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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Dharam is so angry on Meera ...
Super - Duper Amazing ...
Awesome Update ...
Loved it...
Continue Soon...
Thanks for the PM... 😳
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Part 5

Happy reading people...but pls do comment...abt how u find it..and off course ur favorite lines and parts in it..its ur comments that motivates me to write better every time...so do share .. see ya :)

Late that night when dharam reached home...his wife welcomed in a sour mood

Priya : aagaya ghaar yaad...ek baat batao .. ..saare actors itni hi der..rukte hai yaa..aap hi hai jo pack up ke baad bhi kinhi aaur cheezon mein busy rehte hai

Dharam (bit shocked and bit angry) : Tum mujh par shaq kar rahi ho ...ki I am having an affair??

Priya : kya karu...kuch aur sochne ke layak harkate kahan hai tumhari D.S

Dharam (lets out a bitter snort) : haha...u and ur company have made me such a bitter person priya..guess wat who wud have an affair with me..??

Priya : how dare you...agar rohan na hota..toh mai ek pal nhi rukti yahan..

Dharam : rohan ki wajah se...ya mere paise ki wajah se??...tumhe tumhari shopping and kitty se toh time milta nahi..rohan ki ktni fikar hai tumhe...main sab jaanta hun...so please...and ab ek word aur maat kehna... I am going to guest room I am too tired ...

Next day , after the huge show down, when dharam reached the sets...nobody even dared to look him in the eye let alone great him, except his director

Haider : Dharam sir, aap mere sath aayiye please...aap se kuch baat karni hai...

Dharam : I know..haider sahab...wok kal... mai

Haider : No...dharam..u don't know anything...u don't know...that everybody I know asked me not to work with you because of your moodiness and temper issues...bt I believed too much in ur talent and still do...so please...mere vishwas ki izzat rakhna...don't make me regret my decision

Dharam : I promise... I wont let ur belief in me ..let down again...it wont happen again

Haider : good and thanks...mene meera ko personally phone karke apologise kia hai..wo kuch der mein pahaunchti hogi...aap bhi ek baar please usse baat kar le...

Dharam : ok...will talk to her..bt first I go and change for shoot

When dharam came out of changing room..he found gaura ji waitin for him,...he knew why she was here...and she was the only one on sets he respected the most out of seniority..hence he even cudnt avoid her

Dharam : arey.. gauraji..koi kaam tha aapko

Gaura : dharam banno mat...bohot saalon se tumhari friend hoon..isliye don't pretend...you know why I am here

Dharam : yes I know..and don't worry usse bare mein pehle hi director mujhe bohot kuch suna chukka

Gaura : main yaahan tumhe kuch sunnane nahi aayi...naahi tumhe ye bolne aayi hun...ki don't repeat that again...coz I know you wont...main yahan tumhare liye aayi hun

Dharam : mere liye..? kya matlab

Gaura : tumhe lagta hai tum aapne saath sahi kar rahe ho..? jo ek bhi dost nai hai tumhara...khud ko isolate kar lia hai sabse...na kissi se hanste ho na bolte..?? Humans are social animals dharam..we need company... I know tumhre personal problems hai bt...doesnt mean tum muskurana tak chdd doge dharam...wo ladki tumhe geneuly itna pasand karti thi..tumhare rude behaviour ke baad bhi,...she wanted to be ur friend...kyunki ek time par tum uske favourite actor the...par tumne..tumne kya kia..usse bhi dur bhaga dia...

Now dharam felt really embarrassed at himself and sorry for the girl...but ever so stubborn he tried to defend himself

Dharam : par gaura ji...aapne dekha kitni pretentious hai wo...she always pretend to be this cute girl next door...loving and caring...when I know all she is a rich spoilt brat...

Gaura : How can u assume dharam..do u know her enough?? U hate it when people judge without knowing your life..then how can u do same to her??...usse ek chance toh do dharam...iss duniya mein bohot kam log hai..jo tumhre iss moody nature ke baad bhi...tumse friendship karna chaahenge ...she was one of them...

