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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: dheera_1



thanks tanika😛...btw who is the couple in ur dp? they look nice

Leads of a new Pakistani drama Dillagi 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Tanika_11


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff0000">Leads of a new Pakistani drama Dillagi😃</font>



Ha wohi i thot... abt the male ...that he is paki actor. Have seen him on zindagi ...but didnt recgonise the girl
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dwipanita

its really really nice. I liked the bakad bakad wala part. its funny. overall its good. but what I liked most is rohan-dharam scene. its so cute and heart touching. I will really like to thanks you for giving this special relationship. and I will love to see rohan-meera relationship too.



Thank u dwi...n defo...there wd be meera rohan interaction in coming scenes 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

meera is trying 2 b friendly with dharam.but sadly he avoids her n is rude 2 her as he considers her only as an arrogant brat.dharam is married.priya is his wife n rohan is his 5 yr old.oh no...here also he has a wife.sad.plz give a ff where dharam is a one woman man.but here he has a terrible married life with priya.priya isnt a bechari like durga.unknowingly meera has entered his mind,thats why she appeared in his dream


Lol...i had him with a wife...bcs that is wat is forbidden abt dheera...n thats wat makes them spl...i also..i wanted to keep some similarties with the actual story line...but will defo see if i can concieve n ff where dharam is a one woman man 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dheera_1



Ha wohi i thot... abt the male ...that he is paki actor. Have seen him on zindagi ...but didnt recgonise the girl

heroine is Mehwish hayat😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it...please continue soon..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow !!!! Mind Blowing ...
Super - Duper Amazing ...
Awesome Update ...
Loved it...
Continue Soon...
Thanks for the PM... 😳 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Eagerly awaiting update. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4 :
sorry for the typos...
i was hungry cranky and sleepy :P

Note : all the scenes that the actor dharam n actress meera play wd be distinguished by italics from their actual scenes nd conversations

Dharam went to set next day in surprisingly a good mood after last night's fight...he don't know the reason behind it though...may be it was the peaceful sleep he had last night ..which was another surprise...as generally his nights wd go waste in contemplation of his life ...

Anyways he wd figure that out later...today was a crucial dharam scene..wherein he wd enter the leads house as her father's friend ...

Dharam : now where shd I park my car...there isn't any space...oh that's there..its perfect

Meera was a bit late to shoot..so she just parked her BMW infront of a rather old Logan...and ran vigorously towards the main door...

Meera : director sir .. I am ready...lets start already

Haider : ok meera...aj wo dharam ji ki tumhare father ke ghar entry wala scene...u are sneaking out of house for a party ..chupke se ..in a burkha . and at entrance ...u collide with him before he actually introduces himself to the family... And u too have a heated argument..ok?

Meera : ji sir..dnt wry I knw my lines..where is dharam sir but?

Haider : just wearing the costume..dhoti kurta...and few dehati male ornaments..u also go nd get that burkha on..ok..?

Meera : ok...I just come

As dharam makes an entry...in a white Dhoti kurta..Dapper moustache , light stubble and oh my that kohla puri chappals in his strong muscular broad feet...meera feels as if she has frozen in her place..she wd have never believed some one cud look so dashing in a dhoti kurta.. and desi look...untill now...and boy that ...moustache looked so perfect on his haughty , perpetually angry & rugged face...she knew she was staring shamelessly but she cudnt avert her eyes... the only visble feature on.her burkha clad face( for once she was thankful for the burkha on her face)

As dharam entered the main foyer...he found..a pair of eyes on himself...that...he realised was the most beautiful ever...although he knew it was meera...but now that all her face was covered with a burkha and all he could see was two dove shaped kohl black eyes...contrasting against her milky white nose portion...and it was the most beautiful view he had seen in years...

Haider : are we ready..?.ok good lets start...meera..come straight running from the main house entrance to the veranda ...dharam u stand there at the front Iron gate...ok start..

As meera starts to run...her burkha actually covers bit of her eyes ..and she stumbles for real..colliding into something so strong that she was sure she has hurt her head...when too strong arms held her in a tight grip...she then saw ...she had landed her head no where but on dharam ji's chest...

