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ANJ4

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

great update... gopi still does not have a back bone ... she still let ahem puch her around.

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

Bravo S...Another fab update.. nobody can do scenes like you.. all these sequences seem so natural and flow so well.. 👏

Love the Nani conversation.. Ahem needed to understand his mothers psyche and in turn his own.. he is too cautious about delving into his feelings for Gopi ...👍🏼

As usual looking forward to more...😊

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sweety

@sweetsugar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

I absolutely love the way ur story is progressing , Ahem has now managed to create this impression on Gopi tat he was here only for the baby...ahem is gonna have a tough time dealing with this .Nani's convo with ahem totally made sense to me and hope he understands the true meaning behind it soon. I like how Ahem's approach of both firmness and calmness to get her acceptance of going back with them .

P.S : i hope there is no sofa in Ahem's room back in Rajkot 😆

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Naina2127
Reserved!

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Awww I loved this part! Oh stupid Aham, think before you say anything! Don't you think you've hurt Gopi enough? -_-

But glad to see that he's convinced her to return to the Modi Mansion. Let's see what awaits her there...hope he's a tad bit more sensitive to her feelings😆

Beautiful update though! Looking forward to the next part :)

Thank you so much Naina. 😆I know what you mean about Ahem, he does speak before thinking, but you have to excuse him, he is just waking up and now he not only have to win his wife's trust, he finds out he is going to be a father, the full imapct of the news haven't hit him yet, the baby is not yet real to him, all he knows is that he has to convince her to come with him, and he will use any means to do this.

Gopi is also confused she wants him to be happy, but at the same time she wants to do anything she can for her baby.

Originally posted by: tina_1234
nyc part..want more gohem plz

Thank you Tina. More Gohem but less dialouges in the next part.

Originally posted by: uamaz
Nice update ... God kinjal is still the same, hope her eyes pop out when she sees gopi and thus is unable to cast her evil eye towards her ...

Thank you so much! Kinjal is a spoiled brat, I am beginning to think there is no difference between her and Rashi. But as they say its hard to teach old dog new tricks, and unfortunately Kinjal has yet to learn to stop while she is ahead.

Originally posted by: Bloem123
Loved it Amazing Update Shilpa

Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed the update.

Originally posted by: kitty.pooni
Thanks for the update
hope gopi and ahem can sort things out
😆

Thank you so much. They will sort everythig out, but it will take time. Ahem has to restore her faith and trust

Originally posted by: NazmaJ
Gorgeous update!!

I love how things are progressing, hopefully now that Gopi is coming back home things will start getting resolved! Ahem seems really sincere even if he keeps putting his foot in it!!

Thank you so much Nazma. Ahem is not thinking straight yet, he is saying whatever comes to his mind to make her come back with him, but yes he is sincere, he loves her and he needs to prove it to her.

Originally posted by: famzii05
loving it!!! reeli nyc update! nani always does an excellent job!! 😊

Thank you so much Fahima. I love Nani and I hope we see more of her in the show.

Edited by sbp1971 - 13 years ago

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: GohamHungry
Wow ! Mindblowing update..Absolutely love our pregnant Gopi 😆

Thanks so much! Yep the girl does not know what to do with herself.😊

Originally posted by: aNsHu_tEjPaL
finally!!!!! u updated!!! yayyy!!!!

omg!!! this part was too good!!! my heart goes out for gopi...i feel so bad her!!!!! i loved how u showed both pov...it was wonderful!!! loved nani's talk w/ahem

can't wait to see gopi and ahem back home and dealing with each other!!! u have update sooon!!!

Thank you Anshu. I am glad you enjoyed the update. I just love Nani and her wise words to Ahem.

I will update soon, won't keep you waiting long.😉

Originally posted by: CHIKA784
Fantastic update as usual!
I feel so bad for Gopi,she always goes through so much,the poor thing

Thank you so much Chika. I know what you mean about Gopi, and I am going to go ahead and tell you now have tissues ready for future updates

P.S. You brought Tejas back in your DP pic.😆 What about Jigar?

Originally posted by: sweet cherry
loved it
poor gopi

Thank you so much!

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: soni4eva

superb update
cnt w8 2 read more plzz cont soon

fanx 4 da pm x

Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed the update.

