FF- SHATTERED MEMORIES (updated)Part20 - Page 62 - Page 3

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_Precious_

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Posted: 13 years ago

Come on, why did you stop so abruptly. I thought I was going to read about the meeting of Ahem and Gopi when Gopi was walking away from the children. Now you made me wait for your next update impatiently. So that 'second' was the turning point of Gohem's life. This story is very intriguing dear. Pls update soon.

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Nazma

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Posted: 13 years ago

Really interesting update. I love how you're taking everything so gently and taking the time to develop the story.

Can't wait to read more!!

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice one.. looking forward to the next update

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kavya

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice update...waiting for the next one...

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved it very much,please pm me when u update!😳,ps im worried now after this,Do not get involved in other's matters. You may regret it later".

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gohem123

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rsk16
very nice start.lovely intro.waiting for gopi's entrance.plz do continue soon.love ahem here

Thank you for loving and liking my story...

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gohem123

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sks21
that was amazing...very good start
waiting for gopi's entry...
i liked it a lot
update soon

Thank you for the wonderful comments...

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gohem123

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Bloem123
Realy nice start Cant wait to read the next part~!

Thank you for liking my story..

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gohem123

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: _Precious_
Great start for a good FF. Loved Ahem's description and can't wait for the entrance of Gopi. Please update soon.

Thank you so much...

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gohem123

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
the first part was nice

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