As an automatic reaction she placed her petite hand on his chest...which she had almost suspected is made of marble...had she not felt the define muscles beneath the kurta... Dharam : Ae ladki...thare maathe pe ke nathi..? (he then twists her left arm and pulls her slightly closer to him)

she craned her neck to look into his eyes...if only she was nt so short n he wasn't that tall...she forgot everything..looking in those angry angry..arrogant eyes ... as if it was her fault ...she guiltily blurted " I am sorry "

Haider : Cut cut...cut...sorry kyu kaha...kitna perfect shot tha..so natural..ehy did u say sorry...that wasn't ur line...bhool gayi kya...u had to say...ae andhe ho kya..raste mein kyu khade ho..? why in lords' name the brat meera modi wd say sorry?...

In that instant she realised he was only acting his part...oh god..and where had she got lost..true on her doubts..dharam left her to tumble n balance on her own as soon ..director said Re-take

This time however she was well prepared...and did the perfect take

After the Take , there was a short lunch break ...and dharam went back to his car to retrieve his lunch...only to find a high profile BMW parked unlawfully n carelessly infront of his car...and dharam was in flames

Dharam (shouting angrily) : Set Dada...set dada...idhar aao jaldi...ye MH : 34654...kiski hai...jaldi pata karke baato mai usko chodga nahi

Meera, who by that time had seen n heard everything, was hiding behind AD, peeps out ...says softly : dharam sir...sorry...ye car meri hai...wo ,...subh jaldi jaldi mein...actually wo ...I was late na... I am sorry mai abhi hata leti hoon

Dharam: haan ...bohot aasaan hai..pehle galtii karo n then say sorry without even meaning...kahi aur jaa kar show off karo ye tumhari BMW...and ek aur baat its not my fault that ur late...jaldi aao ya der se...don't ever park ur car...blocking the way my car...got it

Meera was now almost in tears...

AD: sir...chodd dijiye na...mai abhi isse kahi aur park kara deta hoon...aap lunch kijiye aaram se

Dharam : leave it... bhook nahi hai mujhe ab...I am in the garden area..rehaersing my lines..jab take ready ho jaye call me

Dharam leaves...casting final murderous glare at meera...and poor... meera she was so embarrassed and insulted...

poor she...everytime she goes to do something nice and genuine for others...she always end up in the negative...like today only...she had herself made choco muffins for entire unit...as sweet gesture...but got late...parked her car infront of Hitler suryavanshi...she smiled at her secret name for him...she wd not let him impact her...she goes to her car and take out the box of choco muffins...and start distributing...to everyone on her set

She goes to Gaura ji...the woman who play's Dharam's mother on the show...she and meera had become very close... in a few days only...there's were instan bonding...infact she was such a nice person...that high and mighty dharam suryavanshi wud only talk to her on sets

Meera(handing cup cake to her) : gaura ji...aapko kya lagta hai...mene dharam ji ko bhot gussa kar diya kya...unhone meri wajah se lunch bhi nahi kia

Gaura : arey beta...u don't take tension..tera itna bhi bada fault nahi tha...mai dharam ko bhot time se jaanti hoon...wo aisa hi hai...thoda gussa jaldi aata hai...baat kaam karta hai...apr dil ka bahot saaf hai...dekhna abhi theek ho jayega...toh apne aap terko sorry bhi bolega...nd khhana bhi kha lega

Meera : sorry aur wo...kabhi nahi...wo hitler suryavanshi..kissko sorry bol sakta hai..? I don't think so...still mai toh uski jaise nahi hoon na..issi liye I am gonna offer him this muffin..as a peace offering..but this would be my last attempt to try ...

From the distance...Dharam was watching meera from the corner of his eye...

Dharam : what a show off she is...har time logon ki good books mein aane ke liye pretend karti rehti hai..god knows iski problem kya hai..why cant be she be she her natural self..? why does she always have to be goodie goodie to everyone...but why am I watching her...dharam..read ur lines Man...

After a few minutes...when dharam was engrossed in his lines..he feels a tap at back

Meera : Dharam sir...?...i am really sorry for today...aap ye muffin khaiye aur job hi hua usse bhool jaaiye...dekhiye..on the contrary to what people think...i am not a spoilt brat...infact...aap muhe jaanege na,,toh aapko pata chalega...we can be good friends

Dharam : no thanks...mera kuch khaane ka mod nahi hai

Meera : areyy..aise kaise...mai na aapko aapne haathon se taste karati hoon..

