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...ChammakChallo...

@.ChammakChallo.

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

this is a really short update

i will try update in the weekends as i dont have much time.

and thank you for the comments...

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Next part...

jigar parked his car and went after the girl. he was continuously shouting out rashi but the girl wasnt even listening suddenly he grabbed her by her hand and said what the hell i've been calling you since ages why aint you answering huh. rashi said what the hell who are you and why woud you be calling me she pulled her hand out of his and walked off.

the girl quickly went inside a car and the car drove off.

jigar went back to his car and was continuously thinking of the way the girl was talking also he kept thinking that was that rashi or someone else...

some days went by jigar and his brother viren was invited to his friends party jigar didnt want to go but was forced by viren.

jigar and viren reached the party...

whist jigar was walking around the hall he spotted the exact same girl he saw last time with virens girlfriend jeevika he coudnt exactly see her but was sure it was her, jigar wanted to go up to her but his friend stopped him and introduced him to some people jigar had no other option rather than being introduced to those people.

after being introduced jigar excused himself. jigar looked at the spot the girl was standing in but she was gone.

20 mins later the light were dimmed the room was quiet dark(noone could see each others faces) music was played and people started

dancing (guy and girl together were dancing not seperate). jigar was dancing with another girl as his friend had forced him.

they were twirling to different dance partners jigar felt a hand on him which he felt like he had felt it before. jigar was trying to think who had touched him before that made him feel the same way he was feeling now.

all of a sudden the girl jigar was dancing with start coughing jigar said are you ok the replied yh am fine i just need fresh air as its really hot il be back the girl was about to go but stopped and said to jigar um would you mind if you came with me as i dont the way around here and its really dark and cant see anything so jigar said yh sure

jigar took the girl to the terrace. he switched the terrace light on. jigar walked forward he wasnt facing the girl and said here you cant get fresh air he turned to see the girl and was full on shocked...

rashi jigar said shocked the girl says you again

jigar looked at what the girl was wearing she was wearing a short blue dress.

THE GIRLS DRESS

jigar says rashi you...

but before he could finish his sentence the girl stopped him and said what is your problem my name aint Rashi its Rucha you get that...jigar was really shocked

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Edited by rucha123 - 13 years ago

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megustajalebi

@megustajalebi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Great job😊

Keep going!

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Queen.Bee

@Queen.Bee

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

great!! update soon... 👍🏼

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Brahmaputra

@Brahmaputra

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Its really wonderful. After long busy days Im visting forum & started going through max threads... As u said, it is more beautiful if it was an FF...plz continue. I love Rashi.

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...ChammakChallo...

@.ChammakChallo.

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Sorry dont think i will be updating really busy

Edited by rucha123 - 13 years ago

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...ChammakChallo...

@.ChammakChallo.

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

LAST UPDATE guyz i had time to finish this os off

hope u like it leave your comments plz

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HERE GOES:

The girl walked off and didnt even look back jigar got tensed why wasnt she remembering him and how can her name be rucha when its rashi a lonely tear escaped his eyes. someone else was watching them it was lavanya

she observed jigar she now knew he regretted of betraying rashi she thinks back to the hospital day

flash back

lavanya: rashi are you ok i got really scared

rashi: yh i'm fine lavanya where is jigar please tell him to leave i dont want to see him

lavanya: his gone i told him to go away

rashi was crying

doc: rashi jigar told me to phone him when you recover

rashi told the doctor to tell jigar that she is dead the doctor and lavanya asked why

rashi told them that she didnt want to hurt jigar anymore she wanted to get out of his life so he can live happily and he will never come in front of him ever again she told lavanya not to tell jigar.

flash back ended

lavanya knew how much rashi is suffering by staying away from jigar so she decided to tell jigar about rashi beacuse she cant see them like this. jigar was shocked to see lavanya. when he seen her coming he remembered about the accident

lavanya went by jigar and said now do you want rashi jigar started crying he told lavanya how much he regretted the moment she left him, he wants her back in his life forever. lavanya couldnt stand it so told him everything about rashi, jigar was shocked he asked lavanya where is rashi lavanya told him where she lives and before he left she told him to look after her she suffered a lot beause of him jigar nodded and went.

rashi was in her house she was crying badly her eyes were red and puffy after she came back from the party she didnt change because she was feeling so bad beause she ignored jigar and hurt him a lot she said out loud why did he come back in her life again just when she was getting used to it without him why why did he have to come back in my life she said that and cried even louder

just then she heard some one say beause we are maent to be together forever

rashi turned to find jigar behind her she got up and wiped her tears and said what do you want now i told you i am not rashi my name is rucha and how did you come in my house get out now she said and turned around

jigars eyes were red beause of all the crying he went up to rashi and stood behind her rashi could feel jigars breath on her shoulder rashi told jigar to go away she moved forward so she cant feel him after a few minutes she opened her eyes and turned around to see if he was still there she turned but couldnt see him she thought he has gone and felt sad.

just then she heard someone say i am sorry for all the things i did to you, rashi turned around and looked down jigar was on his knees bending his head down and holding his ears jigar and crying jigar continued i am sorry for all the things i did to you, i am a really selfish person i never cared about your feelings i always told you to go away when ever you said i love you i also betrayed you how could i of...

rashi was crying badly non-stop she fell to the ground by him

jigar held rashi's hand tight and said trust me from the day i heard you were dead i was shocked i couldnt sleep i couldnt eat i always used to remember you rashi it was not because of guilt but for love rashi i knew how much i loved you when you went away from me rashi i...i missed you i want you back rashi i cant imagine my life again without you i would rather di...

but before he could finish rashi covered his mouth with her hand and shook her head in a noo way, jigar moved her hand and smiled and held a ring in front of her and said rashi

WILL YOU MARRY ME rashi looked at him shocked she coludnt say anything jigar said please rashi say something please dont stay quite now, please after all these days i got you infront of me and your not talking please say something, rashi your silence is killing me please jigar pleaded still tears falling from his eyes rashi looked at him and cupped his face in her small palms and made him look at her and said yes.

jigar all these months i was waiting for the moment when i will be yours only yours jigar yes yes i will marry you and hugged him jigar hugged her back jigar said i love you rashi always have but just didnt know but when i did i thought it was too late i am really sorry rashi really sorry i love you so much never leave me again please rashi, i love you too i will never leave you ever in my life i promise.😊

THE END

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