FF: Hote Hote Pyaar Hogaya Ch19 - Pg72 (31/3/13) - Page 29

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Posted: 13 years ago
RESERVED!
That was very well-wrtten najma and it was a very lovely pdare,loving the relationship between Koki-Ahem!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
i think that you are hard hearted like aham dikra.
you stopped again when i wanted the story to continue.
excellent update nazma. loved the mother son convo. finally aham realized his mistake. i will be good girl and wait for the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow nazma it was amazing, brilliant...koki and ahem's convo is just awesome
loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: taniks

Very nicely done this exposure of misunderstandings , I love how koki very cleverly let ahem confess wot he always knew in his heart but didn't acknowledge that gopi is essentially good .the revelation of past deeds were not a bombardment of accusations , ur kokila is very sharp and a great tactition, she knows exactly how handle her son without resorting to emotion blackmail. I admire the way you left room for ahem to find out on his own abt the other kalakaries ,now dat the doors and windows of his mind are open to gopis true nature .great update nazma ,beautifully done scene between koki and ahem

Aww thankyou!!
I did feel like I maybe rushed through this, even though I used a whole chapter!
I needed Koki to show that she realised she was harsh at the beginning and also Ahem needed to make some realisations for himself.
Thankyou for your loely words as usual!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tina_1234

very nyc [art...ahem make her urs

Thanks Tina!!
Ahem will be working on romancing Gopi.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: navyab

enjoyed...is the word...Ahem knows Gopi much better...so his actual work starts now !!!!

Thanks Navya!!
Now that he knows the main things he can progress!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

wow Nazma i loved this update... koki and ahem wow such a warm scene,,, now that all revealations are made ... we can expect more romantic scenes... My dil goes ummm ummm... (song from Salam Namasthe... just heard it)

waiting for next update ... to see jigars' plan

Thankyou Munni!!
Hopefully the romance will soon start, which means I'll hae to concentrate because I'm rubbish at writing romance!!
Jigar and Hetal were almost going to have their own mother son moment but I decided to leave them out of it!!
His plan should be made clear soon, although it's not as dramatic as Jigar made out!! (Yeah I'm blaming him!)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

great update...

finally aham gets to know some truth...
loved the part

Thanks!!
I thought it was time he waas put in the know!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rsshree

eventough its full of kokki and aham scenes , i like it. great job

pls continue👏

Thankyou!!
I'm glad that the Koki Ahem overload didn't put you off!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: d-luna88

Great update Nazma!!!!

I loved it and that was of course because of the overdose koki in it😉 gosh I am a fanatic I knew it. It was great to see that koki revealed the truth to ahem and knew how he would react. Also it was good to see that she regreted to be so hard on her in the beginning and that she now is sure that urshi were involved in everything that went wrong. Great that she made ahem say that he is commited to gopi and the marriage and will take care of her now. Ahem realising about the breaking of the vast was also great. It must have wormed him that his wife broke the vast after all. Really great!!! Can't wait for the next part😃

Thankyou Kristin!!
I did think you may enjoy the Kokiness!!
Koki knows her son well!! Well Koki used to be majorly intelligent and know everythign that went on so I made her like that again.
Oh yeah we all need to hear Ahem say he's committed!!
While I was writing this it came into my head that now was as good a time as any to let the truth out about the fast!! Ahem figured it out himself anyway!!

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