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Vidisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part-7

Koki paced up and down the hall. She did that whenever she was in a tricky situation…and today she was confronting a far worse situation… She had thought about the Rashi-Urmi-Kinjal's involvement in smuggling drugs to MM but it seemed improbable. Urmi certainly didn't know what cocaine was..Rashi hadn't gone out and a discreet search through her finances revealed that she hadn't withdrawn any money recently…plus after the kidnapping incident she was mortally scared of hoodlums. Kinjal hadn't visited MM for a long time and since she couldn't possibly have an accomplice inside MM even she could be excluded for the time being….So who is left?...Was Anita a drug addict? She did behave strangely..but could she be an addict?

Koki asked Ahem whether Anita behaved strangely at times. Ahem gave an affirmative reply but attributed her behavior to difficulties in adapting to the new family … Koki had her own doubts about Ahem's explanation.

Meethi was summoned into Koki's darbar. It appeared as if she was quaking with fear..She stammered and told Koki that she did find Anita 'lost in another world' at times….Koki sent her away- she got what she wanted to know…Meethi's constant refrain was "Nani Bhabhi I am innocent"..this got on Koki's nerves but she suppressed her anger and decided to gather more information about Anita's drug habit and cocaine peddlers in town.

She tried telling her theory to the inspector but his lackadaisical approach inflamed her…She remarked "kuch log Khakhi pehanke poore police department ki izzat khaak mein milate hai"…

A private detective agency was hired to gather information from rehabilitation centres…

The next day proved to be luckier for Koki… a small report tucked away among advertisements held a ray of hope…….and the detective agency gave her the news she wanted- Anita was addicted to cocaine – her former roommate could vouch for it….and two years ago she was admitted to a rehab for cocaine addiction.

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-Eris-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

So she was an addict?? Twist!! Cant wait for more,:-)

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FlowerHater

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

waiting waiting waiting for more!!!!! also for Nazdeekiyaaannn!!!!!

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Vidisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Part- 8

Part-8

The newspaper reported that a small-time drug peddler Piloo Shah has been murdered near his shack in Remington chowk…Koki found the information worth pursuing. The police labeled him as a victim of gang rivalry but Koki was skeptical and obtained the address of the dead man's family. She took Dhawal along with her to meet Piloo's family. Dhawal couldn't understand why Koki wanted to go to such a seedy area inhabited by crooks.

Piloo's brother Kallu was a dirty man clad in rags. His eyes were red and menacing..the scar on his right cheek gave him a menacing look. The scar was certainly made by knife.

His speech betrayed signs of his inebriated state. He kept repeating that his brother wasn't killed by a gangster… some rich son of a bitch was the killer…even though he was far away when bullets were being pumped in piloo's body he could swear that the man didn't appear to be from their ilk. "He had the swagger of an arrogant and rich swine. Koki shook her head and decided to return home.

Two kids stopped them and told that they have some information which they will tell her in exchange for Rs.50. Koki muttered some banality about kids and handed over the money. The younger of the two kids tugged at Dhawal's trousers and said that the assailant went away in a "biggg car of the same colour as Dhawal's pants". The elder of the two showed off his literacy by rattling out the registration number. Koki didn't trust his memory fully but decided to find out more about the car's owners.

A few thousand rupees exchanged hands and it was revealed that Mrs.Vaishali Pandya was the owner of the car…Koki handed over the address to Dhawal and asked him to hide near her house and click photographs of everyone who visited the house and their cars. The hapless man had to do what Koki had asked him to do. He silently cursed his luck for having an eccentric saas. He spent the day clicking photographs..his camouflage was perfect and no one spotted him. He returned to MM at 9 P.M and showed Koki the photos he had clicked on his "best and best" mobile….He was pleased to notice that Koki was scrutinizing the pictures.

//one or two more updates more//

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FlowerHater

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

arey waah!!!! seems like vidisha today is in a very good and giving mood!!!! fulfilling all our wishes!!!!!!! loved it!!!!! waiting for next (I know I am very nagging and there is no hope for me)

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-Eris-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Dhaval is koki s assistant! Fab gal!! Hope you update more :-)

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varshu27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

loved all the updates vidisha...loved the phrase kokis darbar...anitha was a drug addict and nobody knew...what is koki going to find in the photographs...cant wait for the next update...thanks for the pm...

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swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Superb updates.

Thoroughly enjoyed Detective Koki's style and her apprentice 'best and best'.

Update soon.

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Vidisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Four people had been snapped while either entering or leaving the house- and one among them was a recognisable face- Umang.

"Maaji do you know these people"

"One of them...now I know something about the tragedy"

"What do you know? Please tell me"

Koki pointed to a photo and said"He is Umang - Anita's elder brother"

"Dhawall jumped with joy...his work had provided Koki with a lead!!!

Koki looked at Dhawal disapprovingly and poor Dhawal became serious again.

Koki called the police and told them that she knows Anita's brother Umang's whereabouts.."Please come along with me and make enquiry. I have reasons to believe that he is involved in Anita's murder"

"Maaji how can you be so sure about his involvement?"

Koki hit her head and said "Hey Krishna Bhagwan..this man's brain is 20 years behind his body in terms of growth...eat these walnuts, anecdotal evidence suggests that these help in brain's development"

One hour later-

The police jeep stops in front of the house indicated by Kokila...Dhawal and Kokila got down from the car...they were startled when a ragged man jumped out of the window- Koki immediately recognised him and shouted "Please catch him".

Dhawal tried his best to remember who that man was but his memory failed him. He started munching walnut kernels in the hope of improving his recollection speed.

The man was caught by the constables and brought to them. Koki identified him as Kallu, the brother of Piloo Shah, the drug peddler who was murdered a few days ago... His blood stained clothes were a telltale sign that all was not well inside the house.

Kallu confessed that he had killed Umang to avenge his brother's death...Police broke open the main door and took Umang's corpse to hospital. The inspector thanked Koki and asked her for more information so that they can interrogate Kallu.

Koki smiled and said-

Umang doesn't have very cordial relations with our family. He was outraged when his sister married Ahem, ostensibly for love. The real reason was money- she was addicted to cocaine - and cocaine isn't cheap. I believe that the call from landline was made by Piloo Shah and the mobile num was Umang's.

Anita was running out of drugs and requested Piloo to supply them at night. They discussed the time and price over a phone call. Umang incidentally chose the same day and time to break into MM and murder his sis and make it look like a violent burglary. He chose to break open the terrace door as it was not as strong as the rest and would give away easily...and moreover a lot of people forget to lock the terrace door before going to sleep. This is common knowledge among thieves. Umang was lucky to find his victim waiting on the terrace- he made her unconscious using a towel dabbed with chloroform...the injury on her body are most likely due to the resistance she put. He stabbed her many times .Piloo saw him on his way back...

Piloo started blackmailing him and demanded huge sums as hush money. Umang was not a man to be messed with, he knew when to lie low and when to attack. Piloo paid the ultimate price for his audacity...

Kallu sang like a canary in the police station and the evidence he gave corroborated Detective Koki's theory.

---------------------------------------------The end...