Dharam : Fine...I wont judge her ...and typecast her...and will also try to be civil with her...is that ok now..

Guara : good boy (she pouts towards dharam , who feigns anger )...haha now go...I think uski car aagayi hai parking mein...abhi wahan oi nahi hoga...toh sorry kehne mein tumhari ego bhi hurt nahi hogi

Dharam (gets up and dramatically sigh) : ok mama

When he reached parking lot...he saw an all smiley meera...playing with some street kids...she was laughing , chirping,...and dharam felt his reaction mirroring the girls...a reaction smile lighting up his own face...boy the girl was infectious ..he thought...

...and realise he was smiling himself...a rare emotion for him...and suddenly he cudnt remember when was the last time he smiled let alone laugh...and that was the time...he realise that gaura was right...he was missing so much on life...on the other hand...the girl he thought was nothing but pretencious...was here...carefree... finding...happiness in small small things in life...

Dharam (to himself) : it is not a pretense...yahan toh koi nahi hai ...may be gaura ji is right...she is actually an affectionate person...i must apologise

Dharam's voice diverted meera's attention from kids to him... and her smile turns into a frown...she decides to walk away...when dharam's voice stops him...even in anger...she realises that it was the first time he has spoken her name...

Dharam : meera ...meera...please...just ek min meri baat suno...yesterday ..i was..in a bad mood... I really apologise

Meera : I don't need your apologises Mr. Suryavanshi...and wat about your mood...you are always in a bad mood...bt that's not my problem...you have been so rude and ignoring from day one...and I on the other hand...have gone out of a my way to make friends wit you...bt not anyloger...apko kya lagta hai..aapke kahin ke Prince hai..jo sab aapke peeche bhagte rehenge...sorry to say...ye toh meri maa ke sanskar hai..ki I try to be nice with everyone..even people lijke u...but aab aur nahi...meri bhi koi self respect hai...dekhiye...hum sirf professionals ki tarah shoot karenge,,,but as soon as take over hota hai... I would rather..ki aap mujhse baat bhi na kaare...and I guess that's what u wanted...congrats..u got it...

Dharam, for the first time in his life...listened all the shouting silently...for he knew he had done this girl wrong and was too sorry to hurl counter insults...he followed meera to main sets , where director was ready for them with shot

Haider : ok so the scene is... Dharam you recogonise meera is the burka girl...you confront her infront of everyone...and tell her father i.e you friend the truth...and then everyone is angry on her. Boycotts her and meera..you cry..hurl abuses at him and swear to make his life hell

Dharam , however..found it difficult to get annoyed with meera ..and shout at her that day and...it took 3 takes..to get the perfect shot from him...meera on the other hand..did perfect take of hurling abuses and crying as if for real ..all the three times...boy she was really angry

Dharam : arey...motta bhai...yehi hai wo burkhe wali andhi chokri...jo mujhe se takarai thi uss din...aur mera taang todke...saari bhi nako bola tha...

MR.Modi : dharam seth are u sure...ye toh meri badi beti hai..meera

Dharam : areyy...haan mota bhai...sau takka..ambey maa ki kasam...par ye aapne kaise sanskar diye hai usko...mene usse uss din ek ladke ke sath bike par jaate dekha

Meeraa: Dad...wo sirf ...mera friend tha...aap meri baat suniye..

Mr. modi : bass..meera bass...tumhara MBA ka final year hai...bajaye..apni studies and internship par dhayan dene ke..tum ye sab kar rahi ho...? Tumne mujhe bohot takleef pauchai hai meera...go to you ur room...and don't come out until I say...GO

Meera (furiously crying without glycerine): ye sabh tumhari wajah se hua...gaawar kahi ke...khud ko samjhte kya ho...mai chddogi nahi tumhe...i ll make ur life Hell

Haider: OK cut... finally perfect shot...lunch break every one...

