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Tahira

@tamzin43

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#331

wow wow wow breathtakingly beautiful just reread the whole 6 chapters brilliant well done guyz 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#332

Wow that was beautiful
Totally romantic , and yes
Both of you have captured
So many of our hope and dream
For gohem in this chapter. Excellent
Execution of equally excellent ideas for this
Chapter. Congratulations shilpa and
Swasthi on a producing a masterpiece
I wish they (cvs) handle the confession
As beautifully as you have done. I loved
So many things in this piece but the thing
I really appreciate the most is how urll redone
Things of the past and yourll showed his remorse.
True love is never all hearts and flowers but also
That road is paved wud pain , which is y when u
Reached ur destination , the value of that love by far eclipse
Anything on heaven and earth , this is shown quiet clearly
In this piece. Thank you so much for this

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varshu27

@varshu27

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#333

Ladies u have clearly outdone urselves...what an update this was...thank u so much...loved how ahem slowly but surely made gopi comfortable and secure around him...absolutely loved their outing...and ahems birthday and gopis gift...made me teary eyed ...and a honeymoon for our fav couple...love it...i feel like no matter what comments i write its not going to do justice to ur writing...so all i can say is bravo...👏...take a bow ladies...u have indeed made our dreams come true...

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ANJ4

@ANJ4

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#334

can't wait to read ... but tooo much going on right now.

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Justlikethat1

@Justlikethat1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#335

Shilpa , Swasthi.. Beautiful.. That is all I am able to articulate now.. This part was so soothing and peaceful, it flowed through my heart as I read it.👏⭐️ You have both created a heart touching beautiful story that would be well worth seeing on screen..

The way Ahem showing Gopi that he loves and cares for her is awesome.⭐️ Little things make a marriage.. Not expensive gifts.. A small action of serving extra on something a wife likes shows how much a husband knows a wife. Ahem, I am glad showed that he cared and he had loved for quite some time..

My favorite scene was the gift he got from Gopi on his B'Day.. The vulnerability that he may not get the second chance he so wanted to have was heart touching in his actions.. Thank you..

Jigar's decision is to be applauded. It needs to be seen though as to where the CVs want to take the story for Rashi and Jigar.

Gopi's simple belief and her faith and love will have to give her the sweet love like in this SS.. Thank you both again for this master piece.. I will be reading it over again and again🤗

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Eva456

@Eva456

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#336

WOW shilpa and swasthi!!!loved every word of ur ss!its just too good for words..u both make a great team.u should be working together more often in giving us these fantabulous treats!!thank u for ur fab ss:) xx

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Xarina

@Xarina

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#337

WOW, ladies. Excellent update. You have made me really happy. I loved seeing ahem and gopi's interaction with each other and the realisation that Ahem had that he had treated gopi so badly in the past. Loved the way he was making it up to her. Excellent in all aspects.👏👏

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Savi_S

@Savi_S

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#338

Amazing update shilpa and swasthi. Loved each part of right from starting till ending. End was just perfect. Ahem regreting his past behaviour towards gopi. U both hv done a briliant work. Hope cvs take a note from here n thank u both for this wonderful ss. Hope u update ur destiny ff soon.