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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritika-gohem



yes, nd i m expecting like or comment on both .



of course dear 😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tamzin43



of course dear 😳😳



so, nice of u.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I've just read the updates and I am enjoying your ff already 😉.. can't wait for the next update..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome FF!! Both parts were great to read!! ⭐️ Looking forward to the next!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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First of all , a big thanks to all of u who read. Sorry, could not individually thank everyone as i wish to update the next part soon enough.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART-3
Aham had reached the orphanage by 7 am. Gatekeeper had allowed him to go inside but not to meet the children without the permission of the manager who would coming in a while. So, ahem started waiting and at that time he heard the sounds of prayers coming from the orphanage temple. It was the same song which gopi used to sing. Ahem thought wherever i go gopis memories will not leave me alone. But he was pulled by his thoughts by gatekeeper voice who informed him that today manager mam would not be able to come so, if he wished to seek permission he can talk to trustee. Ahem noded and entered trustees office. He had expected an old man of 45-50 yrs. But he found a young man of 27-28 yrs.
Ahem- Hi, i m ahem modi. If you allow me them i wished to spend some time with kids and wanted to present these gifts to them.
TRUSTEE- Ofcourse u can do that. I am pleased that a busy businessman like u wanna spend sometime with kids. Btw i m Siddhant sikand.
AHEM- Siddhant sikand, who didn't know this name. The son of india's well known industrialist Aashish sikands son. But i have never wondered that we will meet like this.
Part- 4 (a) below
Edited by svtsns - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: svtsns

PART-3
Aham had reached the orphanage by 7 am. Gatekeeper had allowed him to go inside but not to meet the children without the permission of the manager who would coming in a while. So, ahem started waiting and at that time he heard the sounds of prayers coming from the orphanage temple. It was the same song which gopi used to sing. Ahem thought wherever i go gopis memories will not leave me alone. But he was pulled by his thoughts by gatekeeper voice who informed him that today manager mam would not be able to come so, if he wished to seek permission he can talk to trustee. Ahem noded and entered trustees office. He had expected an old man of 45-50 yrs. But he found a young man of 27-28 yrs.
Ahem- Hi, i m ahem modi. If you allow me them i wished to spend some time with kids and wanted to present these gifts to them.
TRUSTEE- Ofcourse u can do that. I am pleased that a busy businessman like u wanna spend sometime with kids. Btw i m Siddhant sikand.
AHEM- Siddhant sikand, who didn't know this name. The son of india's well known industrialist Aashish sikands son. But i have never wondered that we will meet like this.



Thanks sooo much for the update! Yes i read it ;)

It is getting interesting, waiting eagerly for the next part =D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow...liked the part...yet Ahem did not find Gopi !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Just love the update, will wait for next part. Please continue.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART-4 (a)
I am using S for siddhant, A for ahem.
S- It happens. It is is imposible to predict when and whom u meet in ur journey of life. Btw u can no go to meet children.
A- I wish to come here again.
S- Ofcourse u can come on anyday but only within 7-9.
A-Thanks.
After 20r 3 dayr ahem met siddhant again.
A- do u always come here?
S- No. In about 10 months i m out of country due to business trips but whenever i m here i try to spend most of my time with these children.
A- I have noticed a perfection in all the things around here. I think u all take a personal interest in all the activities.
S- no. Me n my family dnt have much time. This all is the responsibility of the manager and the manager here believes to every task with perfection. She is not feeling well so is unable to come but in a couple of days u will be able to meet her.. Btw after 20 days we r going to celebrate 50th foundation day of this orphanage. I will be happy if u come with ur family.
A- i will defenitely try to come.
S- my pleasure now u can enjoy with kids as i have to leave as i have some work to do.
I have used symbols here if someone have problem then do tell me.
Part- 4(b) on page no. 4.
Edited by svtsns - 13 years ago

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