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varshu27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

loved ur update...its great to see whats going on in ahems head...so its koki to the rescue...wonder what she will do...

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Aish3003

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: lexaxel
It's a pleasure to read Ahem's feelings😊.Very good, let him stew a bit, after all he treated our Gopi so terribly in the beginning😆.Curious about the next chapter😛.

Thanks..that is actually my aim...I can't give a sweetheart like Gopi without making him toil...He will have to prove that he deserves her. Lets see how I make him do that. 😉

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

hey very nice OS.. please update next chapter, cant wait to read it

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kavya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

loved this update...it was wonderful...
update soon cant wait to read the next part

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tina_1234

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

nyc part...waitin for d next now..if u hav a pm list plz add me

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Aish3003

@Aish3003

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: tina_1234
nyc part...waitin for d next now..if u hav a pm list plz add me

Definitely.! Thanks for the encouragement. I was afraid people won't like this chapter. Its a little against the mood of the show right now isn't it? On the show Ahem is in some kind of control. He knows what to do...The Ahem I am writing about is absolutely clueless.

Anyways I hope can do justice to him

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Nazma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Love it!!!!

Thanks for continuing this!!!

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Aish3003

@Aish3003

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: NazmaJ
Love it!!!!

Thanks for continuing this!!!

Thanks Nazma...Will be uploading chapter 3 very soon.

Have to proof read it...But I doubt it will make any sense to me before I find out what happens in today's episode...I am so completely hooked to the current track...My mind filled with all the possibilities...I won't be able to do justice to my story. 😆

I hope you read the next part when I upload and like that too.

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Blushy_Auntacid

@Blushy_Auntacid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

chapter 1; wow dude you are an awesome writer...loved the way you portrayed ahem's anger and possessiveness for gopi...he is like best husband...can't bear a wound on his lovely bride...and his argument with koki was perfectly written...i love it wholly

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Blushy_Auntacid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

awww wow... ahem in dreamland...i loved that scene in the rain...and he was like wishing a look of gopi😆...it was so funny...he hated rashi and urmi and back biting them mentally...i truly love his mental notes...and his concerned for gopi is truly well penned down...hey krishna bhagwaan me too wondering when these two confusion will flow out of the window...its damn good...waiting for chapter 3 eagerly...just update damn soon...

Edited by angie182 - 13 years ago

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