Written update - 30 Apr 2012

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys...here's my first try at a written update and hope i have done full justice to a milestone episode where ahem kissed gopi and he did it intentionally and willingly and in his senses!🄳
Please forgive me if there are any errors...have tried my best!
Modi Bhavan
Episode starts with Anita asking Ahem to show his face on video chat...Gopi and Ahem look worried. As Ahem is turning around Gopi switches off the lights and Anita is unable to see Ahem's face. Ahem looks relieved and smiles at Gopi.😊 Anita asks what's wrong and why is she unable to see his face. Ahem explains that the lights have gone out. Anita asks what kind of hotel is he staying in which has no generator. She tells him that she is missing him. Gopi gets uncomfortable and goes towards the dresser. Here Koki is on the prowl looking for Gopi and Ahem wondering why have they not turned up for dinner. Here Anita is asking Ahem if he misses her.(my God she really is the clinging type..wonder how ahem ever fell in love with her!šŸ˜•) Ahem looks at Gopi and both look uncomfortable. Koki reaches their room and wonders why is it dark. She knocks and calls out to them. Ahem and Gopi get scared and Gopi starts rushing towards the door. Ahem hastily ends the chat and Gopi opens the door. Koki asks why are they sitting in the dark. Ahem says he was working and Koki asks in the dark? and notices that his laptop is also switched off..ahem bluffs that the fuse went out so the lights and his laptop are switched off. Koki says that she will call the electrician but ahem says he will do it. Koki looks suspicious. Ahem's phone rings and its anita. Ahem and Gopi look scared.
Break
Gopi hastily gives the phone to ahem and ahem cuts the call. Koki asks why he didnt take the call, ahem bluffs again. Koki asks them to come for dinner and leaves the room. Gopi looks worried and asks ahem how many lies will they say to hide one lie and even Ahem agrees that he hates that he has to lie to his mother. He thanks Gopi for helping him and they share a cute miniscule eyelock. Gopi turns around happily but turns back and calls him but he has already dialled anita;s no and is talking to her. Gopi looks disappointed and Ahem notices and tells her to go and he will join shortly. Gopi leaves dejected.
Rajpal Nagar
Urmi gets a call from politician ramcharan doshi's PA that he wants to meet kinjal didi and see the water dripping kanhaji idol the next day. Urmi is super pleased and rushes to kinjal saying they will need to ensure about the idol water. Even kinjal is pleased that politician is coming for her blessing.
Break
Urmi is hammering on the statue to get more water from the idol. She wants a bigger hole to ensure that more water comes out. (stupid women!just tolerating the scene knowing that they are ending up in jail!). Someone knocks on their door and Kinjal complains it must be Dhawal but Urmi says he has gone out and will be back the next day(is he selling baniyan the whole night too?šŸ˜†). Their neighbour barges in and complains that they are disturbing with their hammering and his water filter is not working. He goes to check in the room and sees water seeping from the idol and realizes that its coming from his water filter on the other side of the wall. Urmi tries to pacify him and the neighbour complains that he will tell the chawl people that they are fooling everyone. Urmi promises a share from the donation that will come from the politician and the neighbour demands 40% share. Urki are irritated 😃.
Here Gopi enters the room and Ahem is sitting on the sofa, she moves towards him with a water jug and Ahem notices her and goes to her. He takes the water from her and tells her he knows what she wants to say. She turns away and says she is scared. Ahem holds her and turns her towards him😳, asks her to look at him and assures her that he does not like to lie too and they will tell everything to koki. When gopi asks really? he asks her doesnt she trust him?...(i saw a couple of scenes from last yr yesterday where he was a monster to her and i am irritated with him but he was so cute in this scene😳)...
Here raashi enters anita's room with CD and eye mask and tells anita that its instrumental music and will relieve anita of all stress. Anita says she has no stress and is waiting for nilesh return so that they can go for their honeymoon. Raashi looks worried and plays the music for anita. She asks her to lie down and makes her wear the eye mask. She prays that she is responsible for anita marriage break so she spent 1000 rs for eye mask and cd and asks for forgiveness(really wonder how her brain functions!😲)...anita gets up after raashi leaves the room and wonders how did she forget. she calls up nilesh (ahem) and gohem look worried again. Gopi gets him a kerchief to cover the phone and ahem takes the call. gopi moves towards the bed and anita asks "nilesh" if he had slept. he says no and she says how could he before wishing her goodnite. Ahem says goodnite and anita complains that he was more romantic before marriage and asks for a goodnite kiss. Ahem looks at gopi worriedly, anita insists. ahem starts moving towards gopi with a smile on his face and kisses her on the cheek!šŸ˜³ā¤ļøšŸ„³šŸ˜ā˜ŗļøgopi is super shocked but pleased ā˜ŗļø..(ahem looked super pleased that he got an excuse to kiss his wife!) the same time anita is shown to kiss on the phone..dont think ahem was aware of that ā˜ŗļø
Precap
Kinjal calls up ahem and ahem is shocked...gopi and koki are looking at ahem and he tells them that urmi and kinjal are arrested and all shocked.
Again, sorry if i missed out anything...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks a lot deepu for the wonderful update...
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Thanks for the update. 😊
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Thanx for a beautiful update! ā­ļø
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Thanks for the update , congrats dipsy it was well written and very detailed . Superb
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved your update ... Thankyou!!!
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šŸ‘Great job. Thank you very much. I can't see the episode yet so really appreciate the detailed update.

YEA FOR TWO THINGS - The kiss & Urki in JAIL!!!!!!!!!!🄳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for the written update.
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Thankz dipsy šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ and well done on your first update šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks - need to push up the thread - almost missed it!

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