FF: Nazdeekiyan part6b page 13(UPDT&Note) update - Page 3

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Part 2

It was lunch time and servants had already laid out the buffet. Rashi was wondering what was taking Gopi so long… Doesn't she know that man-eater Anita is on prowl. She decided to check things for herself but a voice called her…it was Prem. Ahem noticed this and was surprised that Prem and Rashi interact without observing any formality…Do they know each other?.

"Rashi, where have you hidden Gopi?"

"I am going to her room and shall bring her along with me"

"Let me tell something Rashi, Gopi may not be in this room but every dish here bears her signature and marks her presence. I was dying to eat the pulav prepared by her...no one else gets the spice mix right"

Ahem was dumbstruck..so he knows Gopi too!! …well enough to taste the food made by her and remember the taste. How does he know them??. Why was he praising Gopi so much? A lot of women cook well then why her? It wasn't just Gopi's work, Kaki and Rashi toiled in the kitchen too. Ahem wanted answers to these questions but felt asking about it to be beneath him. He dismissed it as words of an oaf.

Rashi excused herself and went to Gopi's room…Gopi was trying to dry her wet hair with a towel…Rashi asked Gopi to hurry up. She took Gopi into her room and dried her hair using her dryer…and styled her tresses quickly. ..Rashi flashed a mischievous smile and told "Gopi get ready soon as my original jeejaji is waiting for you"..Gopi blushed thinking that Ahem was waiting for her, little did she know what Rashi meant by 'original jeejaji"..Gopi felt reassured that Ahem still cared for her and all wasn't lost.

A dash of lipstick and some simple jewels made Gopi ready for her social debut… Rashi almost pulled Gopi down to the hall…such was her hurry in showing off the new Gopi to the world and make Anita eat dirt. She was going to chaperon Gopi today and her face reflected the pride of a successful make over artist.

//In her eagerness to get Gopi ready, Rashi took Gopi to her room…and then both of them overlooked the fact that Gopi wasn't wearing sindoor..all traces of it had been washed away while she was bathing//

Gopi looked enchanting- her turquoise blue saree flattered her complexion…it had zero bling and all the embroidery on reflected good taste. Gopi looked really sophisticated in contrast to Anita's underdressed look. Gopi walked in her usual feminine way and Ahem was the first one to notice her presence-his heart started beating faster and his eyes savoured her never seen before avatar…

Anita was quick to notice what had caught Ahem's eyes… she reacted by getting even closer to Ahem…she smiled and touched Ahem's hands unnecessarily…all this was done to send a wrong message to Gopi. Ahem was blissfully aware of Anita's intentions…he laughed off Anita's antics and took Gopi for granted.

Gopi was pained to see Anita and Ahem share a joke…it was a reminder of their love…how madly in love they must be to display their affection in front of guests and family…the presence of Maaji and Kaka-Kaki made no difference to them…Ahemji wasn't even aware of her presence...Gopi felt unwanted and tried to walk out of the room, only to be stopped by Rashi and Prem…Gopi's face lit up on seeing Prem. Memories of being appreciated ran through her mind.

"Premji how is Shobha aunty?"

"She is fine Gopi. Do visit us, she'll be delighted to see you"

"Sure Premji, How can I forget the love she had showered on me"

Prem smiled and said-"No one is immune from your charm Gopi…and since you haven't asked me about my 'haal-chaal' I will volunteer to say that I am fine…...ok,so how is life ?"

The smile on Gopi's face faded quickly and she excused herself and went outside. Prem sensed that something was wrong. Rashi held him back and said "Prem I want to talk to you about Gopi. Let us step outside."

Mr Bindra approached Ahem and compared the food served at the party to ambrosia. Koki,who was nearby heard him and told proudly "My bahu Gopi prepared most of the dishes"

"Do you have another son Mrs.Modi?"

"No…why??? "…Koki suddenly realized the reason behind his question and added "She is Ahem's Dharmapatni." She looked around for Gopi but she was nowhere to be seen. "Ahem, where is Gopi? Introduce her to our guests"

Having sent Ahem in search of Gopi, Koki cast a sharp look at Anita…."Anita you seem to be tired…go to the guest room and rest".

Gopi wanted to be alone for some time and rushed to her bedroom. Memories haunted her there so she locked herself in the bathroom and started to cry... She covered her face with her aanchal to suppress her sniffles, lest anyone find her.

//The next update will have flashbacks//

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Originally posted by: abbay

waiting vidishaa!!!!! waiting for more!!!!!Make Ahem cry tears of blood but plz keep Gohem together!!!!!😈

hhmm feeling bad for gopi...this anita is geting on my nerve...
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