will get crazy.Gopi's memories will haunt me.


Jigar:But bhai...don't take hasty decisions as usual.Please don't go.

Ahem:No Jigar.I have to go.Please don't stop me.
Jigar ,Parag and Kokila are upset.
Kok:I lost my Gopi Bahu.Now you and Meera too...
Ahem:You have not lost me and Meera.We will be visiting you all once in a while.And because of us Gopi lost her family.So we don't deserve any happiness which was denied to Gopi.This is a punishment for us for kicking out Gopi.
Kok:Yes Ahem Dikra..you are right.
They all wept.
Edited by jasminerahul - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Superb start ...👏Update soon if possible for You...👍🏼 Please pm me when ever You update...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start
so gopi was blamed by Ahem n kokila n abandoned
but now they know truth
and got Mehra back
Radhu sent to jail
but they cant find Gopi
so Ahem has decided to leave with Mehra
hope he meets gopi soon n starts to make up for his mistake
she at least deserves to know her daughter is alive
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing start
poor gopi
all blamed her
rashi made everyone realize their mistake

Edited by heemasomani - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow jasmine this was so good...
its nice to read ur ss on gohem,,,
congos on ur first ss on them...

ahem & kopki blame gopi for meera's loss...
& ask her to leave the house...
gopi heartbroken leaves...
rashi overhears radha..
she confronts koki..
nice dialogues by rashi..
i so love u for this...😳😳
ahem & family got meera back...
now they go searching for gopi.. as if she would b standing outside their house & waiting for them to call her...😡😡
now ahem along with meera wants to go abroad as a punishment... very gud.. they deserve it...


is gopi there??
so karan tackker new entry in gopi's life...??

continue soon...
thnks 4 d pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Awesome Part.😊
The Whole Part was so Interesting.😊
The Pics were so Nice.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update. Gopi blamed for Meera's loss & thrown out of the house. Rashi did a good job bringing Radha's crime to light. Truth was found within one week in your FF unlike the show. Radha was sent behind the bars. Ahem decided to go abroad by taking Meera to punish himself. Hope he finds Gopi.
Edited by katrinasalman - 9 years ago
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hi congrats on the SS! thanks 4 da pm! lovely update
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nice update..
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awesomeee updatee😊😊

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