FF: A story of hearts part 9 pg47 (23/02)

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Kristin

@Ichangedit

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: famzii05
BEAUTIFUL start. u left me there with a gasp!! i was soo reserved. i think this FF is going to be amazng. Gopi pregnant and Ahems anger, oh no,, this is really sad, wonder what will happen. the emotions flowed through me as i read it, it was absolutely fantastic. luved it,
contine soon... add me to your pm when you update next, thanks

x.x.FAHIMA.x.x

Thanks so much for your lovely comment 😃

I feel a little worried now. Hope you will not be disappointed with the next part

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varshu27

@varshu27

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

lovely ff...i like the fact that u r giving us a glimpse of gohem down the line...though they have been happy for while...looks like ahem still doesnt trust gopi completely..

waiting for ur update

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kavya

@Kavya.S

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

wonderful ff...that's really sad y cant ahem listen to gopi...
cant wait to see what happens next...hope ahem gets to know the truth soon...

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Raunika

@rsk16

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

great start.god, seriously ahem's temper will really cause him loads of pain n suffering.lovely starting.do continue soon

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

That was brilliant , excellent start I am dying to know wot happens next I hope u update this weekend. Very well written.

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641345

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Wow...great start Khristin...continue soon, dear

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navyab

@navyab

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Good start...keep updating regulary...dnt take long breaks in between 😉

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

very interesting first part...

waiting for u to update

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Eva456

@Eva456

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

wooow!!wonderful!its just tooo good!plz continue soon

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_Precious_

@_Precious_

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Kristin, Danke schon. Superb FF ! ( I did 2 basic levels of German (more Austrian German), but forgot most since I m not using any more).

Ok, coming to your FF, you did a fantastic job dear. Even though you said its going to be a sad one, I never expected any break up in gohem relationship. Its really sad esp because Gopi is pregnant. Story is very intriguing now, who swapped the medicine? (I guess Urshi), but how Gopi can prove her innocence? Will Kokila survive? Please update soon.

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