She forces the muffin towards dharam's mouth...and that's when dharam's patience gets over..he screems at her in voice that can be heard in over 1 km of radius

Dharam : bas stop this naatak of urs...ye log ki good books mein aa sakti ho tum meri nahi...mujhe koi interest nahi tumhe jaane mein ya tumse friendship karne main... friendship karni hai na tumhe toh aapne age wale logon ke sath karo...i only come here to work...and for tht I need space and peace...toh next time stay away from me

Meera was now sobbing hard ...and was literally in tears...she just ran to her car...opened the damn door ...went for her home

Gaura , meanwhile , was observing all this...she felt really bad for the poor kid...she and dharam were friends..and she knew that he can be rude at times...as so much was going wrong in his personal and professional life...but still this is no way...she have to talk to him...and she will...she cant let him repeat...his past anger management mistakes again...!!


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dheera_1

Part 4 :
sorry for the typos...
i was hungry cranky and sleepy :P


Note : all the scenes
that the actor dharam n actress meera play wd be distinguished by italics from their actual scenes nd conversations


Dharam went to set next day in surprisingly a good mood after last night's fight...he don't
know the reason behind it though...may be it was the peaceful sleep he had last
night ..which was another surprise...as generally his nights wd go waste in contemplation
of his life ...


Anyways he wd figure that out later...today was a crucial
dharam scene..wherein he wd enter the leads house as her father's friend ...


Dharam : now where
shd I park my car...there isn't any space...oh that's there..its perfect


Meera was a bit late to shoot..so she just parked her BMW
infront of a rather old Logan...and ran vigorously towards the main door...


Meera : director sir .. I am ready...lets start already


Haider : ok meera...aj wo dharam ji ki tumhare father ke ghar
entry wala scene...u are sneaking out of house for a party ..chupke se ..in a
burkha . and at entrance ...u collide with him before he actually introduces
himself to the family... And u too have a heated argument..ok?


Meera : ji sir..dnt wry I knw my lines..where is dharam sir
but?


Haider : just wearing the costume..dhoti kurta...and few dehati
male ornaments..u also go nd get that burkha on..ok..?


Meera : ok...I just come


As dharam makes an entry...in a white Dhoti kurta..Dapper
moustache , light stubble and oh my that kohla puri chappals in his strong
muscular broad feet...meera feels as if she has frozen in her place..she wd have
never believed some one cud look so dashing in a dhoti kurta.. and desi
look...untill now...and boy that ...moustache looked so perfect on his haughty ,
perpetually angry & rugged
face...she knew she was staring shamelessly but she cudnt avert her eyes... the
only visble feature on.her burkha clad
face( for once she was thankful for the burkha on her face)


As dharam entered the main foyer...he found..a pair of eyes
on himself...that...he realised was the most beautiful ever...although he knew it
was meera...but now that all her face was covered with a burkha and all he could
see was two dove shaped kohl black eyes...contrasting against her milky white
nose portion...and it was the most beautiful view he had seen in years...


Haider : are we ready..?.ok
good lets start...meera..come straight running from the main house
entrance to the veranda ...dharam u stand there at the front Iron gate...ok
start..


As meera starts to run...her burkha actually covers bit of her
eyes ..and she stumbles for real..colliding into something so strong that she
was sure she has hurt her head...when too strong arms held her in a tight
grip...she then saw ...she had landed her head no where but on dharam ji's
chest...


As an automatic reaction she placed her petite hand on his
chest...which she had almost suspected is made of marble...had she not felt the
define muscles beneath the kurta...
Dharam : Ae ladki...thare maathe pe ke
nathi..? (he then twists her left arm and pulls her slightly closer to him)


she craned her neck to look into his eyes...if only she was
nt so short n he wasn't that tall...she forgot everything..looking in those angry
angry..arrogant eyes ... as if it was her fault ...she guiltily blurted " I am sorry "


Haider : Cut cut...cut...sorry kyu kaha...kitna perfect shot
tha..so natural..ehy did u say sorry...that wasn't ur line...bhool gayi kya...u
had to say...ae andhe ho kya..raste mein kyu khade ho..? why in lords' name the
brat meera modi wd say sorry?...


