FF: Hote Hote Pyaar Hogaya Ch19 - Pg72 (31/3/13) - Page 31

Originally posted by: faayey

Great update Nazma, i really love the way Koki explained it all to ahem..brilliantly written, we know now that he will take every measure to look after and make gopi happy!!!

Awesome work!!!

Originally posted by: rsk16

great update.lovely convo b/w koki-ahem.plz do update soon

Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms

I have just read Chapter 8, I love Aham wanting to stay inside with Gopi, but unlike the serial he didn't tell everyone not to set off fireworks, rather he is going to leave them to do that, as it gives him an opportunity to be alone with Gopi in the house, I love the manoeuvring of Gopi when he said last time a firework came in by accident to burn your hand, so it's better I come in the kitchen too, rather then I want to spend time with you, that is so Aham. Jigar meanwhile is still doing detective work on the duo and his also called Sonal and her mum to the house to make the evil duo talk more so he has a complete dossier on the whole matter, awesome job with the fan fic Nazma...😊

Originally posted by: moksha89

I had the urge to read all of it in one sitting..and it was so good! I swear, the episodes could legitimately gone this route as well. eagerly awaiting all the other follies which aham will be made of aware of next & to see how he slowly bridges the distance between him and gopi. also, loving how you made the parallel issues flow smoothly in between! 😊

Originally posted by: navithareddy

nice going najma m enjoying while reading u make my saturday and sunday thank u pls update soon cant wait.

Originally posted by: _Precious_

nice update Nazma. Loved the way Kokila revealed the Urshi kalakaries to Ahem and made him realise the teej incident by himself. I am sure Ahem will make up for his past actions by loving Gopi deeply.