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varshu27

@varshu27

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Posted: 13 years ago

awww... aish absolutely loved it...so you got ur wish...ahem with tears in his eyes...thanks for the pm...

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Nazma

@NazmaJ

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Posted: 13 years ago

Really enjoyed these scenes!!

It's always nice to see things written that show the turmoil going through Ahem's mind!! We all want to see him worried for his wife and wishing for her attention!! Loved the use of mobile phones and the build up to Ahem looking at Gopi!!

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CravingKhana

@CravingKhana

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Posted: 13 years ago

knew the cell phone would be handy someday other than bringing RaJi 2gether hope it pans out that way and they talk...very nice Aish👏👏

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sweety

@sweetsugar

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Posted: 13 years ago

Aish totally loved it , couldnt stop myself from reading it again 😳 Thanks for the Pm dear !

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swasthi

@swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Aish this was beautifully told and made complete sense too.

This so likely to happen, especially him sending a message. Second night will be the harder one to cope with.

WIll you be continuing it? Please do so.

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-GayabCat-

@-GayabCat-

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Posted: 13 years ago

That intriguing
Thanks for the doze

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Maham

@Allbut1

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Posted: 13 years ago

Aww Aish that was absolutely wonderful! It made total sense, but you ended it on such a cruel note...I can't help but want more! But either way, beautifully written. I wish we get to see something like that on screen, that cell phone needs to come to better use, so let it serve its purpose in reuniting GoHem!

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Munni

@munnihyderabad

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Posted: 13 years ago

Aish dear 🤗 this is for u,,,,

very beautiful scenario and looks like the most probable scenario to break the ice would be using the cell phone t communicate with her👏

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Fahima

@famzii05

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Posted: 13 years ago

fabulous scenes Aishwariya...really liked ahems thought, and the use of the cellphone was fab...really great job!! 👏...btw thanks for the PM...

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Justlikethat1

@Justlikethat1

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Faantastic... 😊 So much turmoil for Ahemji and like always he takes the smartest way out. Good use of the cellphone by the way 👏

But Aish, this is something that I wish they would show us in SNS. Ahem's anguish at Gopi avoiding him and his desperate need to see her... I hope the CVs are listening..

Superb writing 👏 Will wait for more such scenes 😃

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