SS: Finding My Love last part page 44 updated - Page 30

Shilpa & Swasthi awesome story beautifully written.
It is really heartwarming and sweet!!.
What a wonderful gift payal!! The payal will fill their life with wonderful music in the days to come!!
Keep writing & rocking!!!👍🏼❤️

Originally posted by: taniks

Oh wow that was incredibly beautiful , the story was so beautifully told , it was a gentle ,sweet yet intensely passionate love story . Awww ahem did it so well the dealing of those two witches and anita all the while so careful a very vunerable gopi . That scene was handled with such great skill of the storyteller cos 3 different emotions were displayed in that one scene , anger to the point of threatening ,regret and understanding and intense love and patience and all of it was done perfectly. That type of gift I wud never ever have suggested for gopi , but it was so perfect to ease her into a relationship of intimacy with her husband. I couldn't have ask for better way to convey his commitment to her . I have to say the scene wud him leaning against the counter looking at her , I could actually picture it in my mind , beautiful description made that possible . Congrats shilpa and swasthi on an incredible and amazin g chapter , really a piece to stick to the memory . Thank you.

Originally posted by: Aish3003

Wow... The scenes were beautiful... Really well written. Ahem is so adorable. Please keep writing...

The payal scene was too too too good!!

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

great update

both rashi and kinjal r shameless

even after being caught they have no remorse for what they have done to gopi

Originally posted by: sowmyadharini

nice part..
loved it..

Originally posted by: Arnisha

nyce jus loved every bit of this Anita being postive and excepting tht ahem has moved on n ahem standing up 4 gopi n having a go and rashi n kinjal nyce ending.. well dne to bth of u..

Originally posted by: Xarina

Shilpa. Swasthi. I am howling at the moment. That was just too beautiful and so romantic. Loved the kitchen scene and Ahem's words to Gopi that there are no limits to what happens in the sanctuary of their own room. Brilliant, brilliant update. /sniff, sniff, blows nose and smiles.😊.

Originally posted by: nilani19

Lovely Part!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: ZinaaArif

Amazing Update

Originally posted by: angelirebelli

I was off IF for a few days and you gurls have three fabulous updates, each better than the one before..

I just love the entire OS, the focus on GoHem is all that we need now. Ahem claiming what is his and warning trouble makers off is the right approach.

I so long to see this on SNS and until that happens I am so happy to have fab such superfab writer friends. ⭐️

Thank you ladies for making the time for this brilliant piece of work..👏👏👏

Looking forward to more, as usual...😳