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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: svtsns

PART-4 (a)
I am using S for siddhant, A for ahem.
S- It happens. It is is imposible to predict when and whom u meet in ur journey of life. Btw u can no go to meet children.
A- I wish to come here again.
S- Ofcourse u can come on anyday but only within 7-9.
A-Thanks.
After 20r 3 dayr ahem met siddhant again.
A- do u always come here?
S- No. In about 10 months i m out of country due to business trips but whenever i m here i try to spend most of my time with these children.
A- I have noticed a perfection in all the things around here. I think u all take a personal interest in all the activities.
S- no. Me n my family dnt have much time. This all is the responsibility of the manager and the manager here believes to every task with perfection. She is not feeling well so is unable to come but in a couple of days u will be able to meet her.. Btw after 20 days we r going to celebrate 50th foundation day of this orphanage. I will be happy if u come with ur family.
A- i will defenitely try to come.
S- my pleasure now u can enjoy with kids as i have to leave as i have some work to do.
I have used symbols here if someone have problem then do tell me.




Has the next part to part 4 come yet?

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: HareKrsna108




Has the next part to part 4 come yet?


yes, as part 4 was a bit long. So, i opted to split it in 2. Will update it in an hour or so.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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caught up with all the updates...lovely...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part- 4(b)
i am using S- siddhant, A- Ahem and G- gatekeeper.

On next day, ahem was in orphanage when siddhants car entered and he had a small girl in his lap when he came out of the car. Ahem went near siddhant.
G(to siddhant)- Sir, today also manager mam didn't came. Now who will teach children garba.
S- No, she will be coming in a while. Thats y i have pari with me.
G- Oh yes! Today pari baby has too come.
Ahem was listening to all these standing nearby but he wasn't able to understand anything and he didn't bother for the same and went near siddhant to wish him.
A- Gud morning siddhant. This child! Will she stay here?
S- No. This...this is my daughter.(HE said that in a different voice with a different smile on his.) ahemji u come to my office after 9. And i will make u meet the world's best manager.
After 10o'clock in siddhants office.
Siddhant called the peon and asked him to inform manager mam that siddhant sir called for her. After 5 minutes, ahem heard the sweet sound. May i come in. Ahem couldnt believe his ears and was too shocked and didnt take too much time to recognize that this was the sound of his gopi and turned and found gopi at the door step.
Part- 5 on page no. 6.
Edited by svtsns - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Excellent, please continue, really beautiful update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it Pleas continue cant wait tooo read the next part~!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am loving it. Thank you for translating and thanks to Ritika for the nice story
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely you are saying all well thx to translate it cont
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: navyab

wow...liked the part...yet Ahem did not find Gopi !!!


thanks navya. In next part they met.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kafa

Just love the update, will wait for next part. Please continue.


Thanks dear. I am glad u liked it.

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