SS: To Belong Part *Note on page 70* - Page 46

Originally posted by: CHIKA784

RESERVED!👏

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yayyy im the first one to comment!😎

omg Shilpa,you never fail to surprise me with your amazing updates,omg Ahem dikra has made me proud today,getting married to Gopi again!,awww how sweeet!❤️ Loved the amount OF Gohem in this update and wahaay Gopi fnally accepting Ahem!👍🏼

I love how my Jigarji is back to his smiling former self,this Divya..hmm i have to make sure she's not a kalakarian first! 😆

Excellent update,will look forward to your next update,update soon!😳

Thank you so much Chikka. I am so glad you liked this update. I went to sleep after reading your comment, because I wasn't too sure about this update. I almost wrote Divya out, but then thought lets see where it leads me. Ahem remarrying and renewing the vows is my biggest wish and I hope some day they give us this.
Divya is complete opposite of Rashi, but not Gopi completely either. She is sweet and very friendly, I think she is a good choice for out Jigs.

Originally posted by: bhavya

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its really good...was waiting for this wedding ceremony...in SNS series but u made it happen in OS thanks a lot for wonderful, update...liked divya...😛

Thank you so much Bhavya. I meant to mention, it's nice to see you back, hope you stay with us now. Yes SNS also needs to give us this, I will keep my fingers crossed.

Originally posted by: Justlikethat1

Thank you.. Thank you.. I waited up for the update hoping you would make it today.. So first ⭐️ for the update..and another ⭐️ for the writing..

Shilpa, it was more than wonderful. Gopi forgave Ahem 😃 and has decided to take the relation forward.. Hmm ( a huge sigh of relief).. Loved Divya and Jigar. He deserves a sweet girl.. Love this Ahem who is caring and sweet and also sensitive not only towards his wife but also towards his brother..
A wedding. 😳 That was so sweet of Ahem to do that and the proposal was beautiful. His reaction to it conveys how much he was worried that Gopi would say no.. 👏

One more thing.. Gopi , Ahem and the nail paint scene.. Lovely. So casual but yet so poignant. Your Ahem just scored 150/100.. Good night and will again wait with bated breath for the next update to see what Ahem has in store for Gopi.


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I had to go back an get the sentence to actually quote but this one takes top honors..👏
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"Ji Devarji, I had to untangle some knots first, but I think I will be finished with it soon."

How very reflective of the phase their relationship is in and Gopi's dilemma before.. You are an excellent writer.😊

Awe..Thank you so much. I know it took me a while to post it, and I was actually going to continue but I thought it's better to stop where I did, but I will continue from where I left off.

Yes I thought it was time for Gopi to move forward, I think he has shown her in many ways how much he regrets what he did, and how much he wants a second chance, and the proposal cinch the deal for her.

It's about time Ahem starts realizing his world includes more people, not just his mom.

I just threw the nail polish scene to show the comfort level between the two, something couples do everyday without even realizing it, but for Gopi, all these moments are special.

She has untangle all the knot, but there may be one lingering one, which he will work on later.

I have no words to express my gratitude for all your wonderful comments, and it is great to have feedback from someone I think also is a wonderful writer. Thanks so much.

Originally posted by: vaasanthi

nice update ...how nice to c this nice ahem...and gopi seems to be to be trusting ahem now...

Thank you so much Vasanthi. Yes the trust is there, now they move forward together.

Originally posted by: tangam

Shilpa,

that was the chweetest of updates...very warm and cosy and I love that you did address the vows and I do hope they do that in the show...and all of the little nicities the lil gestures your Ahem is seen doing does so much more to bring them to gether in a more meaningful and elegent way. I hope the cv's take a leaf outa your book

Thanx again for the lovely update am off to bed now and I know you said half so hoping (no stress intended😉😃) for the next update soon.

ps I dont mind reading very long updates from you ...they are a dream to get thru...👏

Thank you so much Tangam. I am with you on hoping for the renewal of the vows. I want Ahem to make up everything he did to her in the past.

Although I am enjoying the show now, I still want to hit the CVs over the head sometimes for missed opportunities, but I hope they realize this and improve.

I will do my best to update soon.

Originally posted by: tina_1234

very nyc part..awww very cute part.yeahh so divya for jigar..thts really nyccc

Thank you so much Tina. Glad you are enjoying the story.

wow it fabulous now there will be love trust in there life thanx for making jigar smile

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

shilpa... just loved it simply superb... u r just amazing with this ff...

- somehow with the pregnancy thing i completely forgot about the wedding vows... but loved it wedding before godh bharai...

-so jagar is eager to go to work... good to see jigar smiling and divya seems like a nice girl...

- so Ahemjii is aware of pregnancy harmones... 😆

- gr8 gift crepe saree in red wow gopi looks like a pari with a tummy😆 ... i have one crepe saree in sky blue...

can't really wait for the next parts..

