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Posted: 13 years ago
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It comes just to me. Nice idea . It is interesting to see that how kokila iwill helpful in solving problem.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Finally got round to reading up on all the parts. This is great Vidisha, am looking forward to the next part 😛. Please could you also PM me too when you update, thanking you 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part-6

Koki spent the entire day trying to unravel the mystery….who could have killed Anita? People will start talking nonsense about her family now. Poor Ahem dikra- he is already sick of life, how will he react to people accusing him of orchestrating this murder drama. Ahem did pull Anita away on Friday and it might have hurt her arms but the visible injuries aren't his doings …Savithaben will concoct an absurd story and air it to the world… The deceased should get justice and Ahem's life must be brought on track(whatever that means now).

Thank God the stain on Rashi was proved to be not blood…. Then,the row she had with Anita would have been enough to point the finger of suspicion on her. Mota Bhabhi would lose even the solitary neuron in her brain and become officially insane.

The police had searched her house thoroughly- it was a humiliating experience for Koki….and they found drugs in Ahem-Anita's room……so was Anita on drugs???Was it planted?...or as people are alleging, did Ahem drug her?...

No..No…No..My dikra can't stoop so low. He is above all these violent acts and scheming…why would he kill Anita when he could have opted out of the marriage? Gopi is happily married and is expecting her first child…What will her in-laws think now?? This happened within three days of Gopi attending the party thrown by Ahem-Anita…hope those people don't link the two things together..and thank God that Gopi got such an understanding life partner..my ever sacrificing daughter Gopi's happiness shouldn't be snatched away. Thank God they didn't cross question Gopi …the process would have distressed her. Siddhath had told her that Gopi's emotions were clear when her statement was being recorded by the police..she was upset at the turn of events and prayed for Anita's soul. The purity of her heart never ceases to amaze Siddharth….but…She is pregnant and shouldn't undergo emotional upheavals. Yes,I will get to the bottom of it..Krishna Bhagwan Please help me in my search for truth.

"Perhaps the unknown numbers hold the key to the mystery….I must find out more about it"… Koki pulled a few strings and the police agreed to her request. The search reached an abrupt end when it was found that the SIM was obtained using forged documents and the remaining calls were made from public telephones. The telephones didn't belong to any particular locality. The criminal was definitely clever in covering his tracks.

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Murderers will try to recall the sequence of events, they will remember exactly what they did just before and just after. But they can never remember the actual moment of killing. This is why they will always leave a clue.
Peter Ackroyd

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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
One or two more updates to go...shall do it soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plzz pllzzz vidisha!!!!1 more updates!!!!!😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: dipeshboi

its not enough...whats next?????


Shall be updated again today😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Can't wait for the next update. Hooked.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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the story is getting interesting day by day. pls update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Detective Koki on the go 😛
The suspense really has me hooked. Looking forward to the next update. Thank You for the PM 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You promised you would update again:-( :-( :-(

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