SS: Realising what he has done. Scene 5-Page 19 - Page 7

aish u are a pure genius...absolutely splendid update...i could actually feel ahems pain, his turmoil, his disgust and his hatred of himself ...what is he going to say to gopi now...she is feeling the same pain...will he be able to convince her of his love...cant wait for the next part...

Fabulous. I love it. Please continue soon! 👏

Edited!!

That was fantastic Aish.. All his past and the anguish at who he had been to Gopi the past..

The emotions are truly surfacing now and he is feeling every pain that Gopi has experienced in the past due to him. His mother and Kaki are seeing something in him they never have seen before..Ahem's tears...And Gopi is seeing the hurt in her Ahemji's face and feeling guilty and so she is taking that step back...and then he calls her not to leave almost trying to say please my life and love don't let go of me...

Aish. Payback is a b***h and Ahem is paying with pain, raw emotion, regret and anger. I like the way you have made him revisit his past while in this mental torture. Back to the times he had abused and accused Gopi. He is totally blameworthy and you are showing his realisation and pain. Anyone else would want to put things right but will your Gopi succumb and forgive him? Excellent update Aish. I am enjoying this immensly. Thank you.👏

Originally posted by: Xarina

Aish. Payback is a b***h and Ahem is paying with pain, raw emotion, regret and anger. I like the way you have made him revisit his past while in this mental torture. Back to the times he had abused and accused Gopi. He is totally blameworthy and you are showing his realisation and pain. Anyone else would want to put things right but will your Gopi succumb and forgive him? Excellent update Aish. I am enjoying this immensly. Thank you.👏

Oh, Aish. Absolutely brilliant. So moving and heart touching. Ahemji angry at himself, hurting himself and crying. Feel his pain and torment and it soothes all the hurt he has given to us lately. The way he is expressing his remorse is so in keeping with his character. The two scenes you picked for him to remember from his past are perfect. This is how I want to see him in SNS. He is so vulnerable and yet, so strong in showing his hurt and vulnerability.

Originally posted by: Aish3003

Not so soon Xarina. Because she has to do more than forgive him, cause she doesn't blame him in the first place. She has to trust him and his love for her...She has to trust that he is not feeling guilty but feeling the pangs of separation from her..., and as far as my thinking goes, earning that is much more difficult than earning her forgiveness.

I myself am not sure of what she is going to do next. Hope it lives up to your expectations when it happens.

Exactly, Aish. That's what I want to see. He needs to show that he truly love her and can't live without her and he is not doing that out of guilt. He needs her to believe in his love. And it is not all about her taking care of his personal needs but its about his soul needing her soul and him not being able to breathe without her love. You have a tough task ahead of you. Looking forward to how you show it.

Awwwesome brilliant loved it loved aham guilt emotions plse cont quickly