Gohem OS: New Beginnings. Part 2 page 3 Updated

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xLavenderx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

I must say u have written a wonderful os ...plz continue and thank u for this...nd just like a professional writer leaves suspense at the end with ahem's question!!!!

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Xarina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad
omg Xarii, u finally wrote something and it's sooo beautiful, i could feel gopi's despair in her tears and ahem's in his unsaid words, amazing at it!! whoaaa that last line really caught me 😲😲😲
bring it onnn... waiting for the next !!

Thank you Munni. Yeah, that last sentence is a cliffhanger to finish on 😆

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Xarina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Aanahatsharma
I must say u have written a wonderful os ...plz continue and thank u for this...nd just like a professional writer leaves suspense at the end with ahem's question!!!!

Thank you. Hope you will enjoy it further.

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kavita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

I guess Ahem is in a soup that is why he behaved with his family as if he does not know his daughters

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grao

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Beautiful Xari... Keep writing...😃

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Sunnyahem

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

I love it xarina. ... i wish saathiya was back in the days of gopi ahem sweetie romance... i really hate seeing vidya meera Pari etc... It would be awesomeof tthis was all a weird dream

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Emie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Thank you for the beautiful written
Love this
I hope gopi and ahem have more rommatik scen and their lovely daughters to have beautiful life to

Pls continnue ...