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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: xXShriyaXx
wonderful start...pls send me a pm when u update:)

Gland you enjoy the part & I'll pm you.

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Hetp
Hey awesome VM...touched me alot...i would have loved if it would be of few more mins😉

I promise to make the Video mix a-little longer next time. It is very touching.

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Aish3003
Wow... explosive start.. esp with the VM,
Please update soon
PM if you can.

Waiting eagerly

It was explosive start? Thank you

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sks21
amazing start dear...love it
and loved the vm too
eagerly waiting for ur update

First part coming soon

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: famzii05
nice, update soon please!!

Surely will update soon..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Very nice start Cant wait to read your ff

Loved the vm if you are going to pm people pleas put me in your pmlist

dont want to miss the Update

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: varshu27
that was an awesome start...loved the vm...and the scenes u have used in it...do update soon...

Indeed the video mix is very touching. I hope the first part would touch your soul as well.

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: X.Sisi94
Very nice start Cant wait to read your ff
Loved the vm if you are going to pm people pleas put me in your pmlist
dont want to miss the Update

Actually I am not going to make a pm list, but going to ask each time I post a thread - please press like button (that's how i'll pm people)..

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

I am touch by the response I've gotten from everyone. I know the video mix is very touching. I hope this fiction also would touch your soul too!

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Part One

Kaun Hoon Main... Gopi Ahem Modi ye phir Gopi

... I always dream of getting married into a good family. Indeed I am married into a good family (Modi family), but every girl just don't want a good-loving family but her husband's love and support in life. I'm lucky that my in-laws love me, but always been unlucky in having anyone's love for who I am. I always ask myself a question "kaun hoon main" I don't know much about my parents or you can say about myself. I only know one thing I've grew up in my Mama - Mami's place with Rashi ben, but I don't know why Kanha enjoys taking my test. Everyone know that I am lack up in my education or you can say I wasn't given the chance of studying much because of Mami's nature. Than how do I know how to write in Hindi or understand bits and piece of English. Some people say its Kahan's miracle behind it, but my heart say something is hidden from me (par kyun). Its only time can reveal my questions. There are many questions that are unanswered before and after my marriage. Yep, I've gotten married few weeks ago. I can still remember those harmful words spoken by my husband on our wedding night. Many people say the first night is the night of two soul becoming one or hint of the future. Now I know what my future holds for me. Only pain and pain. Aur main hoon Gopi Ahem Modi. Can I call myself Gopi Ahem Modi when my husband himself doesn't consider me as his wife. Than how can I call myself a Modi. Who am I? Just a daughter-in-law of Modi family or Ahemji's wife! Its a quest that I have to walk on... only to figure out myself.

"Goodnight for now! We'll talk or in detail again when I am alone in this room. Yes my husband is gone away on business trip after arguing with his entire family." I know why he wanted to escape spending time with me because he loves someone else from his collage day. I personally don't know her name and never desire to know that person who has my husband's heart. A girl can tolerate any sort of pain in life, but not sharing her husband with anyone else. I wish destiny would be kind with me. Before it was Mami's torture and know my husband unwanted cruel behavior towards me.

(End of Gopi sharing her inner thoughts with us before laying down on the bed (for a-change or usually sleeping on the ground). She closed her eyes with many unknown question to be answered.

Part 2 on Page 9

Edited by Miketa - 13 years ago

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Aish3003

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

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Nice concept... the diary thing. Very unique. The identity crisis is so needed for Gopi's character. Please continue soon. Will be looking forward to your PM

Aish

Edited by Aish3003 - 13 years ago

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