Ss written by ritika english translation (updated on page no. 13)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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This ss is written by ritika. I am translating it in english with her permission.

PART- 1
It was about 3 yrs. That gopi had left mm and after that ahem was highly depressed. So, doctor advised him to go to some other place. But in starting he didnt agree as he wished to be with gopis memories. But in last 15 days ahem health worsened. So due to kokila's constant insisting he went to a hill station named 'saputara'.
Here many things have changed in last 3 yrs. Kokila wasn't strict anymore as she considered herself to be responsible for all these incidents. As ahem was in depression, business was taken care by jigar and was as successful as ahem was. Rashi too have changed. Now she was a perfect daughter-in-law as well as a perfect wife. And she was made perfect by kokila and that too very sweetly. And rashi too didn't call her kagdi anymore and utmost change had come in urmila. As after so many tries when rashi wasnt able to conceive, doctor said that she will not be able to be a mother and only kanajis miracle can do that. But treatment was going on. But urmila was feeling that as she had ill-treated an orphan girl, so kanaji was giving punishment of her harsh behaviour to her daughter and she spend all day-night in praying to kanaji for gopis whereabout so that she will be able to seek forgiveness so that kanaji become happy and do some miracle.

So this was the first part. Plz neglect any spelling or grammatical error.
Part-2 Below
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Posted: 13 years ago
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can u continue d translation 2 other parts also...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovv

can u continue d translation 2 other parts also...


Yeah, i will do it for all the parts. Thanks for reading it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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cont it please thx for doing it love it both in eng and hindi
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PART-2
It was about 15 days that ahem have been in saputara. And in these 15 days his health have been better. So, today he was going out of his hotel. As whether was very pleasant he had come out far away walking. He heard the giggling sounds of children and his feet were moving on their own towards the children and he was relieved and happy after hearing the echoing sounds of children. He thought there would be a park nearby but he failed to find that. N his catch a sign board via which he came to know about an orphanage in the boundary and thought that from there the sounds would be coming from. He wished to go inside but was stopped by the gatekeeper who told the strangers were allowed only from 7-9 in the morning. So, he went back and on his way back had purchased a lot of balloons, chocolates and gifts for the kids. He was feeling very happy after doing all this.


Part- 3 on page no. 3
Edited by svtsns - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the Translation i realy wanted too read that story
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wow very nice translation love it cont please
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really nice story ritika and thanks for the translation svtsns .love reading it both in hindi n english
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yaar yeh toh double dhamaal ho gaya hai Hindi and English 👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tamzin43

yaar yeh toh double dhamaal ho gaya hai Hindi and English👏



yes, nd i m expecting like or comment on both .

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