FF: Hote Hote Pyaar Hogaya Ch19 - Pg72 (31/3/13)

swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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A superb update Nazma.

Ahem playing the bigger brother carefully and sensibly as he should be doing. He knows that there is something bothering Jigar. At the same time he is subconsciously developing a relationship and valuing Gopi's words.

Looking forward to the next update.

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shaina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

THis is not fair nazmaa.

u are making me like ahem in ur ff...

i like it the way he is bulding relations and supporting jigar..

all the forum members dreams come true in ur ff..

thanks for the ff..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Very nice Update

love your writting Nazma

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_Precious_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

This is great update Nazma. I love the way Ahem tries to talk to Jigar. Though there is no romance in this chapter I liked the building up of relationships. Characterisation of Ahem is too good. Well done.

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Nazma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: sbp1971
Another great part Nazma, I like how you've changed the whole thing and wrote it as it should have happened. Keep up the good work.

Thanks Shilpa.

I'm having to go back and rewatch old episodes decideing what to change and keep the same.

Obviously in the show Rashi was already exposed to Jigar at least, now I'm the one dragging it out.

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Nazma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: swasthi
A superb update Nazma.

Ahem playing the bigger brother carefully and sensibly as he should be doing. He knows that there is something bothering Jigar. At the same time he is subconsciously developing a relationship and valuing Gopi's words.

Looking forward to the next update.

Thanks Swasthi.

Yeah hopefully I'm rounding out his character and developing a fuller character for him.

I wanted to have GoHem developing a closeness naturally before they become a little more romantic and before certain truths come into play.

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Nazma

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

THis is not fair nazmaa.

u are making me like ahem in ur ff...

i like it the way he is bulding relations and supporting jigar..

all the forum members dreams come true in ur ff..

thanks for the ff..

Thanks Shaina!

The ultimate aim is to make everyone fall in love with Ahem!!

Hopefully I can try and make more dreams come true soon!!

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-GayabCat-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

cha 1 and 2 read..
fantastic job

one thing bugging me
I cant hit the like button as it not letting me

i love the 1st two chapters.
will comment later for cha 3 need to read it

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Nazma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: ayesha_78
cha 1 and 2 read..
fantastic job

one thing bugging me
I cant hit the like button as it not letting me

i love the 1st two chapters.
will comment later for cha 3 need to read it

Thankyou Ayesha!!

Never mind about the like button, as long as I know you read it I'm happy.

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-GayabCat-

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Posted: 13 years ago

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