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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: NazmaJ
Great update Chika!!!

I'm loving the development!! The relationship between Rashi and Gopi is so sweet!! And Urmila is lovely!!

Thanks for the PM!!

Thanks for the lovely comment Najma😃

Glad your liking the story!

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: _Precious_
It was a great update Chika. Rashi's dress is little exposing but Gopi's suit is gorgeous. So both Modi boys fell for Shaw girls. Eagerly waiting to know how the party will go on with two hot boys with their hot lovers.

Thank you,the party's going to be something!😉

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-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Part 5:

Ahem and Gopi were lost I each other's eye's,staring at each other with a sparkle in their eye's, Gopi's eye's twinkled as her.. I mean sir,I mean .. Ahem sir was staring at her admring her beauty. They were lost in eachother's eye's,both searching for something wth a twinkle,a sparkle making them furiousl blush.😳

"Bai,can you handle it,im going to do it now!" screamed an excited Jigar,Ahem looked at Jigar coming out of his daydream,nodded his head and wished his brother luck,today was going to be the best day in his life Ahem hoped.

The dance music started, Mr Khurana had asked Gopi for a dance,she seemed uncomfortable,she didn't want to dance but ervously shook her head,she was confused and nervous, Ahem had sensed her discomfort and decided to let her dance for only ONE song..he wouldn't have,no he wouldn't let Gopi dance with anyone except him.

The song started and Mr Singhania put his hand around Gopi's back,Gopi's eye's widened with surprise and looked uncomfortable,Ahem's temper was slowly increasing and he balled his hands into fists.

What is mr Singhania doing?,can he not realise Gopi is feeling uncomfortable?😡

Ahem immediately marched towards the duo,tapped Mr Singhania's shoulder and asked if he could have the last dance.

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Jigar had taken Raashi outside the hotel into a personal gazebo decorated beautifully with lights that shimmered and reflected into Raashi's eye's,she looked like a perfect sight and Jigar was smiling like mad. Raashi was happy and surprised.
"Jigarji,yeh saab?,all this,its wonderful" Raashi sqealed in delight,it was amazing,it looked so beautiful.

"Jigarji..say something"

"Raashi, since the day you've entered my life I have got nothing but happiness, I don't know how,I don't know when but slowly you entered my heart and now I've become a deewana,I've fallen in love with you Raashi,I can't magine a daw without you Raashi, really love you so much and im hoping you love me aswell, Raash today is the biggest day of my life,the biggest decision of my life, Raashi, will you marry me?

Raashi broke into tears,her face reflected happiness,shock,peace and she was over the moon with delight!

"Yes Jigarji,yes!"

Ahem held Gopi's hand and swifted her with the music,both Ahem and Gopi looked into each other's eye's,it was perfect.

Teri meri, meri teri
Prem kahani hai mushkil

(Yours and mine, mine and yours, love story is difficult,
can't tell it in two words,)

Ahem silently puts his hands on Gopi's hips and sways with her not moving his gaze from her chocolate-brown eye's.

Do lafzoon mein yeh
Bayaan na ho paye

This story of a girl and a boy is new,
can't express it in two words..

Gopi puts her hand on top of Ahem's shoulder and he tightens his grip on her.

Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Ik dooje se hue juda Jab ik dooje ke liye bane

Yours and mine, mine and yours, love story is difficult,
can't tell it in two words,
Separated from each other when made for each other..

Ahem and Gopi are in La-La Land,all of Ahem's office are watching and smiling looking at the latest developments

Tumse dil jo lagaya toh jahaan maine paaya
Kabhi socha na tha yoon meelon door hoga saaya
Kyun khuda tune mujhe aisa khwaab dikhaya
Jab haqeeqat mein use todna tha
When I loved you, I got the world,
but never thought (even) your shadow will be miles away,
O god why you gave me such a dream,
when you had to break it in reality..

Ahem twists Gopi and she is pulled back,Ahem than pulls her back into his arms.

Ik dooje se hue judaa, jab ik dooje ke liye bane
Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh Bayaan na ho paaye

Teri meri baaton ka har lamha sabse anjaana,
do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Every moment of your and my talks is unknown to all else
can't express it in two words..

Gopi looks longingly into Ahem's eye's as he circles around her and bends his knee's.

Har ehsaas mein tu hai har ik yaad mein tera afsaana
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

You're in every feeling, and your story in every memory
can't express it in words.Ahem kissed Gopi's fingers and Gopi blushes and turns crimson.

The song stops and Gopi runs out of the hall,Ahem chases after her and they both have an eyelock.

Edited by CHIKA784 - 13 years ago

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Nazma

@NazmaJ

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

A lovely if very short update!!!

Love seeing GoHem being romantic!!!!

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Munni

@munnihyderabad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

chika lovely update... but a short one...

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

luvly update relii romantic

plzz cont soon fanx 4 da pm x

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Fahima

@famzii05

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

loved it!
that was so romantic!
aww jigar is such a sweety. and ahem's jealousy is so good to see!!
and the song fit perfectly into this update!
lovely...update soon!