Saathya SS: Bandhan **Completed**

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Hi guys, this is my first story in this forum. I mainly write on Arakshi (Arjun-Sakshi) from Har Yug Main Ayega ek Arjun. I am not much into Saathiya but really admire the jodi of Gopi and Ahem. But after watching past few episoded I got really angry. So, I am writing this one. This story is focused on Vidhya. And after the prologue I am going to give a leap of 14 yrs. One more thing meri hindi mein thodi si gadbadi ahi. Likhne jao toh aur problem ho jati hai. Plz samajhke pad lena. Here u go...

PROLOGUE:

Vidhya was sitting in her room. She was really happy. After a long waiting she got her father and family back. All this happened for Tolu, Molu, Prateek and Masi. Without their help she couldn't have done it. She wanted to share her happiness with her mother but she didn't came. She was busy in packing. After finished she will came here and they will be living happily. Her thought interrupted by a slight knock on her shoulder. She turned and spotted Tolu. She was about to open her mouth but Tolu put a finger in her lips and signaled her to keep quite. He took hold of her hand and drag her out of her room. Downstairs everybody was standing with a grim face.

Kokila: Aajke baad Gopi Vahu Vidhya se milneki koushish bhi nehi karegi. Main Ahem ke iss faisle se puri tarah se saimat hoom.

Everybody stood there open mouthed. Only Rashi dared to speak.

Rashi: But Kaki ji.

Kokila raised her hand to shut her up.

Kokila: Baas. Aab ek shabd aur nehi. Yehi hamara akhri faisla hai.

Vidhya couldn't believe her ears. All this years she yearned to meet her family. It's all her fault. She was the one who insisted over and over again to meet her Papa. And what she got? They separated her from her own mother!! Her eyes welled up. Before Tolu could stop her she sprinted out from there. Avoiding everybody's eyes she got out from the house in search of her mother. As she was new to Rajkot Nagar she lost her way. Call it fate or what after running aimlessly she collided with Gopi who was standing there in search of auto. She became shocked to see Vidhya there.

Gopi: Vidhya!! Aap yaha kya kar rahi ho?

Vidhya: I am sorry mamma. Yeh saab mere wajah se hua. Aab aur nehi main aapke saath ja rahi hoom. Wohlog bohot bure hai.

Gopi: Nehi Vidhya. Aisa nehi kehte.

Gopi took Vidhya's hand in her own hand.

Gopi: Aap meri acchi bacchi hai na? Promise karo mujhse ki tum kabhi bhi uss gharse dubara nehi bhagogi. Wohlog tumhare aapne hai. Promise karo mujhse Vidhya. Yeh bhi promise karo ki aap mere sikhye hue sanskaro ko kabhi nehi bhulogi.

Vidhya nodded and wiped out her tears.

Vidhya: I promise mamma.

Gopi hugged Vidhya for the last time. She took her to Modi Bhaban. She didn't enter but send Vidhya inside. Gopi wiped out her own tears and went from there.

Vidhya enter the Modi Bhaban but there were lots of difference between the Vidhya who first entered with her family and who entered now without her mother.

Guys plz hit the like button and let me know ur views. Should I continue it or not..


Index-

Chapter 1- Page 1 Chapter 5- Page 14

Character Play- Page 2 Chapter 6- Page 15

Chapter 2- Page 3 Chapter 7- Page 16

Important Note (Must Read)- Page 8 Chapter 8- Page 18

Chapter 3- Page 12 Chapter 9- Page 19

Chapter 4- Page 13 Last Chapter- Page 21


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start...looking forward to read it 😳😛
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Awesome one...👏 plz continue...😳
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beautiful start
feel sorry for both Gopi & Vidya
I hope Gopi meets her lost daughter Meera/ Gauri
Atleast Gopi can have Meera/Gauri na, or she can adopted Gauri without knowing she is her daughter
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i hope in ur ss vidya teaches a lesson to koki and tries to knock some sense in ahem's minute brain
lovely start
plz continue i wanna read abt ahem
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i have been watching sns for a quite a long time now but am new to this forum.. a big thank u to u for starting this ss. the prologue itself is so superb fantastic, can't wait for the updates.. pls continue it and update soon..
Edited by Pinkjali - 11 years ago
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Awesome ...waiting for next 😊
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GUYS AS I AM GOING TO GIVE A BIG LEAP FRO UR BETTER IMAGINATION I AM GIVING THE NAME OF THE ACTORS AND ACTRESSES WHO ARE GOING TO PLAY WHICH CHARACTER..

PS- I AM GIVING THE ROLE OF VIDHYA TO SHRITAMA MUJHARJEE AS I REALLY LIKE HER AND IN MY SS VIDHYA IS GOING TO BE A LITTLE DIFFERENT. SHE FELT BETRAYED. THAT'S WHY SHE CHOOSE THIS AVATAR. AUR PHIR RADHA KO BHI TOH MAJHA CHAKHANA HAI..

CHARACTER PLAY:

1.VIDHYA AHEM MODI- SHRITAMA MUKHARJEE AKA JAYNANDINI FROM DEKHA EK KHWAB

2.TOLU MODI- HARSHAD CHOPRA AKA PREM JUNEJA FROM KIS DES MEIN HAI MERA DIL

3.MOLU MODI- ASHISH KAPOOR AKA UDAYVEER FROM DEKHA EK KHWAB

4.PRATEEK SHAH- RAFI MALIK AKA RAJVEER FROM DESH KI BETI NANDINI

5.MEERA MODI- FENIL UMRIGAR AKA PIHU KAPOOR FROM BADE ACCHE LAGTE HAI

Another thing tolu molu perfect name for kids but as they grow up it became a little different. So, I am gonna give them another name with previous one.