Originally posted by: kaka.lg
thanks so much Shilpa for ur superb update...Yeah Hope Ahem gets his nani's word..At least i can see Koki is better than him in terms of showing her love to the family

Thank you so much Monyka. I am glad you enjoyed the update. I made Koki completely different from the show Koki, she is a true mother to Gopi, but she will also realized how her past treatment has effected Gopi

Originally posted by: varshu27
great update...ahem sure has the foot in the mouth disease...hope they resolve their issues before the baby comes...

Thank you so much Varshu. Poor Ahem, he can't help himself, he just doesn't know how to express himself, and when he tries, he puts his foot in it.

They will eventually come together as a couple.

Originally posted by: sks21
fantastic update...now that gopi is going back home hopefully ahem will be able to tell her what he feels...
cant wait for the next part

Thank you so much. Ahem will try to tell her, but will Gopi listen and believe? What should he do to prove his love?

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: ElizaKawa
another amazing story

Thank you so much Eliza. Its nice to see you back.

Originally posted by: rsk16
great ss.just caught up with it.god, seriously why is ahem so callous.lets see how he mends the mistake he has done .loved the update.

Thank you so much. I know even he doesn't realize how callous he can be, and he will have to work hard to correct his past mistakes.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: navyab
Loved it Shilpa...the emotions are coming out really well...it makes my heart clench at the feelings of Gopi...😊

Well for Ahem, whatever are his insecurities...I still want him to go thru the pain what Gopi is going thru...I want Gopi to harden up against him ...not respond to him...she can have fun with others in the family...she can say that she will stay in the guest room downstairs as she cannot walk up & down & not live with him in the room...godh barai ...yoga for pregnant women...but all where she turns down Ahem...need not be strong verbal words but she should not allow him to come closer to her...it can also make his heart clench that she is all ready to go ahead with pregnancy & life all alone when all he wants is to be there for her...exclusive 😉

Thank you so much Navyab. I will also warn you, have tissue ready for future updates.

I was thinking along the same line as you regarding them sharing a room. I was going to put her in the guest room, but changed my mind, I thought why not let him see what his insecurities has done, and how much distance its created between them. They are together yet not close. Let him experience some of what Gopi went thru, let him just stay awake and stare at her while she is sleeping, because she won't give him the time of the day. I also want know what it feel like when your existence is ignored.

It will frustrate and irritate him, but he deserves it, and he know it too.😉

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
nice part

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: shruthi2010
great update.
aham unable to show his love.
gopi has lost cause
and nani,
i love nani when she gives valuable advise.
loved this part.

Thank you so much Shruti.I think Gopi has done the best she could, now its upto Ahem to decide how he wants to proceed, but will she believe, will he be able to convince her that she belongs with him?

I love nani, hope to see more of her on the show.

Originally posted by: ANJ4
great update... gopi still does not have a back bone ... she still let ahem puch her around.

Thank you so much Anju. Agree Gopi is just too soft haearted, but at the moments she is thinking about her unborn baby only.

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 13 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: angelirebelli
Bravo S...Another fab update.. nobody can do scenes like you.. all these sequences seem so natural and flow so well.. 👏

Love the Nani conversation.. Ahem needed to understand his mothers psyche and in turn his own.. he is too cautious about delving into his feelings for Gopi ...👍🏼

As usual looking forward to more...😊

Hey Angel, Thank you so much! Hope the update helped you feel better.

I love Nani, I thought back to Nani's conversation with Koki during the Sandook track and thought what if Koki is the way she is because Nani was so hard on her and Koki had felt unloved, and this is why she took the same approach with Ahem yet she didn't hold her love back, but she gave too much. I think Ahem is realizing that whatever his mom thaught him was for his career, not for personal life, but he remains the same in all aspects of his life.

He will have to take the risk, if he doesn't want to loose her.

Originally posted by: sweetsugar
I absolutely love the way ur story is progressing , Ahem has now managed to create this impression on Gopi tat he was here only for the baby...ahem is gonna have a tough time dealing with this .Nani's convo with ahem totally made sense to me and hope he understands the true meaning behind it soon. I like how Ahem's approach of both firmness and calmness to get her acceptance of going back with them .
P.S : i hope there is no sofa in Ahem's room back in Rajkot 😆

Thank you so much Saba. I am so glad you enjoyed the update.

Ahem has put his foot in it this time, and he is going to have a hard time getting it out. He has set the stage, but it's not going to be easy as he seems to think.

Nani has got him thinking, so let's see what he does to win his love.😉

P.S. You will love the last paragraph of the update, I promise.😃