FF:Where were you? pt 12 pg 13updated - Page 2

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varshu27 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fantastic updates...ahem already thinks gopi as his love...do update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 3:
During class, Ahem went and sat next to Anita, ditching his best friend and making anita feel very special.
Ahem: Hey...umm...woh Anita, can you tell me your house address. I've decided that i want to come to your house today.
Anita was confused, but that didnt matter to her as ahem just made her day after ruining it. Anita gave ahem the address and told ahem to come around 4 o'clock as she wants to open the door for him. ahem agrees to what anita said, but he had other ideas running through his head.
As soon as college finished, ahem was the first one to leave. He just couldnt wait to see her beautiful eyes and her beautiful silky hair. Dhaval had noticed the difference in ahem ever since he bumped into that girl, but he was actually happy for him. ahem always told dhaval that he will marry a girl of his mother's choice, but dhaval disagreed. he knew that ahem will fall in love one day, with a girl of his choice. It was 3:00pm and ahem had arrived at anita's house. he knew that anita wouldnt open the door and his love would. ahem presses the bell, hoping the right person would open the door. Meanwhile, Gopi was dusting Urmilla's modern art near the door until she heard the bell. She went and opened the door and not noticing who it was, she told the young man to go fix the taps.
Gopi: thank god you're on time, go straight and then turn left and then right and you'll find the kitchen.
Gopi then continued with dusting the modern art and was wondering how many classes she had missed and was worried that she might have missed out on a lot. suddenly gopi realised that the man/ahem was still waiting at the door. Ahem just stood there admiring gopi.
Gopi: ummm...excuse me but i think you really need to go and fix the taps as aunty ji will get very angry at both of us if the tap isnt fixed...so please...
Ahem: Hey do i look like a plumber to you?
Gopi: woh...ummm, no...if you're not a plumber than who are you?
Ahem: im gthe guy who you bumped into today or Ahem modi.
Gopi: listen...i said i was sorry, i was in a ruu...wait, arent you anita's boyfriend?
Ahem: umm...yeah..no, i am her friend and she invited me today.
Gopi: ok, so i'll go call her, shes getting dressed
Ahem: Nahin, that wont be necessary
Gopi: Why not?
Ahem: umm, coz she's getting dressed na, and plus im not really here to see her
Gopi: then who do you want to see?
Ahem: you
Gopi: pardon...
Ahem: i mean, i am here to see her but i can wait.
Urmilla: Gopii
Gopi: Coming aunty ji, sorry i have to go...come in if you like
Ahem: no..no.. you go, ill stay here outside.
Urmilla called gopi to do some more chores and to prepare dinner. Urmilla told Gopi to make chinese for dinner. Urmilla said that she will not eat dinner at home as she has to go to her friends house and anita feels like eating chinese today. Gopi finished her chores and eventually the plumber came and fixed the tap and so gopi got started with the dinner. As soon as gopi finished with the dinner, anita and ahem came into the kitchen. anita came to introduce her so called boyfriend to gopi, but gopi didnt seem to care. ahem had been waiting all afternoon to see gopi's face and her beautiful smiles. Anita asked gopi what was for dinner and gopi replied with chinese. Anita blasted at gopi saying that she should've asked her what to cook instead of making her own choices. Anita immediately orders gopi to go make italian, as italian is very romantic and gives ahem a look. He saw gopi's sad face and couldnt bear it. Ahem immediately cut in and said, i dont want to eat italian, i love chinese and i would like to eat chinese. Anita was sad to hear this, but she would do anything to impress her ahem.
hope you like pt 3 :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow love it come soon yaar cant too long pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
read all the three updates
its very good dear...loved it...
its very different...update soon
varshu27 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful update...love how ahem is head over heels for gopi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Brilliant update!😃

Loved it very much!😛

Update soon, Can't wait to read more!🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fab!! loved it...ahem is straight forward isnt he?

anita thinks she is ahem girlfriend...lolss...

