FF: The Roulette of Envy (Part 12) pg.33/Dec. 7 - Page 12

Rachp. First of all well done for updating. This, as was Shilpa's update is most welcome. I loved the way you are unravelling this, along with Anita's lies. . Tv's Ahem is always there in my mind, as is Gia's portrayal of Gopi which resonates in this for me. However, I am loving the character of Agni. If anyone has seen Bride and Prejudice he reminds my of the guy who married the older daughter. Can't quite remember what his name was. Old age you see.😆

omg.. how can rashi be pregnant??😕 do include a flashback... .. where did i miss..

i dont lyk dis stubborn gopi..give us back dat demure gopi..i guess rashi is having some serios disease..i 101% sure she is not preggie...

Awesome awesome part Rachna!!! I have officially become your fan... I liked the earlier parts as well but this one was just great 👏 Thanks!!Apart from caring about your versions of Ahem and Gopi, I love your Agni as well. Please write more about him 😃 - I don't want him to just be a placeholder for Ahem's envy. In fact, you could develop his story further - comepletely up to you. Just letting you know that I won't mind reading lot more of Agni's story 😉

i dont exactly know what the serial ahem is upto since i havent been watching it for a while now but i guess it will be better if we keep them separate
go gopi finally she is questioning and asking for answers come on it was about time she grows a spine and not take things lightly
its her haq to question ahem after all she is his patni naa
so what next for the duo

Thank you so much for the update.

Beautiful update. Will wait for next part as this is really a different Ahem.

Originally posted by: poonamahem

Thank u so much for the pm !!! Been waiting for this update ..!!pls write more story awesome love this ahem .. He seems far more manly somehow ... And Agni is too good .. Pls make ahem super jealous in the next part and ania should see it well .. The serials become another Saas Bahu drama ... Your story far more interesting ...

😳 Thank you! I've been busy with other things, but I have a week off, so will try to wrap up more parts for you all. Yes, Ahem does seem manly. I like this Ahem too and I've always loved Agni. He's awesome! 😆

Originally posted by: poonamahem

U write vvvery well !!! Saathiya aside must say u r extremely talented !!!

Awww...thank you so much Poonam! 😃

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

This is exactly what I wanted...thanks for the pm...loving it...Thank God your exams are over😊

🤣 You're echoing what I said after I finished my last final! Thank god!

Originally posted by: vibz88

Hey rachna this was a phatak part. For me i never think of the serial character when i read a story coz every writer portrays them so differently so your ahem,gopi,rashi will be different. Ooo how did rashi manage to get pregnant 🤣

Good to know that you keep them separate. Why are you assuming she's pregnant Vibz? 🤣 Bin baarish barsaat? 😳🤣

Originally posted by: lovv

nice...

Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: Xarina

Rachp. First of all well done for updating. This, as was Shilpa's update is most welcome. I loved the way you are unravelling this, along with Anita's lies. . Tv's Ahem is always there in my mind, as is Gia's portrayal of Gopi which resonates in this for me. However, I am loving the character of Agni. If anyone has seen Bride and Prejudice he reminds my of the guy who married the older daughter. Can't quite remember what his name was. Old age you see.😆

Bingley? I had to Wikipedia it. 🤣 Thanks Xarina for reading it! I like Agni too! I'm just wondering what to do with him to give him a good happy ending.

Originally posted by: rashi.krishna

omg.. how can rashi be pregnant??😕 do include a flashback... .. where did i miss..

Rashi, if you read the beginning, then I say that Raji already had consummated their marriage.😆 I haven't written that part, but I'm sure that I can add a bit somewhere. 😳

Originally posted by: white.band

i dont lyk dis stubborn gopi..give us back dat demure gopi..i guess rashi is having some serios disease..i 101% sure she is not preggie...

Awww, honey, I'm sorry you don't like this new stubborn Gopi. Remember, she still has parts of old Gopi with her. It's just that Ahem's not answering and that's why she's upset and seems new.
Rashi's symptoms will remain a mystery until the next part or the next two parts. 😃

Originally posted by: ruchisahay

Awesome awesome part Rachna!!! I have officially become your fan... I liked the earlier parts as well but this one was just great 👏 Thanks!!Apart from caring about your versions of Ahem and Gopi, I love your Agni as well. Please write more about him 😃 - I don't want him to just be a placeholder for Ahem's envy. In fact, you could develop his story further - comepletely up to you. Just letting you know that I won't mind reading lot more of Agni's story 😉

Just one complaint - this one took a long time . Please make future updates sooner (if it's not interfering something else far more important).

Ruchi, thank you for reading this! Everyone is loving Agni! 😆 It makes me very happy to see that. 😳 Actually, it's making me gloat a bit too! He won't be left hanging, I promise! I have something in mind for him. 😉 I'm sorry that it took me so long to write this one. I kind of lost my spark after Part 5 and I was continuously changing my mind about one thing or another. Now, I have revamped my plot line and everything is fixed. All I have to do it write! 😳