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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing Updateee Cant wait too read the next part!
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Beautiful update, will wait for another part.
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I have just caught up with the past few updates and I am enjoying reading your story Ritika 😊.. So Ahem has finally found Gopi.. what will happen now 😕.. Can't wait for the next part..
And Thank You to svtsns (Sorry, I don't know your name 😳) for the translation..😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely... loved to read in hindi and english !!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART- 7
Gopi n siddhant were living at siddhant's farm house. When gopi returned, she cried bitterly. She had never thought that she would have to behave like this with ahem. She had written the letter emotionally but the truth was that she wasn't able to forget mm for a min. Or two. Today, his ahemji is in front of her bt she have to behave like strangers. Bt till when she would be able to stop herself. She doubt. But if her and ahem's relation is revealed then many hearts will break and she woud be in such a dilemma that choosing a particular path would b difficult for her. So, it is better if they behave like stranger or her presence would affect anita n ahem relation. Ahem had been married to anita n y nt they loved each other a lot. N she started crying more bitterly. Gopi's crying would nt had stopped if pari who was sleeping on the bed nearby didn't started crying. Bt before she could have gone to pick her, there was a knock at the door and siddhant who was working in drawing was there. Hd had put pari in his lap as soon as he entered and pari too had stopped crying immediately. But he was very angry with gopi. N siddhant said-" gopi, where ur concentration? Y was pari crying like that. Bhaiya n bhabhi had faith on u that's y they had left her with u n gone to foreign. If u r not able to take care of her then do tell me i will inform them n they will take her back." to which gopi replied-" what are u saying siddhantji? I m nt able to take care of pari." But she could nt say anything more with her sad n crying voice.
Part- 8 on page no. 8
Edited by svtsns - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Great, continue translation please, it's easier to read.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Savi, thanks so much for the translations. They are much appreciated.

You still have two more updates to translate. I look forward to reading them soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks,savvy. U r so gud .
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Thank you Ritika & Savi ...😊
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PART-8
I m using S- siddhant, A- ahem n G- Gopi.
S- i m sorry gopi. U know how much i love pari. I can't see her crying. Bhaiya n bhabhi had left her on our's responsibility. Now u dont start crying, u know i cant see tears in ur eyes. I luv u too gopi.
G- i know it siddhant ji. But could u tell me u didn't feel to know about my past?
S- no gopi. Whatever u havd told me that much is enough n i believe in present n my present is only this that the girl i luv only knows to love others but i dont know when i will get her love.
Gopi didnt say anything n gave only a sad n painful smile.
But here, seeing siddhant n gopi proximity ahem had believed that they are married n pari is their daughter and so ahem has been trying to be away from gopi. But due to some incidents, siddhant was having doubts about gohem relationship. Like gopi ordering green tea for ahem without his consent, gopi worring too much for ahems health when he has fever etc. And now only 5 days were left for orphanage programme. Siddhant had intentionally made gohem to go together to get the kids garba clothes.
A- gopi r u happy after marrying siddhant?
G- yes ahemji. I m very happy n what about u? R u happy with anita?
A- yes gopi. I m very happy.
Today, both have lied to each other so that no one feels pain or guilty.
Part-9 below
Edited by svtsns - 13 years ago

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