Meera went to her car...she didn't want to talk to anyone today...everyone wd ask her abt yesterday...so she decided she wd have a lunch at some near by caf...alone...as she out her car in the reverse gear...she heard a loud cry...soon turned into painful yelps...she got out of her car and saw a wounded puppy...she picked it up to inspect injuries

Meera : omg omg...poor puppy..ye kya hogaya mujhse...aww baby tumhe zyada laggi toh nahi...

Dharam went to parking to retrieve his lunch...but saw an unsual scene of meera crying and talking to puppy..he then realised she had blood on her...his heart sank...was she injured

Dharam : meera...are u ..ok...are u hurt?? Kya hua ye..khoon?

Meera (sobbing) : no...no... I am not...but this poor fellow is...because me... I am so bad...

Dharam: then why are you crying7

Meera : what kinda of person are you...did nt u hear... I almost killed this poor pup...

Her words didn't angry dharam..instead it made him smile...an ironic ...boy the girl was too good and naive for this cruel world

Meera : are u smiling..how cud u..?

Dharam : no...no...I mean..i am sorry..its just that ur getting too worried for nothing..its a small injury..i know a great vet doctor...he ll be fine..in no time soon...but first tum ronna band karo and give me your duppatta...

As dharam tore her expensive silk dupptta to make a bandage out of her...he was half expecting her to scold him..or atleast frown at him for ruining her designer duppatta...but all she did was to continuously soothe the puppy..not even once caring for her...now blood soaked duppata

Dharam : meera sit with the puppy in my car..now that we have stopped blood...we should immediately take him to doctor...

...finally when the doc saif puppy was ok...meera took the breath of relief

Dharam : vaise aab jab tumne isko adopt karne ka soch hi liya hai...toh naam kya rakha iska

Meera : superman..?

Dharam (smiling) : langda superman??

Meera (laughing) : how mean... I ll care for u superman...in no time...u ll be able run as well as fly...vaise..i have to really thank u...mai toh bohot panic ho gayi thi

Dharam : hmm...mujhe tumse maafi chaiye ,...aur tumhe mera shukriya karna hai...toh I guess we are sQUARED off?? Are we?

Meera : ok done...? Friends

Anyother day..he would have made...fun of the girl's naivety ...but he remembered Gaura's words...and decided to shook the girl's petite hand...it felt so good...so small...so soft..in his rough broad hand...bt some how still fit perfectly ...like key to lock?

As He held her hand...Meera sudden butterflies in her stomach..was she nervous..? excited..??...both??...but why...she thought

And before Dharam cud stop himself ...words escaped his lips...

Dharam : friends forever..

He knew though..he wd regret this ...bt for once he wanted to take the risk

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Will read and get back to you 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Thanks for the update. We're not getting any Dheera scenes on SNS at the moment so reading your updates is a real treat for us all.

Loved the part when Meera arrives in the carpark and is playing with the kids. Dharams smiling and thinks "boy this girl was infectious"

Also loved the part at the end when Dharam held Meera's hand and she's getting butterflies in her stomach all of a sudden. And Dharam willing to take the risk by becoming friends with her.

Update again soon pls and thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mannz

Thanks for the update. We're not getting any Dheera scenes on SNS at the moment so reading your updates is a real treat for us all.

Loved the part when Meera arrives in the carpark and is playing with the kids. Dharams smiling and thinks "boy this girl was infectious"

Also loved the part at the end when Dharam held Meera's hand and she's getting butterflies in her stomach all of a sudden. And Dharam willing to take the risk by becoming friends with her.

