FF- SHATTERED MEMORIES (updated)Part20 - Page 62 - Page 3

Come on, why did you stop so abruptly. I thought I was going to read about the meeting of Ahem and Gopi when Gopi was walking away from the children. Now you made me wait for your next update impatiently. So that 'second' was the turning point of Gohem's life. This story is very intriguing dear. Pls update soon.

Really interesting update. I love how you're taking everything so gently and taking the time to develop the story.

Can't wait to read more!!

nice one.. looking forward to the next update

nice update...waiting for the next one...

Loved it very much,please pm me when u update!😳,ps im worried now after this,Do not get involved in other's matters. You may regret it later".

Originally posted by: rsk16

very nice start.lovely intro.waiting for gopi's entrance.plz do continue soon.love ahem here

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Originally posted by: sks21

that was amazing...very good start
waiting for gopi's entry...
i liked it a lot
update soon

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Originally posted by: Bloem123

Realy nice start Cant wait to read the next part~!

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Originally posted by: _Precious_

Great start for a good FF. Loved Ahem's description and can't wait for the entrance of Gopi. Please update soon.

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Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

the first part was nice

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