Thanks Munni. Truthfully I was going to jump right into Ghod Bharai, then I thought should Gopi be pouting or getting mad at not being able to see her feet, my biggest problem during pregnancy was being unable to shave because I couldn't bend, so I always got my leg waxed, which led me to Gopi needed to go to the beauty parlor anyways for Ghod Bharai, (I don't know about India, but here baby showers are big deal, manicure, pedicure, hair style and of course mehndi) so one thing led to another and I thought wait they needed to renew their vows and this is one way Ahem can win her trust.

The red sari idea I got from Navyabs comment about them doing all those rituals they missed out on, and of course nothing heavy for our pregnant Gopi, so I did some research and this is what I found, glad you liked it.

Next update...😕 Honestly this is how I am after watching today's fabulous episode.😲😍

😆 It might take me a while to recover. I have watched the episode three times.

Originally posted by: vibz88

Great update beautiful gohem interaction but you actually got divya in for jigar?? Wat about rashi?? You could ve made her suffer and change but i know this rashi is really evil.so no hope for her. *crying in corner *

Thanks so much Vibha. I thought long and hard and I just couldn't leave the poor guy sad, so yes Divya for him in this one. Don't worry Rashi is fine, I am sure.


Please don't cry, I promise you in my next fic that I write, Rashi will be very positive, and yes there will be Raji also, but I may play with Jigar's character a little.

Originally posted by: swasthi

You have brought the whole story to a head very well.

You have tied the emotional loose ends she had been facing and likened it to the tangled yarn of wool - great concept used!

Ahem is such a transformed man - there for her at every turn. His mum is very happy to see this change, which has spilled into his workplace as well.

Looking forward to the next update.

Thank you so much Swasthi. Yes it worked out the best this way, at first when I wrote her making the sweater I really hadn't linked it to her thoughts until it became tangled the first time, and thought what concept, as she slowly puts the sweater together, her thought will line up also. We are almost there, but our Ahemji will untangle that last knot also.

Thanks for all the wonderful comments, encouragements and the feedback. They inspire me to write even more.

Originally posted by: _Precious_

That was an emotional update and I absolutely loved it. I did not have any clue that Ahem will plan this second wedding and I really admire Ahem for this. This way Gopi will get the feeling that she belongs to her Ahemji completely and there is no place of any kind of insecurity. I so wish this kind of ceremony takes place in the show, but it seems nobody is aware of the taking back of vows and Gopi has no reservation with Ahem in the show now. But my wish is granted through your FF. Looking forward to the actual ceremony and the the godhbarai ceremony. Thanks for the pm.

Thank you so much Precious. Funny I had no clue either, but as I started plotting the next part, I thought it would be better to have that wedding again to show Gopi he means what he is saying. I hope, hope after today's episode, both Ahem and Koki remembers this and plan something like this soon to get rid of Gopi's fear. Glad you enjoyed the update.

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

awesome update

loved it

wow!!!!!!!!! ahem proposed and gopi accepted

waiting for their marriage

Thank you so much. Yes she couldn't resist the wonderful proposal.

Originally posted by: shruts18

lovely shilpa...what we dont get to see in SNS, you showed us...hope they get married in SNS, I have been dreaming of something like this to happen between gohem...you simply rock!😊

Thank you so much Shruti. Yes I too have been waiting for this moment in the show. I have little bit of hope after watching today's episode. I dream of the day they will grant us our wish, but I will have the wedding scene in the next update.

Originally posted by: rsk16

aww this was so sweet n cute.love divya -jigar.

and what shd i say for ahem.he has totally become the best hubby ever.

loved the update

Thank you so much. Glad you liked Divya and Jigar, and of course our Ahemji, what can I say, he just takes over as soon as I start writing, its how I want to see him.

Originally posted by: angelirebelli

OMG.. that was simply super !! Where on Gods earth do you get these ideas from ?

Needless to say, loved every bit of it... it was just awesome.. you are my JM for no reason.. ⭐️

Each and every scene fit in beautifully, I love the way Ahem is putting Gopi first and thinking for her and them. Love the fact that is isn't uptight or shy.. The best bit was Ahem playing Cupid.. This Gopi is one lucky girl...😊

Thank for taking the time to update *superwoman*.. you are on a roll.. and we aren't complaining.. 😃

Keep 'em coming Babe...I am anxious to read the next part but please take your time.. 😳

Thank you my angel and of course my "superagent" I have no idea where they are coming from lately, but I have so much free time in the evening these days it seems I am dreaming up Gohem moments.😆

Me a JM? Now that is one compliment I will take, because she is one of my favorite authors, and I can't wait to catch up on my fiction readings. No more Nursing books.