Update again soon pls and thanks for the PM



Pleasure 😳 😳 ...carpark scene is my fav too...
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Originally posted by: Anondo.R

Will read and get back to you 😉



Do get back...?? 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
really awesome. specially lunch break se hospital scene tak. u write so well, so naturally i can say, that in each scene i reacted automatically as per the scene. jaise serious mood pe serious ho Jana, then 1st scene pe automatically man mein bolna k oh Priya u r so bad. then langra Superman wala scene pe hasna. I mean in written ff which is not visual waha audience ka aise reactions milna is not easy. and and in car park scene when meera scolded dharam and he realised its first time k koi usse itna kuch kaha and he said nothing, awesome tha woh scene. and I m in love with ur this ff wala D.S. ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kanu ur signature, just awww wala romantic
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Originally posted by: dheera_1


Part 5


Happy reading people...but pls do comment...abt how u find
it..and off course ur favorite lines and parts in it..its ur comments that motivates me
to write better every time...so do share
.. see ya :)


Late that night when dharam reached home...his wife welcomed
in a sour mood


Priya : aagaya ghaar yaad...ek baat batao .. ..saare actors
itni hi der..rukte hai yaa..aap hi hai jo pack up ke baad bhi kinhi aaur
cheezon mein busy rehte hai


Dharam (bit shocked and bit angry) : Tum mujh par shaq kar
rahi ho ...ki I am having an affair??


Priya : kya karu...kuch
aur sochne ke layak harkate kahan hai
tumhari D.S


Dharam (lets out a
bitter snort) : haha...u and ur company have made me such a bitter
person priya..guess wat who wud have an
affair with me..??


Priya : how dare you...agar rohan na hota..toh mai ek pal nhi rukti yahan..


Dharam : rohan ki wajah
se...ya mere paise ki wajah se??...tumhe tumhari shopping and kitty se toh
time milta nahi..rohan ki ktni fikar hai tumhe...main sab jaanta hun...so
please...and ab ek word aur maat kehna... I am going to guest room I am too tired
...



Next day , after the huge show down, when dharam reached the
sets...nobody even dared to look him in the eye let alone great him, except his
director


Haider : Dharam sir,
aap mere sath aayiye please...aap se kuch baat karni hai...


Dharam : I know..haider sahab...wok kal... mai


Haider : No...dharam..u
don't know anything...u don't know...that everybody
I know asked me not to work with you because of your moodiness and
temper issues...bt I believed too much in ur talent and still do...so please...mere
vishwas ki izzat rakhna...don't make me
regret my decision


Dharam : I promise... I wont let ur belief in me ..let down
again...it wont happen again


Haider : good and thanks...mene meera ko personally phone karke apologise kia hai..wo
kuch der mein pahaunchti hogi...aap bhi ek baar please usse baat kar le...


Dharam : ok...will talk to her..bt first I go and change for
shoot


When dharam came out of changing room..he found gaura ji
waitin for him,...he knew why she was here...and she was the only one on sets
he respected the most out of seniority..hence he even cudnt avoid her


Dharam : arey.. gauraji..koi kaam tha aapko


Gaura : dharam banno mat...bohot saalon se tumhari friend
hoon..isliye don't pretend...you know why I am here


Dharam : yes I know..and don't worry usse bare mein pehle hi
director mujhe bohot kuch suna chukka


Gaura : main yaahan tumhe kuch sunnane nahi aayi...naahi tumhe
ye bolne aayi hun...ki don't repeat that again...coz I know you wont...main yahan
tumhare liye aayi hun


Dharam : mere liye..? kya matlab


Gaura : tumhe lagta
hai tum aapne saath sahi kar rahe ho..? jo ek bhi dost nai hai tumhara...khud ko
isolate kar lia hai sabse...na kissi se hanste ho na bolte..?? Humans are social
animals dharam..we need company... I know tumhre personal problems hai bt...doesnt
mean tum muskurana tak chdd doge dharam...wo ladki tumhe geneuly itna pasand
karti thi..tumhare rude behaviour ke baad bhi,...she wanted to be ur
friend...kyunki ek time par tum uske
favourite actor the...par tumne..tumne kya kia..usse bhi dur bhaga dia...


Now dharam felt really embarrassed at himself and sorry for
the girl...but ever so stubborn he tried to defend himself


Dharam : par gaura ji...aapne dekha kitni pretentious hai
wo...she always pretend to be this cute girl next door...loving and caring...when I
know all she is a rich spoilt brat...


