OS:Gopi's tantrum- Fourth and definite last update - Page 12

👏A brilliant os and an amazing ending. It was a breath of fresh air for me after watching Gopi being the lamb all the time. I know I will come back to read this OS because it is unique. 😊You should write more OS's like this (especially when there is a kalakaari track🥱). I prefer this tigress Gopi to the real Gopi. Thank you for keeping us entertained with this OS.😃

Wow Xarina !! I mean, really WOW. I just cannot express how happy it makes me to see a strong Gopi that at last stood up for herself against Urshi !! Just plain brilliance. 👏👏👏 I can't thank you enough 🤗

That was a wonderful update. Loved all parts with new gopi n thanx for pm. Hope to see gopis this avtar.

Originally posted by: Vinder90

wooo , WONDERFULextremely awesome OS, abolutely LOVED IT, wow, GOpi. . .wow, i'm speechless. . .

Thank you. Vinder.

Originally posted by: Justlikethat1

That was just Awesome

Wow.. What a Gopi.. Urmila and Rashi need such a hiding.. They need to be taken apart.. And it was Gopi who did that.. Wow.and Wow.. Xarina.. that was the best update ever.. The shameless Urmi for once had no words to say. the ending was superbly symbolic.. Beautiful

Thank you

Originally posted by: shruthi2010

that was brilliant xarina.
just the thing we all want.
the whole story was running as a picture in my mind.
i really want gopi to give this kind of blasting to urmi for real

Thanks Shruts

Originally posted by: navyab

Oh Xarina...u shuld not end this...this OS was so fun...I want another part of Ahem & Gopi fighting ...Ahem getting the end of the stick & in these emotions...they end up making love...it would be so fun !!!...pls...pls...Xarina !!!

Thank you Navya. There really should be another part? Are you sure?

Originally posted by: doc4ever

Brilliant update ...enjoying seeing Gopi giving them a taste of their own medicine...they so deserve it!!! The way Gopi had an answer to everything UrShi was telling her was just awesome...

Loved it...! Thank u!

Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: X.Sisi94

Amazing Story Xarina

Realy loved the Gopi from your story soo strong

lovely story enjoy every part of it!

Thank you.

Originally posted by: tamzin43

you talking to me huh b*tch urmi ki to band baaj geya wow wow wow mind blowingly good zee i wish i was there to see rashi and urmi out the door and say goodbyeee i wish the cvs would put this in the show gopi ki sabbur ki limit ghatum ho gaya they must put in ..loved loved it well done fantastic hoping for some more os from you very soon pretty plz

I take it you liked it then? Thanks Tamzin for the vote of confidence.

Originally posted by: Dhabu89

Now that is what I would like to call sweet justice. Gopi has found her spine and she made sure everyone else saw it as well including Ahem.,.Xarina this is another fantabulous update from you. Even though it is the last part, it was well worth the tears and pleas from UrShi. I am so happy, I could jump for joy...Thank you so much for this new building dream of sweet justice...as always you are the best

Simply stupendous, fantabulous, amazing, outstanding...and of course mind blowing justice

Thank you friend.

Originally posted by: Sandy914

excellent.. but i don't want this to be end.. lOVED IT.

Thank you so much

No. Thank you for liking it

Originally posted by: NazmaJ

Xarina you legend!!!

I absolutely loved this update!! I can't believe you've ended it!! I so wanted to read more and more of this new Gopi!! Ahem has so much more respect for his wife and he seems a little in awe of her!!

Again I repeat I loved it!! Urmi got what was coming to her and Gopi came into her own!!

Oooh. I am a leg end. Thank you Nazma

Originally posted by: sbp1971

Fantastic Xarina, of the three part Urmila blasting is my favorite hands down. And Ahem knows where she stands on the issue, and even opened an account at a bangle shop for her for future, I must say he is well prepared.

Wished it hadn't ended yet, but what an ending. Loved it. Thanks.

Thank you Shilpa. Looks like there is one more to be done.

Originally posted by: suk19

brilliant love it fabulous

Thanks Suks.

Originally posted by: aris22l

What an update full of dhamakas! Surely, this is not the end of it? Please Xarina, we need one more update with Gohem - round 2. She still hasn't forgiven him. So there is no closure yet, please one more chapter. You have to end it with Ahmeji finally telling her what she wants to hear.

Thanks Aris. Will see if there is any room for one more update.

Originally posted by: ZinaaArif

Amazing story very nice os!

Thank you.

Originally posted by: taniks

Omg I loved it ,loved it ,loved it . Great conclusion , ur gopi has fire in her and I loved the blasting she is giving and warning glares to ahem. This is what is badly needed in th serial , the kitten needs to turn to a tigeress, and do some verbal bashing to the 3 witches and ahem.well written xarina, I have to I really enjoyed every minute spent reading this . I raise my coffee mug in the air to salute u and ur gopi .

Salute to our never ending spirit Taniks. Thank you.

Originally posted by: swasthi

Xarina what a dynamic ending. Well done.

As I read the lines spoken by Gopi to Rashi and Urmila it felt like they were trailblazers for her. I look forward to seeing this in the show one day sooner or later. It sure will be the one to watch.

Seldom is Gopi portrayed in this manner and it is very refreshing to read an OS like this.

Thank you Swasthi.

Thanks.

Will try and see what I can do.

Thank you.

Thank you Varshu.

Thank you. Will definitely try.

Aww thanks, Tina. Will see if there is any spice left in my cupboard.

Thank you.

Thanks Goody.

Thank you.

Thank you for your comments joicej. Much appreciated.

Thanks Ahlam.

Thank you

Thanks. Love to see a Gopi like this too.

In fact. Thank you everyone for all your nice comments. It is encouraging to read them and makes me strive to write more.

Xarina xx

Wahay caught up with all chapters.
Too good
And new chapter , wahay that wicked loved it xarina

WOW!! Fabulous update Xarina, loved it very much... i am 16!! 😛

Ahem finally remembered what happened on Holi... its very beautifully written! loved it! 👏

Brilliant Xarina! 👏 Just loved it!!!!!! 😃

😳that update was lovely xarina😳😳👏

That was a fantastic coda to a superb OS Xarina.