FF: The Roulette of Envy (Part 12) pg.33/Dec. 7

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FlowerHater

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

gO AND KILLthis itchy witchy!!!!! nice updt dear nd thanks for pm!!!

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Debalina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

superb episode.. continue very soon and pm me plz..

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swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

That was a fantastic update.

What a place to stop. You have lots of intrigue, suspense, built up anger, frustration and hurt. If it was Gopi alone there watching on things would have been different. With Agni knowing Ahem so well and mediating the situation can be in better control and brought to an amicable understanding.

Looking forward to the coming update and the use of the league to bring together Ahem and Gopi.

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Queen.Bee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

nice 👏.. seems rashi is alright.. no signs of illness...

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kafa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Beautiful update. Will wait for next part.

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Shrishti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

lovely ff!

apt for current track👍🏼

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Savi_S

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Nice update. Cant wait for the next part.

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Rachna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: lovv
its nice... bt sad...

😭 I know and I don't like writing about it, but I also don't want to rush into rainbows and butterflies yet. Maybe in the next two parts, there'll be some happiness. 😊

Originally posted by: gauri72
nice update and very well return but please update next part soon and send pm.I liked Agni's character.Plot is well developed.

Thank you Gauri! I like Agni too! 😳

Originally posted by: abbay
gO AND KILLthis itchy witchy!!!!! nice updt dear nd thanks for pm!!!

Abbay, you have to let me know what your name is! 😆 Isn't Anita just as creepy in here as she is in the show? God knows, how Ahem could stand her before. She brings the creepy crawly feeling with her. I'll try to punish her soon.😉 😆

Originally posted by: Debalina_Paul
superb episode.. continue very soon and pm me plz..

Thank you! I'll PM you when I upload the next part.

Originally posted by: swasthi
That was a fantastic update.

What a place to stop. You have lots of intrigue, suspense, built up anger, frustration and hurt. If it was Gopi alone there watching on things would have been different. With Agni knowing Ahem so well and mediating the situation can be in better control and brought to an amicable understanding.

Looking forward to the coming update and the use of the league to bring together Ahem and Gopi.

I might disappoint you Swasthi.

Originally posted by: rashi.krishna
nice 👏.. seems rashi is alright.. no signs of illness...

😳 Yes, she does seem alright.

Originally posted by: white.band
😭...y dis to gopi...

Oh geez, I feel horrible writing it, but I have a hidden agenda in mind.

Originally posted by: Vidishaa
awesome

Awww, thank you Vidisha! 😳

Originally posted by: kafa
Beautiful update. Will wait for next part.

Thank you, Kafa!

Originally posted by: sns1992
lovely ff!
apt for current track👍🏼

😳 Thank you!

Originally posted by: svtsns
Nice update. Cant wait for the next part.

Thank you so much for reading!!! I don't know when I'll be able to update it next. I have finals within a week--it's my time to run around like a headless chicken. 😭😭

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-neela-

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Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#99

Finally caught up with the last update, really feel like wringing that witch's neck 😡.. Bless Agni trying to help Ahem with his marriage but poor Gopi has to bear the brunt of it as always 😔.. Glad Rashi and Jigar know what the witch is up too and are helping out.. 😊

Well done to Aris as well, you both are doing really well with the progress of the story 👍🏼..

Good luck with the finals Rachna, look forward to the next update 😉

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aris22l

@aris22l

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#100

Aww, Rachna🤗

You are so sweet for acknowledging me, but it's all you. I normally give you bad ideas, but you always know what to do with them. This update was sad and must have been hard to write. Your Anita is as witchy as the one in Saathiya. Hopefully, she disappears soon and Gopi vahu gets some happiness in her life.

Good luck on your exams. Looking forward to the next part.

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