Gaura : How can u
assume dharam..do u know her enough?? U hate it when people judge without knowing your life..then how can u do
same to her??...usse ek chance toh do dharam...iss duniya mein bohot kam log
hai..jo tumhre iss moody nature ke baad bhi...tumse friendship karna chaahenge ...she was one of them...


Dharam : Fine...I wont judge her ...and typecast her...and will
also try to be civil with her...is that ok now..


Guara : good boy (she
pouts towards dharam , who feigns anger )...haha now go...I think uski car aagayi
hai parking mein...abhi wahan oi nahi hoga...toh sorry kehne mein tumhari ego bhi
hurt nahi hogi


Dharam (gets up and dramatically sigh) : ok mama



When he reached parking lot...he saw an all smiley
meera...playing with some street kids...she was laughing , chirping,...and dharam
felt his reaction mirroring the girls...a reaction smile lighting up his own face...boy the girl was
infectious ..he thought...


...and realise he was smiling himself...a rare emotion for him...and suddenly he cudnt
remember when was the last time he smiled let alone laugh...and that was the time...he
realise that gaura was right...he was missing so much on life...on the other
hand...the girl he thought was nothing but pretencious...was here...carefree...
finding...happiness in small small things in life...


Dharam (to himself) : it is not a pretense...yahan toh koi nahi hai ...may be gaura
ji is right...she is actually an affectionate person...i must apologise


Dharam's voice diverted meera's attention from kids to him... and her smile turns into a frown...she
decides to walk away...when dharam's voice stops him...even in anger...she realises
that it was the first time he has spoken her name...


Dharam : meera ...meera...please...just ek min meri baat
suno...yesterday ..i was..in a bad mood... I really apologise


Meera : I don't need your apologises Mr. Suryavanshi...and
wat about your mood...you are always in a bad mood...bt that's not my problem...you
have been so rude and ignoring from day one...and I on the other hand...have gone
out of a my way to make friends wit you...bt not anyloger...apko kya lagta
hai..aapke kahin ke Prince hai..jo sab aapke peeche bhagte rehenge...sorry to
say...ye toh meri maa ke sanskar hai..ki I try to be nice with everyone..even
people lijke u...but aab aur nahi...meri bhi koi self respect hai...dekhiye...hum
sirf professionals ki tarah shoot karenge,,,but as soon as take over hota hai...
I would rather..ki aap mujhse baat bhi na kaare...and I guess that's what u
wanted...congrats..u got it...


Dharam, for the first time in his life...listened all the
shouting silently...for he knew he had done this girl wrong and was too sorry
to hurl counter insults...he followed meera to main sets , where director was
ready for them with shot


Haider : ok so the
scene is...
Dharam you recogonise meera is the burka girl...you confront her
infront of everyone...and tell her father i.e you friend the truth...and then
everyone is angry on her. Boycotts her and meera..you cry..hurl abuses at him
and swear to make his life hell


Dharam , however..found it difficult to get annoyed with
meera ..and shout at her that day and...it
took 3 takes..to get the perfect
shot from him...meera on the other
hand..did perfect take of hurling abuses and crying as if for real ..all the three times...boy she was
really angry


Dharam : arey...motta bhai...yehi hai wo burkhe wali andhi chokri...jo mujhe se takarai thi uss
din...aur mera taang todke...saari bhi nako bola tha...


MR.Modi : dharam seth are u sure...ye toh meri badi beti
hai..meera


Dharam : areyy...haan
mota bhai...sau takka..ambey maa ki
kasam...par ye aapne kaise sanskar diye hai usko...mene usse uss din ek
ladke ke sath bike par jaate dekha


Meeraa: Dad...wo sirf ...mera friend tha...aap meri baat
suniye..


Mr. modi : bass..meera bass...tumhara MBA ka final year
hai...bajaye..apni studies and internship par dhayan dene ke..tum ye sab kar rahi
ho...? Tumne mujhe bohot takleef pauchai hai meera...go to you ur room...and don't
come out until I say...GO


Meera (furiously crying without
glycerine)
: ye sabh
tumhari wajah se hua...gaawar kahi ke...khud ko samjhte kya ho...mai chddogi nahi
tumhe...i ll make ur life Hell


Haider: OK cut... finally perfect shot...lunch break every
one...


