SS:I will protect you~note pg 22| aug 28

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Hello guys,its quite a long time since I have written something on Saath Nibhana Saathiya. I have a little free time now so I thought of writing something!


so here is the prologue for it..

Rashi and Urmila in Raji bedroom
Rashi speaks,"Mummy,voh gawar you know what she got a diamond necklace as a gift from Ahem Jiju"
Urmila speaks.."Kya! "
Rashi says,"Ha mummy voh bhi its 1 lakh rupees"
Urmila says,"Voh gawar! uff! Its high time we do something so that we gain access to the Modi Empire"
Rashi-"Ha mummy,voh bhi,despite me having two male kids that gopi is getting everything! We have to do something soon"
Urmila-"Ha rashi dikra,i wish we never stopped our plans of breaking that gawar's marriage. We wouldnt have seen this day!"
Rashi-"Ha mummy,jiju bhi na,woh ek gawar se itna pyaar kyun kar raha hai?"

So the story starts with Gopi Ahem with Meera 2 years old and Rashi twin boys of 1 year old!

How is it?

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awesome start Madhu! 👏👏👏..only I wish it wasnt so short! 😆...we arent getting any gohem moments in SNS (the CVs have forgotten they are the lead pair 🤢)...nor is there any character development in the drama that they show (neither Rashi nor Gopi changed in the last 3 years 😭)...I am sure you will do much much better than the CVs! 😃
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Originally posted by: dipsy80

awesome start Madhu! 👏👏👏..only I wish it wasnt so short! 😆...we arent getting any gohem moments in SNS (the CVs have forgotten they are the lead pair 🤢)...nor is there any character development in the drama that they show (neither Rashi nor Gopi changed in the last 3 years 😭)...I am sure you will do much much better than the CVs! 😃



deepa!!! 🤗thanks a ton for such a lovely comment yaar! you made my day! love ya! Thanks a lot dear! I will definitely try to write properly..and true the cvs are becoming worse! so out of frustration this came out 😛
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Wow wow wow Excellent SS "MADHU DII"👍🏼👏👏👏⭐️😃😛😳I just love it your SS❤️😳, I must say that you are outstanding writter,keep doing amazing work 👍🏼👏👏👏⭐️😃😛😳 ... I am eagerly waiting for your next update,please update as soon as possible for you DII 😳... Thankyou very much "MADHU DII" for PM 🤗❤️😃😛😳...!!!!!!!!
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Lovely start dear yay I not the only one writing a GoHem story although mine is a Ff which all will c soon
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Niceee ...!!!!!! Pls pm me
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wow Madhu lovely start dear iam happy that you showing Rashi suffering from the male Kids so cute waiting for the next part want to see Gohem romantic moment which is not possible in sns 👏

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