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Posted: 13 years ago
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I want to start the weekend at a good note. So this how I think this track will end.

Anita standing at airport terminal with a boarding pass in hand. Jigar did not want to be there with her but he was going to make sure that this skank is out of his Bhai and Bhabhis life for sure.

Anita stares at the grey skies outside and has flashback of when everyone was standing in mm. Anita had played her final hand in making gopi feel guilty. She had told gopi that if she leaves ahem she will fix so many wrongs. Ahem will have his love his Anita back. Kokila will have fulfilled her vow. Rashis misdeeds will be fixed as when ahem marries her they will have their true saathiya. Gopi listened and a deathly calm settled around her. Gopi felt like she was incapable of any feelings anymore like she was made of stone. So she slowly walked towards everyone assembled in he temple for morning prayers.
Kokila says gopi bahu Tum aarti Shuru karo. Gopi looks at Kokila and says no I do not have any right to do the family aarti I anymore. Kokila is mad what do you mean gopi bahu. Gopi says kokilaji from now please don't call me your vahu as from this day you are not my maaji. Ahem comes rushing and shakes her and says gopi are you feeling all right. Gopi just stare at him and says please mr modi let go of me. Ahem is stunned and says gopi I am you husband and I have every right to hold you. Ahem looks in her eyes and all he sees are vacant eyes of a dead body. Ahem is scared and pulls gopi in her arms and says gopi what has happened talk to me. Gopi pulls herself out of his grasp and says in a calm voice that mr modi from today you are a free man you do not have to be nice to me be cause of your responsibility to me. I set you free from this sham marriage. So you can marry Anita your love. Ahem is stunned like he has forgotten how to breath. Gopi goes to chirag and says mr modi I have served this family for sometime now and can you please reward me as a good employee and find me a job far away from raj kot as I don't want to see any familiar faces anymore. Chirac puts his hand on gopi an says gopi I have seen you suffer quietly because of ahem and kokila. I will find you a job for now you can go and stay at our company guest house fo the night.

Anita is very Happy and holds ahems hand and says I am so happy ahem now we can be one as we were meant to be. Ahem stares at her and then there hands clasped together. Then he remembers feeling gopi under him and their hands clasped together in middle of passionate love making . He is stunned and turns to look at gopi again and mumbles how can you say that our marriage does not mean anything. I love you. Gopi looks a him and says mr modi you don't have to say these thing to me anymore. Ahem walks towards her his eyes ar e pools of burning anger and pain. Gopi takes a step back but he reaches her and clasps her by her arm and says gopi i tell you this if you step out of his door today I will die. Gopi stays calm and asks ahem why are you doing this I am trying to do right thing by letting you have your happiness. Ahem says but gopi you aremy happiness. Gopi replies with no emotions that ahemji but when Anita behn said and gopi blurts all that was said in front of her. Ahem realizs that he has been played by Anita. He knows that gopi has been hurt so badly by Anita manipulations to which he has contributed unknowingly. Now no explanations will bring gopi back. He kows only thing that will bring his gopi back is him telling her honestly about his deep feelings. So he pulls gopi in his arms and says gopi mujhe tumse kuch kahana hai. He looks deep into her eyes an says with a voice full of emotions " gopi mein tumhare bina jee nahin paunga, mein sirf tumhara hoon aur hamesha tumhara rahoonga". You want to leave me and go then go but I will not marry Anita. Gopi looks in his eyes and breaks down she throws herself in his arms an they both are hugging and crying.

Ahem turns to his mom and says thank you mom for finding me his gem. Then he walks towards Anita and says you have to leave my home now right at this moment. Anita is now angry and starts yelling ahem you love me and you are saying all this because of your mother. Ahem says to her with disgust that Anita I don't love you I love gopi my wife. I was being a friend because of he love we shared once. But now each and every memory of you is filled with hatred. I don't think I loved you then how could
I when I didn't even know you at all. I know my gopi inside out, when she walks towards me the sound of her payal reminds me that my love is coming. When she smiles at me I feel like Love Rained on me and when I take her in my arms I feel like I have my whole world enveloped close to me.
He pulls gopi towards kanhaji and fills sindoor in her hair parting And takes Off her palu. He says you are mine forever gopi and I am yours only yours. Saying this ahem and gopi walk hand in hand towards their room oblivious of everyone staring at them with tears of joy in their eyes except Anita whose eyes are full of tears of remorse and loneliness. Ahem shuts the door and wisphers to gopi. Gopi ahem modi you have some explaining to do about Holi and picks her up and moves towards their bed. Second suhagdin.

Kokila turned to Anita and says you see I was right in not choosing you as my daughter in law because how could I have allowed my son to swallow poison like you. She tells jigar to take Anita to a hotel.

Present.
Anita is sitting dejected in tears and looks at jigar and says they will always hate me now. Just then she hears her Payal turns to see gopi glowing and walking towards her. Holding gopis hand in tight grip to never let go is ahem. Gopi comes near and says Anita behn I do not hate you. I will pray to kanhaji that he heals your heart so you can leave in peace with yourself. Anita turns to hug her and cries like she has never cried before. She says gopi you are Ahems true love and you are made for each other. She looks towards ahem and says please try to forgive me. Ahem says Anita my heart does not have any feelings for you. I even don't feel any hatred for you. You are stranger to me and all I can say to you is that I wish you well.

Anitas plane has announced that it is boarding and Anita walks through the gates sad and alone hoping that she can one day forgive herself.
Edited by Saathfan - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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ummm for OS style pretty gud. . .

I wantmore suffering for Ahem 😭 . . i dont feel an content with an of the minor suffering / irritation as i wud call it . . . i wand to see him break down. . . fully struck by lightning. . fully drained. . never eaten for days. . with a heavy beard. . in a double devdas style singing hymns Gopi Gopi where are you . . . 😲

lol seriously not too bad. . but yeah i want him to properly shatter. . .like seriously break DOWN big time. . .in pools of tears . . .and go thru each and every bit of pain Gopi has ever gone through. . ten fold. . . he needs to feel teh agony and hurt the heartily hurt of being rejected completely. . . tha pain . . needs to be there. .. that super high power pain . .. in taht little heart of his that cannot be angry on Gopi for long. . .that heart which loves Gopibut hasnt vocalised. . that heart which cannot bear even a moment of GOpi ignorance. . .but I want that heart to be forced upon with all this hurt to make it expand to a bigger heart. . . to match that big heart that gopi has. . . 😃
i shud stop ranting now. .

by the way . . and gettin memory back for Holi was super awesome. . . 👏



Nihira-fan thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that's awesome OS!!!!can't wait to see the ending.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sooo filmy... Bt I'm glad dat anita s gone forever...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great OS. Love how Ahemji declares his love in front of the whole family and remembers the holi day too. But agree with Vinder, we need more pain and suffering for our Ahemji for what he has put Gopi through and in order to become a true Saathiya for this invaluable gem.

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