OS: The day of first loves and dances (RaJi/GoHem)

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swasthi

@swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

That was an outstanding writing Kristin.

It was so lovely to read young Ahem being in charge, Gopi being sweet, Rashi knowing how to make the most of her time and Jigar enjoying his moment. Interesting to read about Gopi's elder brother too and his meeting up with Ahem.

Everyone were in such a happy place.

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ANJ4

@ANJ4

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

very nice ... we all know what happens poor gopi after the dance.

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Kristin

@Ichangedit

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: swasthi
That was an outstanding writing Kristin.

It was so lovely to read young Ahem being in charge, Gopi being sweet, Rashi knowing how to make the most of her time and Jigar enjoying his moment. Interesting to read about Gopi's elder brother too and his meeting up with Ahem.

Everyone were in such a happy place.

Thanks so much Swasthi 😃

Glad you liked my writing and the story. It was something I was thinking about for a long time and the idea for Gopi's elder brother I had for even longer. Just thought she would deserve someone like that!!

Originally posted by: ANJ4
very nice ... we all know what happens poor gopi after the dance.

Thank you Anju 😃 well yes we all know what happened with Gopi afterwards but it seems like she will get her happy end after all with her first love Ahem 😳