You know me and my love for Ahemji, I don't like the uptight guy so I always try to loosen him up a bit, besides he is a grown man, can't be mama's boy forever.

Thanks for boosting my confidence.

Originally posted by: Hetp

Today for d first time i read ur SS n i was completely shocked...Shock i mean i have no words to appreciate u...ur story is beyond d appreciation words mindblowing,awesome,excellent...it touch my heart...n today for the first time in my life i was actually crying while i was reading...Thank u my dear friend for writing such an awesome SS... i m desperately waiting for ur next update to come😊

Will u plz do a favour for me ...plz. plz ...when u will update d next part plz sent me a pm informing that u have posted d next update...Again plz😊

Thank you so much for reading and liking the SS. Your comments are very sweet and encouraging. I am still working on the next part, but got distracted by today's episode. Again thanks so much, I have no words to express my gratitude for your compliments, but they will definitely inspire me to write.

Originally posted by: X.Sisi94

AmazinG Update😃

LOved it

Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed the update.

Originally posted by: sks21

shilpa i loved it...wow amazing update
divya seems to be very sweet and will be a wonderful partner for jigar...
well cant wait to see how they will tell their feelings to each other
and gohem i just love them...i enjoyed the whole update
cant wait to read about the ceremony

Thanks so much Kavya. Divya is very sweet and very observant, she will be good for Jigar, he just needs to learn to trust his feelings and her. Ceremony in the next update.

Originally posted by: sweetsugar

Fabulous part Shilpa , Ahem is such a darling Hubby , the joy and happiness within him clearly come out as his changed behaviour ,it is due to those around him.

And finally VICTORY Comes with PATIENCE , Ahems proposal to gopi was soo heart touching and i am soo glad Gopi gave in this time 😃

Thank you so much Saba. Yes he is one bestowed husband who is trying to gain his wife's love and trust, and he has finally come up with one gift that she won't be able to resist and melt her heart. Gopi's dream of being called his wife is coming true. Glad you enjoyed the update.

Originally posted by: ANJ4

what a fantistic update ... love all the gohem scenes ...they are so cute

also love how close ahem n jigar have goten...

looking forward to the update

Thank you so much Anju. Glad you enjoyed the update.

thanks so much Shilpa ben for this superb update. It's so emotional. The last knot that Ahem has to untangle is Anita and Kinjal, right?

And for the next update i hope u can add a scene that Gopi craves for food as u mentioned before. You are a very talented writer...Way to go, meri behen

Originally posted by: navyab

Hey Shilpa...do you know why I like your SS so much...because it is so close the real characters in SNS...Ahem doubtful of himself when it regards Gopi...Gopi giving Ahem another chance without a hesitation...Koki trying to sound stern...& Gopi showing her ring...

You have written such a wonderful part where Ahem has redeemed himself of all the past doings...& giving so much to enjoy & lookforward in life 😉

Well everyone in the family has been aware of Ahem & Gopi...but one person has missed it ...so will she throw in a suprise????

The marriage & Godh Bharai...are the ceremonies which Im definetely waiting for...will Ahem also finally be content belonging to his love...currently he is happy to see Gopi is letting go herself & belonging to him...will he also do that & let her know about it 😉

Well the greed in me says...I need the next part 😛

Thank you so much Navyab. Your words mean a lot to me, because I always feel as though I may be changing the characters too much. This how I would like the future tracks to develop with slight change in each characters to make up for all the past deeds.

😆I was wondering who would catch my omission of mentioning Kinjal in last few updates, but I should have known you wouldn't miss it. There is a major tangle that needs to be taken care of once and for all, and yes Kinjal won't be able to resist one last shot, but in the end the surprise will be for her.

I promise you our Ahemji is ready to claim her and declare his claim to the whole world.😊

Originally posted by: Sandy914

oh.. Shilpa u caught me with surprizes today.. Ahem is going re-marry gopi, and Gopi!!! Accepted it.. finally happiness in their relationship..

But the biggest surprize is DIVYA.. interesting u know.. waiting for more Jiger & Divya's interaction, where it leads to..

Thank you for wonderfull update:))

Thank you so much Sandy. Believe me even I was caught by surprise when the thought of remarriage came up when I was plotting the update. I think Gopi needs this, this would put her doubts to rest and she can start trusting him again.

DIvya and Jigar are getting to know each other, he is having harder time trusting his feelings.

Thank you for your wonderful comments.

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

loved it

do continue

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: GopiAhem1

Your a really talented writer😛

Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: kamjal

Great update Shilpa and love the way you Ahem character is and glad Jigar is too moving on

Thanks so much Kamjal. It's great to see you back.

Originally posted by: hanaGoHem

wow it fabulous now there will be love trust in there life thanx for making jigar smile

Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed the update.