FF: A story of hearts part 9 pg47 (23/02) - Page 3

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Aham angry, because he felt his wife had poisoned his mother, understandable initial reaction, but where would she get a poison that matches so closely the blood pressure tablets, when she is 24/7 at home most of the time, it has to be someone outside of the house that engineered this conspiracy to commit murder of Kokila, and who hates her more then anybody that's right Rashi. You mentioned Gopi has some good news she discovered the same day, possibly she's pregnant, it's a shame. Do continue Kristin.

Very nice Wow amazing start

Originally posted by: varshu27

lovely ff...i like the fact that u r giving us a glimpse of gohem down the line...though they have been happy for while...looks like ahem still doesnt trust gopi completely..

waiting for ur update

Thank you very much 😃

Originally posted by: sks21

wonderful ff...that's really sad y cant ahem listen to gopi...
cant wait to see what happens next...hope ahem gets to know the truth soon...

Thanks so much 😊
Well Ahem will not get to know the truth this soon .. but eventually they all will

@ rsk16: Yes it will cause him a great load of suffering. You will see in the next update 😉

@ taniks: Thanks so much. Am going to start writting the next part today. somaybe this evening I can upload or tomorrow

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@ navyab: I will try my best!! Thanks for your comment

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Originally posted by: _Precious_

Kristin, Danke schon. Superb FF ! ( I did 2 basic levels of German (more Austrian German), but forgot most since I m not using any more).

Ok, coming to your FF, you did a fantastic job dear. Even though you said its going to be a sad one, I never expected any break up in gohem relationship. Its really sad esp because Gopi is pregnant. Story is very intriguing now, who swapped the medicine? (I guess Urshi), but how Gopi can prove her innocence? Will Kokila survive? Please update soon.

Sehr gut!!

Well of course gopi will survive. I couldn't kill off my heroine!! Well I haven't decided who did it yet. But Urshi is one possibilty. Really glad you liked it, dear 😃 Thanks for commenting

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Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms

Aham angry, because he felt his wife had poisoned his mother, understandable initial reaction, but where would she get a poison that matches so closely the blood pressure tablets, when she is 24/7 at home most of the time, it has to be someone outside of the house that engineered this conspiracy to commit murder of Kokila, and who hates her more then anybody that's right Rashi. You mentioned Gopi has some good news she discovered the same day, possibly she's pregnant, it's a shame. Do continue Kristin.

Kristin, I had written an OS closely resembling your first chapter, but the way I wrote my OS is definitely not how you are going to end your story because you will definitely bring Goham together again right?...😉 but in mine that's not the case, because I was writing it for a male friend who liked Gopi...😆, do read mine though...here it is https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/saath-nibhaana-saathiya/1685129/os-shoaib-and-gopi-sitting-in-a-tree

Thanks so much Nafisa for your lovely comment. Well its true Gopi couldn't have done it. First technically and than emotionally. She wouldn't be able to do such an evil deed. However the revelation of the real culprit will have to wait for a while. To be honest still have to decide myself, who it will be 😆

I read your OS. and really liked it. But I don't intent to send of Gopi with a new partner 😃