OS:Gopi's tantrum- Fourth and definite last update

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Fantastic Xarina, of the three part Urmila blasting is my favorite hands down. And Ahem knows where she stands on the issue, and even opened an account at a bangle shop for her for future, I must say he is well prepared.

Wished it hadn't ended yet, but what an ending. Loved it. Thanks.

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aris22l

@aris22l

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

What an update full of dhamakas! Surely, this is not the end of it? Please Xarina, we need one more update with Gohem - round 2. She still hasn't forgiven him. So there is no closure yet, please one more chapter. You have to end it with Ahmeji finally telling her what she wants to hear.

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Omg I loved it ,loved it ,loved it . Great conclusion , ur gopi has fire in her and I loved the blasting she is giving and warning glares to ahem. This is what is badly needed in th serial , the kitten needs to turn to a tigeress, and do some verbal bashing to the 3 witches and ahem.well written xarina, I have to I really enjoyed every minute spent reading this . I raise my coffee mug in the air to salute u and ur gopi .

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Xarina what a dynamic ending. Well done.

As I read the lines spoken by Gopi to Rashi and Urmila it felt like they were trailblazers for her. I look forward to seeing this in the show one day sooner or later. It sure will be the one to watch.

Seldom is Gopi portrayed in this manner and it is very refreshing to read an OS like this.

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Tahira

@tamzin43

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: navyab
Oh Xarina...u shuld not end this...this OS was so fun...I want another part of Ahem & Gopi fighting ...Ahem getting the end of the stick & in these emotions...they end up making love...it would be so fun 😉 !!!...pls...pls...Xarina !!!

yes yes plz do this👏👏 navya has a great idea👏 plz zee you still have to sort out gohem plz dont end it without them making up and making love plzzz i beg you 😭😭😭
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varshu27

@varshu27

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

That was awesome Xarina...loved how gopi dealt with urmi...what I wouldn't give to see this in the show ...fantastic end with ahem and koki adding their silent support to gopi...thank u

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A2ZVictory

@A2ZVictory

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Wonderful Xarina, loved it. Pls write more

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Nandita / Tina

@5cents

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Xarina, abs mind blowingly lovely...LOVED IT!!! 👏 I loved your spunky Gopi!!
Ahem's princess wifey has turned into princess in arms lol. You sure can add some more and make one grand finale chapter!!