Meera went to her
car...she didn't want to talk to anyone today...everyone wd ask her abt
yesterday...so she decided she wd have a lunch at some near by caf...alone...as
she out her car in the reverse gear...she heard a loud cry...soon turned into
painful yelps...she got out of her car and saw a wounded puppy...she picked it up
to inspect injuries


Meera : omg omg...poor puppy..ye kya hogaya mujhse...aww baby
tumhe zyada laggi toh nahi...



Dharam went to
parking to retrieve his lunch...but saw an
unsual scene of meera crying and talking to puppy..he then realised she had
blood on her...his heart sank...was she injured


Dharam : meera...are u ..ok...are u hurt?? Kya hua ye..khoon?


Meera (sobbing) : no...no... I am not...but this poor fellow
is...because me... I am so bad...


Dharam: then why are you crying7


Meera : what kinda of person are you...did nt u hear... I almost
killed this poor pup...


Her words didn't
angry dharam..instead it made him smile...an ironic ...boy the girl was too good
and naive for this cruel world


Meera : are u smiling..how cud u..?


Dharam : no...no...I mean..i am sorry..its just that ur getting
too worried for nothing..its a small injury..i know a great vet doctor...he ll be
fine..in no time soon...but first tum ronna band karo and give me your
duppatta...


As dharam tore her expensive silk dupptta to make a bandage
out of her...he was half expecting her to scold him..or atleast frown at him for ruining her designer
duppatta...but all she did was to continuously soothe the puppy..not even once
caring for her...now blood soaked duppata


Dharam : meera sit with the puppy in my car..now that we
have stopped blood...we should immediately take him to doctor...


...finally when the doc saif puppy was ok...meera took the
breath of relief


Dharam : vaise aab jab tumne isko adopt karne ka soch hi
liya hai...toh naam kya rakha iska


Meera : superman..?


Dharam (smiling) : langda superman??


Meera (laughing) : how mean... I ll care for u superman...in
no time...u ll be able run as well as fly...vaise..i have to really thank u...mai
toh bohot panic ho gayi thi


Dharam : hmm...mujhe tumse maafi chaiye ,...aur tumhe mera
shukriya karna hai...toh I guess we are sQUARED off?? Are we?


Meera : ok done...? Friends


Anyother day..he would have made...fun of the girl's naivety ...but
he remembered Gaura's words...and decided to shook the girl's petite hand...it
felt so good...so small...so soft..in his rough broad hand...bt some how still fit
perfectly ...like key to lock?


As He held her hand...Meera sudden butterflies in her stomach..was
she nervous..? excited..??...both??...but why...she thought


And before Dharam cud stop himself ...words escaped his lips...


Dharam : friends forever..


He knew though..he wd regret this ...bt for once he wanted to
take the risk






The story is getting better and better! I loved the way you did described his hand fitting hers
Like a lock. They are friends now...looking forward to the next part when they start to fall in love. How will the wicked wife react?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dwipanita

really awesome. specially lunch break se hospital scene tak. u write so well, so naturally i can say, that in each scene i reacted automatically as per the scene. jaise serious mood pe serious ho Jana, then 1st scene pe automatically man mein bolna k oh Priya u r so bad. then langra Superman wala scene pe hasna. I mean in written ff which is not visual waha audience ka aise reactions milna is not easy. and and in car park scene when meera scolded dharam and he realised its first time k koi usse itna kuch kaha and he said nothing, awesome tha woh scene. and I m in love with ur this ff wala D.S. ;)



Thank u...n u explain so well 😳 ...i just love reading ur comments...and trust my instinct u shd try writing to...ur able to explain n make ur points to others very efficiently...and i love this silent brooding D.S too 😳 ...same pinch...btw love say yaad aya...how is ur haider love going??...merko toh bhot yaad aa rha hai wo
😭

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