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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update chicka .and yes the song is awesome i had used the same song in my ss but u made it come to life by describing every line with meaning. Beautiful.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Romantic Ahem is what we are missing in SNS...liked the update 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update Chika!!!

Loved Jigar's little speech before asking Rashi to marry him. So cute and romantic. And thank you for translating the song into english as well😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update. just loved gohem dance. keep more coming next time.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aawhhh Jigar's speech was soo sweet, hes soo in lovee...❤️
absolutely loved gopi and ahems dance scene it was woow..wonderful song choice..😍

Great Work..i really cant wait for the next part!!⭐️

Faisa xx
Edited by faayey - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hii Saathians,

Sorry this update has been quite late,its just i need to think of some romantic moments for Raji and Gohem both,believe me its hard,much easier to think and much harder to write😆 Okay so enough of my bakwaas (nonsence),here's the LONG update😉
Song of the update,Jalebi bai,you'll get why as you read on😉
PART 6:

The next day:

Gopi arrived at Modi industries in a wonderful mood,she was very happy,everything was going so well in her life thanks to kanhaji, she had a wonderful family who loved her and treated her like ther own daughter, she had great friends and a great job with a lovely boss. She was in a chirpy mood however Ahem was not. Gopi was called to Ahem's cabin😃

"Ahem sir,you called me?"

"Gopi what is this?"

"Sir,this is the file for Ajay production group"

"Exactly,I told you yesterday to prepare blueprints and to send these off to Ajay productions as soon as possible,why are they not sent yet!?,its been 3 days and Mr Ajay Patel just rang me for an explanation,your slacking on your work Gopi,why!?"

"Ahem sir,you told me to give the Ajay productions file on Friday,all my work was due in than" Gopi asked confused,she didn't like Ahem in a bad mood but he was starting to make her cross,she never did anything wrong.

Ahem got up in anger and went close to Gopi,he turned away,grunted,put his hands on his hip and said

"Gopi,you talk so much and do less work"

"Huh!,kya!?,what sir!?,I talk a lot,argh hmmm!" and with that Gopi grabbed the fle,huffed and stormed outside to her cabin leaving an amused Ahem chuckling.😡

"Patanay apne aap ko kya samaj beta hai,hmm!" (I don't know what he thinks of himself,phhst"

"Gopi dear,Are you alright?,you seem mad?" Malika's soothing voice calmed a frustrated Gopi.

"Arred Malika,look,Ahem sir shouted at me and said that I talk so much,how do I talk so much?,hmm how can he say that?,and than he told me that my work was uncomplete when he himself told me that the work should be completed by Friday,stupid mr Patel and his Ajay company!" huffed Gopi.

"Gopi,omg I've never seen you talk so much like this,its quite funny,Hmm so now what are you going to do?"

"Hmm Ahem sir said I talk a lot na?,now im not going to talk to him at all!"

"Gopi,how are you going to do that?,Ahem sir is the boss,you have to talk to him!"

"Well than he'll have to make me,what an egoistic,argh he makes me mad,Malika,im gong to finish my work,did you need anything?"

"Yes Gopi,voh Ahem sir told me to get the Patala Industries from you"

"Argh Ahem sir,he'll never leave me alone,always burdens me with work" said Gopi mischeviously before biting her tongue, Malika and Gopi both laughed and got back to work.😳

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"Mummy,Mummy mummy mummy,im so happy,Jigarji,he proposed to me yesterday,he told me he loved me and we got engaged!" Raash screamed,she was overjoyed,she was engaged and that to to the love of her life,Jigarji.😳

"Oh meri dikri,congratiolations my sweet Raashi dikra but you never invited your own mother to your engagement!,no no this is not right,we need to have a proper engagement,wait does Jigari's mother know,who knows about this engagement dikri?" asked an anxious Urmila,she was overjoued with happiness for her sweet daughter but what about Jigarji's parants?,how would they feel about Raashi?

"Arreh mummy,don't worry,Jigar ji promised me he's bringing them over at 4:00pm today,its going to be excellent,there going to ask for my hand in marriage,mummy there really nice people,im going to go call Jigarji right now!?

"Arreh dikri,your fathers not here,how can i?"