Tolu Modi- Tejas Modi

Molu Modi- Ashish Modi

Sorry guys plz don't be offend. It's just my point of view...

U will get the first chapter in 2-3 hours..

And thanks a ton for ur support..

Edited by EashaYousufzai - 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 1:

Vidhya was observing the changes of nature as she sat in the bench of a park. Children's were playing. Some couples were walking hand in hand. Some women were gossiping among themselves. All the leafs had fallen. New leafs were peeping in. Birds were chirping. Gentle breez were blowing. Evening light added the beauty in nature. She was wearing a blood red anarkali with churidar. Matching jwelery and both hands full of matching red bangles. It was a gift from Rashi. She called her choti ma. Today was her birthday. She grimaced at the very thought of it. Birthday was a thing she didn't celebrate in years. She pulled out a small flower pendent from her neck. It was a gift from her mother. She gave her in her 6th birthday. It was her last birthday she celebrated with her mother. Thinking of her bring unshed tears in her eyes. But she quickly composed herself. No, she won't cry. Not untill she bring her mother back in her life. Suddenly her phone started ringing. She picked up the phone and checked the caller ID. It was choti ma. Thinking of Rashi bring a small smile in her lips.

Vidhya: Ha choti ma.

Rashi: Kaha hai tu? Dupahar ko lunch karke nikal gyi aab sham hone ko hai. Aur tune apni car bhi nehi li.

Vidhya: Choti ma main park mein hoom. Thodi der baad aa javungi.

Rashi: Nehi. Abhi aa. Kuch jaroori kaam hai. Bye.

Vidhya just shook her head. Choti maa can be really persuasive. She got up and started walking towards modi bhaban. She knew why choti ma called her. And she hated to disappoint her. But she had no other choise.

When she enterd the house she noticed whole house sank in darkness. As she took few steps whole house burst into light and everybody screamed together.

"HAPPY BIRTHDAY VIDHYA"

Everybody was present there. Her two dada, two dadi, badi dadi, dad, chote kaka, Kinjal bua, Dhaval phupa, choti ma, nana, nani, Urmila nani, Tejas, Ashish and Prateek.

Vidhya's mind screamed in rage. Her mother served the family selflessly for years. She always worked on other member's wish instead her own. And when the time came they through her away. And others just kept watching. They even didn't think that how that small child would survive without her mother. Only people she trusted in this world were choti ma, Urmila nani and her cousins. Her hands balled into fists. She ordered herself to control her rage. If she vented out all her rage will be out and she will feel peace. But she didn't want to feel peace. That was only her anger and rage which kept her focused. When she felt herself calm enough to talk she put on her poker face. Masking every emotion that was playing in her mind. She spoke up in a formal emotionless tone.

Vidhya: Thank you. But it was not needed. Birthday har kisi ke zindegi mein ate hai. Issme celebrate karne wali kounsi baat hai?

Kokila: Par tum hamari payari gudya ho. Haam bohot khush hai tumhare ane se. Isslye haam iss dinko vishesh roop se manana chahte hai.

Vidhya: Thank you dadi.

She turned to Rashi and changed her tone formal to soft.

Vidhya: Choti ma main apne kamre mein ja rahi hoom. Aap nandini behen se kehkar mere kamre mein ek cup coffee bhejwa dijiyega.

Sayung that she sprinted towards her room without a second glance.

Urmila's heart wrench at this. She may not like Gopi that much but she never wanted this fate for her. For some unknown reason she always felt a strange pull towards Vidhya.

Everybody's eyes welled up. It's been 14yrs they brought Vidhya home. After that they thought it will be difficult to keep her away from Gopi. But not once she asked about her and not once she cried. At first they were happy but their happiness was short lived. Vidhya never accept them as family. She always keep a formal distance with everyone except the kids, Rashi ann for some weird reason Urmila. They didn't understand. Everybody tried to break the icy wall she made around herself but failed. Not even Ahem could go close to her. To them she was a closed book. A mystery.

In room Vidhya sat in her bed reading a book. She decorated her room with her own hand. Light pink wall with white chiffon curtains. A king size bed in the middle of the room. White and pink shed bedsheet was on them. Side of the bed a bedside table with a white lamp. Other side of the bed a big reading table with books both academic and fiction. A laptop with lid open. There was a giant white wardrobe filled with colorfull designer suits and saree in the corner of the room. Other corner situated a white dressing table full of branded cosmetics and boxes full of jwelery. Just the opposote side of the bed stood a LCD tv with complete cinema system. Beside a modern stereo system with soundbox. White based carpet. Room had a air freshner which spread flower fragnance in whole room. Suddenly she heard a faint knock.

Vidhya: Please come in.

Rashi along with Tejas, Ashish, Prateek and Urmila came inside.


Guys this part ends here. Leave ur precious comment and let me know if u like it or not..

Edited by EashaYousufzai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was just mindblowing.. u executed vidhya character very nicely.. but it was so short update, itne chotese mera kya hoga..? u write everything quite flawlessly.. pls update soon and if possible a bigger one with the news of gopi..

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