SS:I will protect you~note pg 22| aug 28 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey lovely update Madhu.. Very nyc 😳
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Great start... hope Ahem learn who order the necklace... soon
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thank you very much nilani!😊
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Originally posted by: dipsy80

brilliant update Madhu! 👏..waiting for the next one!

Thanks for the PM! 😊



hey deepa! thanks a lot!
updating now! 😊
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Originally posted by: Xarina

Sorry for being late ☺️ can't stomach SNS at the moment. But love your ff. at least you are attending to loose ends. Well done.



hey xar! its okay! i understand! sns is showing crap these days and i hate cvs for leaving all the gohem moments!
thanks for the comment..glad you liked it!
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Originally posted by: -GiNa-

Hey lovely update Madhu.. Very nyc 😳



thank you very much sherry!😃
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Originally posted by: MistiofMistz

Great start... hope Ahem learn who order the necklace... soon



thank you very much...thanks for likin it!😊
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Originally posted by: cvdprasad

Wonderfull update..

Please update soon




thank you very much
updating now! 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb start and a great past one Madhu.

Looking forward to the next part.
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Hello all..i am back with the update! I am very sorry for the late update..got a bit busy and also needed sometime to get things right! Here is the part 2 but before that i would like to say, in this SS i would surely show gopi strong and not as rashi's slave but may be like Mrs. Gopi Ahem Modi..

Here goes part 2

Part 2

Ahem was not completely shocked my Gopi's revelation yet he wanted to know what exactly happened. He asked Gopi," Gopi can you tell me what exactly happened on that day?" Gopi was hesitant, she said,"Its okay ahemji,don't bother about it please." Ahem was adamant to know, so he forced her and she revealed how kinjal told her that ahem had ordered the necklace for her and she wore it. By the end,both ahem and gopi had tears. Ahem as he was guilty and gopi for remembering those painful memories. Ahem hugged gopi tightly and was speaking,"Gopi I am very sorry. I was such an idiot. I am so sorry. You were a sweetheart from the beginning I can't believe how did I hurt you! I am so sorry gopi..please mujhe maaf karo na…" Gopi spoke "See ahemji this is the reason why I didn't want to tell you. I know you will be hurt. And one more thing,what has happened has happened, It was not there in our hands, I know how much you love me now. And I am more than happy for that" Ahem realized gopi was speaking the truth but he knew he had to make up for it! And he would bring the world to her feet. Gopi knew ahem was feeling very bad so she started to speak," Ahemji will you bring jalebi for me tomorrow?" Ahem was startled," Jalebi! Ha sure! But why all of a sudden?" Gopi had her million dollar smile and said,"Ahemji mamaji used to take me out secretly and buy for me,I used to love them. Tomorrow please bring for me na please!" Ahem was surprised,"Gopi,why secretly?" Gopi was lost and was speaking,"Ahemji,mamiji never liked me,so she never allowed me to have sweets like rashiben did,thye used to do so many things in my childhood,they used to beat me so mamaji whenever he could,he used to take me out. Even after marriage they did so many things so that you hate me but gods plans were different for me and I got true love from you." Ahem was shocked at this revelation! He knew rashi was bad but he didn't knew the extent. So he let of it,thinking that he shouldn't ruin her mood,so he spoke," Gopi leave all that come get ready we are going out now" Gopi was startled,"Ahemji now! No,its already 11 o'clock please we will go tomorrow!" but ahem was in no mood to listen to her. He made her stand up and said,"chalo gopi lets go now!" Gopi didn't have any option so she accepted,but asked" ahemji meera?" Ahem spoke" arey meera is sleeping,we will come back soon chalo"

Ahem and gopi were going downstairs,they found rashi and urmila sitting on the sofa. ahem forgot his keys in the room so he said,"Gopi you go down,I will get the keys" ahem took they keys and was coming downstairs when he heard rashi yelling at gopi,"gopi what are you doing here now?" Gopi smiled and said,"Rashiben,ahemji is taking me out so I came what happened!" urmila was shocked,he knew gopi ahem were close but she didn't have an idea of how much! So she spoke" arey wah gopi,now that you have your husband you forgot your sister. Even we are tired chalo even we will come with you! Gawar kahike" Ahem was stunned by her behavior and immediately came to her,"Mamiji I hope you have no problem,as I am asking you to stay at home as I want to go with gopi ALONE! And to take my wife out I don't need anybodys permission! SO come gopi"

Gopi felt very happy that someone defended her against her mamiji and was even more glad that it was none other than her beloved ahemji. Urmila and rashi were shocked and mad at the same time! That gawar I wont leave her,thought urmila

Ahem made gopi comfortable in the seat,tied the seat belt and drove thecar. He stopped it near the famous sweet shop and brought a box of jalebis for her. At that moment,when he saw the look on gopi's face he decided no matter what he would keep her happy. Gopi had one of her rarest smiles and she started to eat jalebis. Ahem took one and fed her and she blushed. They went for a long drive eating jalebis and returned home,only to find rashi yelling at meera and the whole family just witnessing the situation. Rashi saw gopi near the door and pulled her inside and held her hand so tightly and shouted,"Aah maharani,kya apke date hogaya? How are you so irresponsible gopi? Meera was crying and she came to my room because of her my kids woke up and started crying,she is not letting anyone sleep! What the hell is this? If you were so interested in going out,you should have taken meera. She is always around my sons. Ek baat yaad rakho,she is only cousin for them! I will not let her rule over them,samjhi tu!"

"Rashi bas!" Ahem shouted,listening to ahem meera ran to him and hugged him,he lifted her into his arms and said,"How dare you speak like that with my wife and my daughter! What the hell do you mean by cousin and rubbish! I will not let you hurt my daughter or wife. Arey she is a kid too and she cried,how dare you yell at her!"

Kokila interfered,"Ahem dikra,stop it. I know rashi is wrong…."

Ahem-"No mom,you don't interfere! This is about me and my daughter and wife. When we were not there rashi was yelling at my daughter and what were you all doing?"

Kokila and the family knew ahem was right. And ahem knew there is no pint in arguing with the family so he turned towards rashi,"people like you who are so selfish don't know the value of family and cousins. If you weren't jigars wife I think I would have killed you by now. Next time you come close to my wife or daughter I wont spare you or your mother! Samjhi tum!"

Rashi and urmila were dead scared. Meera showed the bruise on her hand she had because of rashi,she started to cry and say,"maasi…" ahem understood that it was rashi's doing and he shouted,"I am ashamed of you rashi! Chi! You manhandled a kid! I am warning,next time you even touch her I am not going to spare you! Gopi come to our room"

Gopi ahem and meera left. Jigar gave rashi displeased look and everyone else left. Urmila was fuming with anger,how dare that ahem speak like that! I will make sure he pays,and that gopi and meera I will make sure they have no home! Rashi wanted the same so she spoke,"ha mummu we have to do something! That gawar,is now ruling on me! Wait ill show her place!

Precap: Rashi tells jigar to make sure baa gives the modi office land and other documents to her sons,as sons would be the heir of their business!



how is it friends? Hope its not bring..thanks for reading it..please leave your likes and comments!

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