"Mummy don't worry,everything will be fine,Gopi will come home early to help with the preparations aswell,I have to tell my sweet sister my engagement don't I,my marriage,mummy im just so happy", Raashi ran to her room excited,jumped on the bed and started to call Jigar.

RING RING..

"Ja shri Krishna,Jigarji!?" said a happy and excited Raashi,

"Jai shri Krishna my love,how are you?,excited,me and my family are coming over today at 4 to ask for your hand,your not going to reject me are you"? said a smiling Jigar,he was ecstatic!😳

"Jigarji,ofcourse im not going to reject you,why would I,I lov.."

Jigar immediately stood up from the bed and Raashi bit her lip,"oh crap!" she thought.

"Raashi,Raashi what were you going to say!"

"Jigarji,voh umm nothng,I..me you know I jabber nonsense"

"Raashi!,tell me say it once"

"Okay Jigarji, I love..i love"

"Tell me,tell me Raashi"

"Jalebi bai!" Raashi started laughing loudly and Jigar started to whine.😆

"Raashi,not fair,that's cheating,come on,I know how much you love me,tell me na?,please"

Raashi started to blush and went quiet.

"Raashi,Raashi no fair,don't you dare blush,im not near you to see your beautiful blush so you can't without my permission"

"Jigarji" said Raashi teasingly.

"Raashi, I love you"😍

"Jigarji,I love..i love Sharukh Khan",🤣Raashi laughed,cut the call and bit her lip,today was going to be a wonderful day and she quickly got ready,she needed to collect her sweet sister and tell her about Jigarji's marriage proposal.

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Gopi had completed her work,she was watching the clock like an hawk,Ahem had still not called her to his cabin.

"I wonder if his moodswings are finished,hmm" and decided to go and give m her completed Ajay productions file.

Gopi knocked on Ahem's door and Ahem invited her in, he was looking at a file sitting on his black chair and peeked up at Gopi's face.What he saw almost made him laugh out loud,she looked so cute angry,her mouth was pouted and her eyebrows were furrowed,she handed him the file without a word and was about to leave.

"Gopi"

Gopi stopped in her tracks and looked at Ahem,she foled her arms and flicked her hair to one side.Ahem smiled inwardly,she looked so cute.

"Have you completed the file?"

Gopi just nodded her head and looked away,she could feel Ahem's gaze on her and wanted to un away.

"Gopi,I asked you a question,I didn't ask for a nod like I would ask a dog"

Gopi furiously looked at Ahem,'Did he just call me a dog!?"🤪

Ahem started to laugh at Gopi's image,she looked furious,he was laughing so hard and Gopi was about to leave when he pulled her close to him,they had an eyelock and Gopi got out of his grasp,he was getting slightly annoyed now.

"Gopi,why are you not talking to me?"

Gopi blatantly ignored him again.She was getting on his last nerve now.

"GOPI,If you don't awnser me now,it won't be good for you!"

Gopi held out her notebook and wrote a note saying

"You said I talk to much therefore I am now not talking!"

Ahem smiled inwardly,this was so hilarious and cute but why was he no angry at her,she was just a HOT secretary,nothing more,if anyone else was in her place,he would have killed them there and than for giving him so much attitude. Just than a knock on the door interrupted his thoughts and he saw Raashi.😛

"Jai Shri Krishna Ahem jiju,voh,I mean Ahem sir,sorry voh,by accident" said a nervous and blushing Raashi,'what the hell,how could she say that,god knows what he's going to think about me now!'😉

Gopi turned around to face Raashi, she was completely confused,she knew Jigarji loved Raash but jiju,that was just funny ,Ahem was watching Gopi's facial expressions,he found this to funny.

Edited by CHIKA784 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yaar this is soo good!
I love it! Please continue!
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Posted: 13 years ago
That is sooo good. Please continue.

PS. How do you put music to updates. Can you help me. Am having problems and now my emoticons have frozen.
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was sooo goood, please update soon, I'm not gonna write anymore as my story sounds so crap, I love urs xx
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Xarina

That is sooo good. Please continue.

PS. How do you put music to updates. Can you help me. Am having problems and now my emoticons have frozen.


Hi😛
Im not sure how to put music in updates,i want to do that but i don't know how so i just hyperlink the song link and than viewers can click on the music link and listen to in this case Jalebi bai😉

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