In that instant she realised he was only acting his
part...oh god..and where had she got lost..true on her doubts..dharam left her
to tumble n balance on her own as soon ..director said Re-take


This time however she was well prepared...and did the perfect
take


After the Take , there was a short lunch break ...and dharam
went back to his car to retrieve his lunch...only to find a high profile BMW
parked unlawfully n carelessly infront of his car...and dharam was in flames


Dharam (shouting angrily) : Set Dada...set dada...idhar aao
jaldi...ye MH : 34654...kiski hai...jaldi pata karke baato mai usko chodga nahi


Meera, who by that time had seen n heard everything, was hiding
behind AD, peeps out ...says softly : dharam sir...sorry...ye car meri hai...wo ,...subh
jaldi jaldi mein...actually wo ...I was late na... I am sorry mai abhi hata leti
hoon


Dharam: haan ...bohot aasaan hai..pehle galtii karo n then say
sorry without even meaning...kahi aur jaa kar show off karo ye tumhari BMW...and ek aur baat its not
my fault that ur late...jaldi aao ya der se...don't ever park ur car...blocking the way
my car...got it


Meera was now almost in tears...


AD: sir...chodd dijiye na...mai abhi isse kahi aur park kara
deta hoon...aap lunch kijiye aaram se


Dharam : leave it... bhook nahi hai mujhe ab...I am in the
garden area..rehaersing my lines..jab take ready ho jaye call me


Dharam leaves...casting final murderous glare at meera...and
poor... meera she was so embarrassed and insulted...


poor she...everytime she goes to do something nice and genuine
for others...she always end up in the negative...like today only...she had herself made choco muffins for entire unit...as
sweet gesture...but got late...parked her car infront of Hitler suryavanshi...she
smiled at her secret name for him...she wd not let him impact her...she goes to
her car and take out the box of choco muffins...and start distributing...to
everyone on her set


She goes to Gaura ji...the woman who play's Dharam's mother on
the show...she and meera had become very close... in a few days only...there's were
instan bonding...infact she was such a nice person...that high and mighty dharam
suryavanshi wud only talk to her on sets


Meera(handing cup cake to her) : gaura ji...aapko kya lagta
hai...mene dharam ji ko bhot gussa kar diya kya...unhone meri wajah se lunch bhi
nahi kia


Gaura : arey beta...u don't take tension..tera itna bhi bada
fault nahi tha...mai dharam ko bhot time se jaanti hoon...wo aisa hi hai...thoda
gussa jaldi aata hai...baat kaam karta hai...apr dil ka bahot saaf hai...dekhna abhi
theek ho jayega...toh apne aap terko sorry bhi bolega...nd khhana bhi kha lega


Meera : sorry aur wo...kabhi nahi...wo hitler
suryavanshi..kissko sorry bol sakta hai..? I don't think so...still mai toh uski
jaise nahi hoon na..issi liye I am gonna
offer him this muffin..as a peace offering..but this would be my last attempt
to try ...


From the distance...Dharam was watching meera from the corner
of his eye...


Dharam : what a show off she is...har time logon ki good
books mein aane ke liye pretend karti rehti hai..god knows iski problem kya
hai..why cant be she be she her natural self..? why does she always have to be
goodie goodie to everyone...but why am I watching her...dharam..read ur lines Man...


After a few minutes...when dharam was engrossed in his
lines..he feels a tap at back


Meera : Dharam sir...?...i am really sorry for today...aap ye
muffin khaiye aur job hi hua usse bhool jaaiye...dekhiye..on the contrary to what
people think...i am not a spoilt brat...infact...aap
muhe jaanege na,,toh aapko pata chalega...we can be good friends


Dharam : no thanks...mera
kuch khaane ka mod nahi hai


Meera : areyy..aise kaise...mai na aapko aapne haathon se
taste karati hoon..


She forces the muffin towards dharam's mouth...and that's when
dharam's patience gets over..he screems at her in voice that can be heard in
over 1 km of radius


Dharam : bas stop this naatak of urs...ye log ki good books
mein aa sakti ho tum meri nahi...mujhe koi interest nahi tumhe jaane mein ya
tumse friendship karne main... friendship karni hai na tumhe toh aapne age wale
logon ke sath karo...i only come here
to work...and for tht I need space and peace...toh next time stay away from me


Meera was now sobbing
hard ...and was literally in tears...she just ran to her car...opened the damn door
...went for her home


Gaura , meanwhile , was observing all this...she felt really
bad for the poor kid...she and dharam were friends..and she knew that he can be
rude at times...as so much was going wrong in his personal and professional life...but
still this is no way...she have to talk
to him...and she will...she cant let him
repeat...his past anger management mistakes again...!!






Wow I love the way you made the burka scene similar to when they first met in the show! Love the way they are attracted to each other but Dharam is too stubborn. You got Gaura involved too which is great cos I love Gaura! Thank you. The story is addictive!

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