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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part-3

Inspector first approaches Chirag Modi but had to let him go as his wife Hetal became hysterical. Parag Modi volunteered but Koki threw rules to the wind and joined Parag in answering the inspector's questions.

A lot of general questions were asked before they got to the point.

Inspector- Were you happy with your bahu? did Anita enjoy good relationship with your family.


Parag- Yes, we had given our assent. All were happy with Anitha...no ill-will.

Koki- We gave our blessings to Anita...there was minor friction in the family...Anita had a spat with Rashi yesterday. I don't know the reason behind it but it has got nothing to do with the fact that Ahem's ex wife was Rashi's cousin.

Inspector- That is news to me. Please give me all the details about Ahem's first marriage?

Koki- Aap kaise inspector hain? Don't you know that the famous singer Gopi was my bahu? Haven't you seen the pics in newspaper? I and Ahem ke papa did her Kanyadaan when she got married to Siddharth Patel? Now don't tell me that you don't know who Siddharth Patel is. You are too ill informed to be an investigator. Gujarat Mirror's Rajkot Supplement had one full page on her inspiring life.

// Inspector was dazed at Koki's outburst...he drank a glass of water and continued questioning.

He got the details of Ahem- Anita romance and how he married Gopi as per Koki's wish...

and then Gopi decided to distance herself from Ahem for his happiness-->

Gopi's voice was appreciated by the owner of zing music when he heard her sing a bhajan at a function organised by Baa's friend--->

Marriage proposal soon followed and the besotted Mr.Patel gave Gopi her first break as a singer( with Baa's blessings) -->

Gopi got divorced and married Siddharth as per Koki and Baa's wish-->
Gopi is happy with her new family and requested Koki to get Ahem married to Anita--->

Ahem got married to Anita//
Edited by Vidishaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Gopi married to someone else. Pl i hope rashi s innocent and sid s the culprit
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmmm!!!! supercool!!!! interesting!! plzz update soon! Is Ahem the killer?? sorry dnt throw chappals at me!!!!!!! hehehe!!! just my hyperactive thinking!!!!!!!lolzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Part-4

----Dedicated to Drac's memory- RIP---------


Jigar was quizzed on Anita's death but he failed to provide the investigators with any substantial info. All he said was that the brutal murder shocked him. He confessed that his heart was never ready to accept that Anita has replaced Gopi in his bhai's life.

Chirag couldn't provide any valuable information. Hetal, who had meanwhile calmed down kept repeating- "Hey bhagwaan why did a murder take place in our house". One word with Hetal and the investigator had no doubts about her mental capacity. He decided to quiz Rashi next.

Rashi was terror stricken. She looked so pale that the inspector felt that she could faint any moment. Rashi's elegant yellow sari had some stains on them which immediately caught the cop's attention. Rashi became conscious and tried covering it with her pallu...her actions made the inspector more suspicious and he asked a female constable to come to MM.

Rashi was aghast--she knew that something is up...she asked " Aapne lady constable ko kyun bhulaya".

The inspector didn't bother to reply. Instead he asked her about the brown stain on her sari...Rashi quickly replied that she got it while working in the kitchen.

"I..I..I..didn't kill her...please believe me..I felt insecure about my position in the house and fought with her because of that...but I never thought about killing her"

The investigator said- "Oh! so you killed her without thinking? So it wasn't a premeditated murder? The lady constable will take you into the room and you have to change your sari and handover the one you are wearing now...it will be sent for forensic analysis.

The inspector extracted further information on Gopi-Ahem-Anita relationship from her and made a mental note about meeting Gopi to listen to her version of things at MM. He noted down Gopi's address in his pad.

Rashi started crying as the lady constable arrived.

It was Ahem's turn next-
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Longer and quicker updates pl. This has me hooked. Love the line about hetal s mind 🤣 pl update soon and yes pv rocks!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb update... waiting for more more and more!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vibz88

Longer and quicker updates pl. This has me hooked. Love the line about hetal s mind 🤣 pl update soon and yes pv rocks!


Sure ..will update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved this Vidisha. Can't wait for the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting

what if AHem is revealed to be a wife man-handler: wife beater . . .

it seems marriage gets the worst out of him and he has a tendency to take over a year to realise the nature of who he is married to. .

IT WAS AHEM :: fingers pointing now lOL

(I can just imaginve the look on his face in sucha situationj:::: Look: Up, Down, Left Right, Roll eyes, and say "Wooo" ... Eyes now crossed OUT: DUmbfounded yet again
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is so Poirot style Vidishaa.
Rashi is in trouble it seems - something doesn't sit too well here.
Next Ahem to be interrogated. Update soon.

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