anyways continue soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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not just like.. super like it!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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your ff is super lovely res please come soon pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 4:
anita talked all throughout dinner and didnt let ahem or gopi to talk. during dinner, ahem gave gopi glances but gopi didnt look up once. as soon as dinner was done, anita ordered gopi to make them milkshakes as soon as she finished washing the dishes. anita grabbed ahem's hand and took him to her room. ahem immediately let go of anitas hand and started praising about the food. Anita got jealous and said that gopi learnt from her. Ahem knew that was trying to impress him and she was jealous. soon gopi went to anitas room with the milkshakes. anita took the tray and slammed the door on gopis face. gopi yelled from outside anitas room, that if they needed anything they can call her and she is going to be studying in the kitchen.
anita asked ahem if he was done with his milkshake so that she can call gopi. ahem says no need and he will put the glasses away. anita agrees and ahem takes the tray and heads straight to the kitchen. meanwhile gopi was searching for something in the pantry, she couldnt find what she was looking for so she took the high chair and looked for it. when gopi did chores or something she would always sing as time passed quicker. this time gopi was singing as well and she got so carried away that she didnt realise ahem. ahem placed the tray on the bench and stood there admiring gopi and her beautiful singing. as gopi was coming down, she missed the step and was about to fall until someone from behind grabbed her. his soft muscular hands touuching hers. when she looked up, she saw ahem. she didnt realise what happened to her but ahem and gopi were definietly not in this world. they eyelocked each other for like five minutes until they heard anitas voice.
Anita: ahem...ahem...where are you?
Gopi immediately came out of ahems hand and headed straight to the sink to wash the left over dishes.
Anita: here you are. (she gave gopi a glare) what are you doing here?
Ahem: umm...woh...woh...umm..(gives gopi a glance) (gopi gives him a glance), i umm. i got lost and i came back right where i started.
Anita: oh ok.
Ahem: i think i should go home now, as dhaval might be waiting for me as i have to meet him somewhere.
Gopi remebered that name, Dhaval. she just couldnt keep it in and asked ahem who dhaval was. ahem was quite sad as he thought that gopi would be interested in his best friend instead of him. Ahem answered that dhaval is his best friend and his name is dhaval shah and got taken away by his kaka when his father died. gopi was gobsmacked, she had no words and then finally she told ahem that dhaval is her brother. ahem couldnt believe it, his best friend was related to his love. ahem thought that dhaval could bring them together. ahem says that he will call dhaval right now and tell him the great news. that made gopi happy and ahem couldnt stop staring at her.
Anita: umm, excuse me guys but im standing right here. can you please have your family reunion elsewhere. somewhere away from here and plus when mummy hears about this she is going to get really mad.
gopi didnt argue back and told ahem to leave it and she'll meet him some other time. ahem got mad and left without saying bye.
Anita: whats wrong with him?
ahem was driving furiously and entred his house without noticing that jigar was standing there.
Jigar: bhai, whats wrong, im standing right here and you didnt even notice me. you even left college really early. i heard that you went anita's house?
Ahem: anita and her stupid mummy. how can she put up with their selfishness?
Jigar: who bhai? gopi..yeah she is so sweet thats why she is my best friend.
Ahem: gopi...and your best friend?
Jigar: yeah, why whats wrong with that bhai? well shes rahi's best best best friend...basically like sisters and eventually she became my best friend too.
great dhaval and now jigar, this relationship is gonna go great. ahem thought to himself. ahem told jigar that he was going to bed and that they will meet in the morning. ahem went to his room and couldnt stop thinking about when he grabbed gopi and stopped her from falling. he couldnt go to sleep all night, he just couldnt wait to meet her again. at the shah mansion, gopi was having the same problem. she never had this kind of feeling. she remembered his soft hands and his brown eyes. she couldnt sleep either. gopi didnt know if she was in love but ahem definitely that gopi is going to be his wife and with the help of jigar and dhaval.
Edited by ashy924 - 13 years ago

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