SS:I will protect you~note pg 22| aug 28 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: -GiNa-

Hey so sorry Madhu for peep in late actually im very busy in university assignments.. 😕

well superb start dear.. Willing to read pure GoHem romamce n oozing moments ☺️ more Ahem scn aswell thanx for PM dearie 😳



thanks a lot sherry! aah i understand dear..its okay!
n yea..full too ahem in this 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nilani19

Wonderful Start madhu COnt Soon😛



thanks a lot nilani! will update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: avinaarshi

nice start

thanks for pm


thank you dear..will write soon! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: white.band

plz do continue...waiting..loved it😃


thank you..will update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rucha123

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interesting teaser
update part 1 soon :D


thanks a lot dear! will update rucha
lov ya!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello friends..so here is my first part! Hope you all like it..please leave likes and views on places to improve!

Part- 1

Ahem was super excited and also guilty.

Tomorrow is valentines day! I would make sure Gopi feels very happy

He called the jewellery shop and asked about the necklace and they said it is ready!

He thought to himself,"Gopi i know you will never share your pain or wishes with anyone but i will make sure i will understand them before you tell. the worst of our lives is associated with a necklace so i want to make up for it from this,hope you will like it!"

Ahem was sitting on the bed and recalled how worse he was to slap gopi for spending a lakh! He truly felt so bad but his thoughts were interrupted by the love of his life. Gopi comes and sits there and asks,"Ahemji,yeh kya hogaya aapko,aaj kal bohat kamoshi lag rahe ho?"

Ahem was surprised how she understood,so instead of saying anything he just hugged her tightly. Gopi knew something was seriously wrong,and ahem confirmed her suspicions,he started to say," I am very sorry gopi. Really very sorry!"

Gopi was shocked not understanding why ahem was saying sorry to her. She hugged him and asked," Ahemji,kya hua? Sorry kyun bol rahe ho?"

Before ahem could answer,there was a knock on the door and gopi went to open the door,kokila came and gave meera who was sleeping. Gopi took meera, and made her lie on her bed beside gopi ahems bed. In meantime, ahem got a call and he left the room.

It was evening and Kinjal came to Modi Bhavan. She directly went to ahem and started crying. Ahem was shocked at the sudden outburst of kinjal and asked her,"Kinjal kya hua? Baat kya hai?" Kinjal tried to control herself and explained to ahem that dhawal wanted divorce and told him that he has gone to get the divorce papers,kinjal speaks,"Bhai I love dhavalji, I cant live without him"

Now this confession was something new for him but he spoke,"Kinjal do you really want to stay with him?" Kinjal speaks,"yes bhai ofcourse,"

Ahem-"Okay I will talk to dhawalji and we will see what happens,you go and meet mom"

Ahem goes from there and finds gopi near the dining table. He goes to her and explains the situation and tells her that they need to something! Gopi agrees and ahem leaves.

Ahem goes to their room after dinner and ahem was thinking about necklace incident only as it was not leaving his head. He was feeling too worse and guilty and then it struck to his mind. He thought," I slapped gopi because she said she is an illiterate but how can an illiterate person order a necklace? I should ask this and get my confirmation"

Gopi comes to their room and ahem asks her,"Gopi do you remember the day I slapped you?" gopi was shocked at this question and she said,"Yes ahemji but why all this,go to bed now" ahem asked her,"Gopi did you order the necklace?" Gopi says,"NO ahemji I dint.."

To be continued...


SO what are ahem plans

sorry if it is disappointing! 😭


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Madhu👍🏼,sorry for late reply dear,i was waiting for Ahem reaction to know the truth, thanks for pm dear 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Good that Ahem knows the truth
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update Madhu Ahem guilt is killing him very nice he decided to clear things of past a true definetly earse all their past worries wonderful waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fantastic update 👏 waiting for next update 😃

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